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| Ruby | 6th October 2010 - 01:12 AM Post #21 |
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....... Well, this certainly is the most well written, thought out, and well put together Vegeta fic I've ever read...but I'm beginning to get very worried about Vegeta now. I know he's strong enough that I could see him somehow make his way out of such a situation, but I also know that his emotional suffering might just be the thing that could break him. If Vegeta dies I'm going to cry and be very, very sad. I do hope you won't kill him off, peggs...
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| peggs9 | 6th October 2010 - 05:40 AM Post #22 |
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It's like Kami splitting apart from Piccolo with a new being formed from different emotions and memories, only this time with Vegeta instead. yes, it is kind of like that. kind of. but its also kind of different, i cant explain it yet or i'll give it away! I do hope you won't kill him off, peggs... this is not part of my plan so far. there shall be some very sad and creepy times ahead, and a lot of madness and shenanigans, but i don't think i'll kill him off. it would hurt me too much! but i am not going to reveal what happens in the end until the end and that is because... i don't know what happens yet myself. hehe! its nice that you think this story is well written and thoughtout. one of my favourite authors said the same thing the other day so you guys have made me very happy:) |
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| rosefairy0 | 6th October 2010 - 12:07 PM Post #23 |
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wow. Vegeta is quite in a pickle isn't he. Poor Vegeta, he has so many promblems Will he ever get better? I feel bad for him. Bulma's not gonna fall for that other Vegeta person is she, NO she can't, can she?! I HAVE TO KNOW! Update soon please! I really hope thing get better for Vegeta
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| peggs9 | 8th October 2010 - 06:08 AM Post #24 |
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you ahall see rose, you shall see... i can't revel twhat is going to happen yet because that will spoil the story. gotta kepe the readers in suspense i will try to update tomoro. riht now i am drunk. sorry god im going to regret posting this somthime in the very near future.... |
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| peggs9 | 8th October 2010 - 06:25 AM Post #25 |
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wht i meant to say was, thankyou heaps for your review, its always nice to get some encouragement but i still cannot gve away the storyall i can say bout the other vegeta is tat he is going to cause LOTS of trouble. and i mean lots. t's up to bulma and the gang to outsmart him
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| rosefairy0 | 9th October 2010 - 07:23 AM Post #26 |
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I read the chapter, I can't believe Bulma thought it was Vegeta. Well, she'll figure out soon write, she is a scientist, ooooooooooh, or Bra can be the first to figure out her daddy, that would be cute father daughter relationship, then it changes cause that's not Vegeta lol. But then no one believe's her. Or maybe Trunks because they're both men and he's lived with his father for so long. I don't know. JUST UPDATE SOON OKAY!!!!
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| Ruby | 9th October 2010 - 01:26 PM Post #27 |
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Ah yes, good ole Bulma, doing what she does best-being a bitch. I bet Bra will be the first to see that something isn't right. Young children like that usually just know that kinda stuff right away. |
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| rosefairy0 | 9th October 2010 - 02:04 PM Post #28 |
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I agree with that Ruby! Plus she has that father daughter relationship with him, and it seems to be really strong. trunks is starting to hate his dad so there's a chance he may not care enough to notice. |
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| peggs9 | 9th October 2010 - 05:55 PM Post #29 |
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who knows guys, you may just be right as to whether bulma will figure it out, well, i dont know. she is a scientist, but she seems to be really clueless about everything else. i am still deciding about all these matters myself its not so much that trunks hates his dad i guess, ts just tht he's very spoiled and gets sneaky/manipulative and angry when he doesnt get his way, like he did when he was a kid |
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| rosefairy0 | 9th October 2010 - 06:28 PM Post #30 |
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lol yeah, I guess that is it isn't it. trunks is just a little brat Just as Vegeta call's him. lol
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| rosefairy0 | 17th October 2010 - 07:25 AM Post #31 |
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wow, nice chapter. Vegeta's having a real hard time telling what's real and what's not huh.
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| Ruby | 19th October 2010 - 01:26 AM Post #32 |
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Oh my God, was that ever funny! Recoome naked with a pink shower cap covering his privates! lol Wow, excellent job. It's nice to see Vegeta and Jeice having some good times together in the past. And I just bet Zarbon thought it was 'divine'! Wonder if he was taking pictures for himself when Recoome wasn't looking. I also liked Jeice singing. I could so see that as something he'd do. Jeice was meant to be a rock star! He's so much fun. I love stories with him in them. |
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| peggs9 | 29th October 2010 - 09:44 PM Post #33 |
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stealing people's portable internets i really miss my net!thanks for the reviews guys! yes rose, he is having a very difficult time at the moment with figuring out what the hell is happening, but its only going to get more confusing for him. i really want to update my story, but its on my home computer ![]() i had a lot of fun writing this part ruby even though the ginyus can be pretty evil in this fic i also want them to have some funny moments, cause after all, they were quite ridiculous i reckon jeice would have made an awesome rock star fun fact about zarbon, that you might already know but anyway- his name means pomelo or something, which is fruit. hehe... |
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| Ruby | 8th November 2010 - 03:56 PM Post #34 |
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This story is the best Vegeta fanfic I've ever read. You know I bet you could be a real professional published author if you wanted to, peggs. I've already got you listed as one of my favorite authors on my FFN profile, you know. ![]() Perhaps that doctor is good after all? I'm not sure, but this is an amazing story! How true to Vegeta's charecter that he would be stubborn and not want the doctor's help. ...That doctor is trying to help, right? I guess you couldn't tell or it would spoil things. Oh well, that's okay. I like the suspense. Vegeta and Jeice seem to have an odd relationship going. I like it. They make a fun team when they're together like that. ![]() I'm so happy to see Raditz in the story atlast. Man, Vegeta is going to go nuts on that pill Raditz gave him. It would be so funny if while he was high, he started doing poses with Jeice!
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| peggs9 | 14th November 2010 - 12:30 AM Post #35 |
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thank you for all your compliments, i really appreciate them ruby maybe some day i'll try to write a book, perhaps the story that 'hope leaves' is based off, or that other story i made up and haven't finished...i don't want to give too much away bout the doctor, i like to leave a bit of suspense like you said, but yeh, Vegeta is certainly going to mke things difficult for himself in the future. i know its strange, but Vegeta and Jeice have a really weird love/hate relationship in this story. you gave me a good idea, maybe vegeta and raditz should do poses and stuff at some point in the story when they're drunk or something |
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| Ruby | 29th November 2010 - 02:21 AM Post #36 |
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I really like this last update. Once again the amount of detail is flawless. The scene where everyone at the palace is slaughtered is very vivid and horrific. Luckily, that's the way I like it. It wouldn't be true DBZ without bloody scenes like that, and I've sat through enough horror films that I can stomach anything.I never thought about the Captain scalping someone like that before. It's a very original idea and shows that you put a lot of thought into what you write. Other fanfics I've read only have the Saiyans blasting ki at everyone (including my fics ). They don't stop to think of other ways the killings might be carried out. Adding different killing methods like that makes the story better and more unique.I'm also curious about that girl Vegeta was with. He isn't going to really catch a disease, is he? 0.o I can figure out what's going on despite the censored parts, and a disease like that would be nasty! But who knows? Vegeta might be imagining things... It was sad to see Vegeta scrubbing himself until the water fills with blood. Poor guy. But the detail was amazing again. The part about the water being red and staining the reflection of the sky above was like poetry. You write things that are so vivid and moving. They're like lyrics from the goth music I listen to. |
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| peggs9 | 6th December 2010 - 05:00 AM Post #37 |
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once again glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback:) glad you liked the horror aspects as well, other people seem to like that too. i've seen and read wy too much horror/thriller/gory stuff :lol: about the girl... as you might have realised, the ginyus were assaulting the girl as another way of humiliating the king who had somehow betrayed frieza, and then afterwards they make vegeta and raditz do it as well he wont actually get a disease, he just has a phobia of getting one. i think i will be explaining that in a future chapter, if i remember, hehe |
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| Ruby | 12th December 2010 - 02:08 AM Post #38 |
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Yes, I do realize what they were doing with that girl. Seems harsh but that's how Freeza's men work. Latest review. ![]() I can't wait to see what happens next! Vegeta said he's sorry?! Vegeta doesn't say that. He'll never be able to fool them if he keeps that up. Can't wait to see where that leads. Also, I like the mysterious goings on in Goten's room with the voice on the wind. You know how to keep a reader interested by always adding different things like that. Can't wait to see where that goes. o.o |
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| peggs9 | 14th December 2010 - 07:59 AM Post #39 |
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i want to bring goten into it because i like him lots for some reason and want to write about him. so hopefully you'll find it interesting
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| Ruby | 29th December 2010 - 12:10 AM Post #40 |
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Goten is cute. It'll be fun seeing him in this. Couldn't have Trunks without Goten anyway. ![]() Oh my God, this story is still so interesting! I bet Trunks is going to get into so much trouble since he got away with everything. Should be fun to see what he gets into next. And where could Vegeta's double be taking Bulma? I can't wait to see where they go. Ooh, suspense! 0.o I like it!
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I do hope you won't kill him off, peggs...



but i still cannot gve away the story


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