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| Ruby | 5th November 2010 - 01:32 AM Post #41 |
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Wow, you sure read that fast! I was almost afraid to read your review for fear of upsetting you because of what happened to Jeice. |
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| peggs9 | 14th November 2010 - 04:25 PM Post #42 |
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no i wouldn't get mad, id just be sad if he died, like i was when he died in the show . seems like hes not the only one in bad shape at the moment. i like how you can see the perspective of all the people back on friezas ship, it makes the action even more exciting it was a great chapter. it was a pretty big twist, this idea of rian becoming some sought of dragon spirit. hopefully she can beat those ghost monks now... they're pretty indestructible aren't they? i think they're a really good ide for a character design. and hopefully she can kill frieza though somehow i think getting rid of frieza wont be that easy. its good to see him losing for once though!
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| Ruby | 15th November 2010 - 04:30 AM Post #43 |
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You're right. Getting rid of Freeza won't be easy at all. Nothing involving him ever is. I like to show Freeza taking damage once in a while in order to show just how rough a battle really is. If Freeza is getting beaten up then the reader knows this isn't an average fight. Of course Freeza hasn't had time to transform himself or anything, but still, showing him getting kicked around does show how powerful his opponents are. |
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| peggs9 | 29th November 2010 - 06:22 AM Post #44 |
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you know i ws thinking, i would like to know some history about this concept of azulong, rians dragon spirit.i think it would be really interesting to know how it came about. i liked the detail tht went into describing rians injuries and everyones reaction to her transformation. and salza showing up was really interesting as well. he's such a snotty bastard isnt he? Its very suspensful, i wonder whats going to happen to them all... |
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| Ruby | 30th November 2010 - 01:43 AM Post #45 |
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I think I'll create a thread in the DBZ fan characters section to explain the history of Azulong for you, peggs. Also, there's only two chapters left in this story! I'm curious about something, peggs. Would you be interested in the side story that goes along with this about Raditz's children? If so, I may start that one once this one is finished. |
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| peggs9 | 30th November 2010 - 04:51 AM Post #46 |
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cool, i shall go read that now, i ws very curious about it and yes i'd like to hear the side story about raditz. i think that would be a good choice for your next fic to put up eeeeeek 2 chapters to go? wow i can't believe this epic story is coming to a close well part one of it anyway. and to think theres sequels as well, you work very hard on it hey? it pays off, its very creative, lots of original ideas and interesting plots |
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| peggs9 | 14th December 2010 - 08:24 AM Post #47 |
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now that i've had time to catch up on reading your story,its time for the last review to part one i like how there was lots of attention to frieza's thoughts about rian. its interesting to see him afraid and losing his cool because thats what gradually happened in dragonball z when he discovere that super saiyans wer a possibility, and later that they were a reality. its always good to see his true side. despite being a powerful overlord of part of the universe he is really just a weak coward deep down, rian sounds pretty awesome in her super saiyan state, i appreciate this idea of an underdeveloped super saiyan too because i always felt like saiyans are a bit ovverpowered to the point of being ridiculous at times, they need to have some flaws i was happy jeice didn't die,but i feel so sorry for him now that rian is gone. i dont want him to be lonely its a nice twist how goku has entered the story!looking forward to part two well done
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. seems like hes not the only one in bad shape at the moment. i like how you can see the perspective of all the people back on friezas ship, it makes the action even more exciting

12:41 AM Jul 11