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Reviews:The Puzzle of Broly
Topic Started: 22nd September 2010 - 09:33 AM (251 Views)
Ruby
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Okay friends, here's my review thread for my Broly fic. I'm not sure how long my story will be so I've decided to start a seporate thread for it, just in case.
So review away everyone. :) 8-D
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:D I really like it so far!

i have more to say about this, but i wil have to come back to it, as it's 2.30 in the morning an i'm supposed to be at uni tomorrow 8-D 8-D 8-D

good work ^_^
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ahem, yes, now where was i?

that's right... you've portrayed his autistic traits very realistically, like his habits and the way he doesn't really consider the presence of others around him often. there is so much description and it helps characterise Broly. i can imagine just what he's like

its good how you show the effects on his family and those around him as well. ouch, his dad lost an eye :blink:

i think this fic is going great :)
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