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Topic Started: 28th June 2010 - 07:14 PM (313 Views)
Ruby
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Stuck in the 80s
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I'd appreciate some feedback on my DB poems if you would please be so kind.

And since my old, whacked out computer still isn't working for posting links, AntiMew, would you please put one up for my poem section? I hope I'm not causing trouble by asking for assitance on that. If I could make the darn thing work for that, I'd do it myself.
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Anti
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I got nuffin'.
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Does copy & pasting work for you? If you copy and paste the link and put one of these tags either side of it, that'll work.
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[url]copied.address.com[/url]
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dragonsfire295
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do not meddle in the affairs of dragons for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. Taekwondo fighter.
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If I said it once I said it a thousand times your poems are awesome
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Yellow Mew
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Ah yes, my beautiful Ruby. Your work never ceases to amaze me. I of course couldn't write poetry to save my life! You be sure to save your "Inferno's Desire" poem for the contest, okay? I know you'll win with that one for sure!
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peggs9
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I think Cracked Foe Glass and Heart Shaped Tomb were the best ones. Cracked Foe Glass had very nice imagery with the glass and stuff, and Heart Shaped Tomb was quite tragic and wistful. Well done
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Kiyza
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The Cracked Foe Glass poem was rather nicely done. Plenty of figurative language. It almost makes me wish I had bothered to watch GT... The others were rather good as well, but the first one is my favorite.

Makes me wish I was good at anything other than Haiku. I'd love to do something for Piccolo. :/
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