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| Tweet Topic Started: 26th November 2010 - 12:12 PM (266 Views) | |
| rosefairy0 | 26th November 2010 - 12:12 PM Post #1 |
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review, review, review.
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| Ruby | 4th December 2010 - 01:31 AM Post #2 |
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Good job Rose. ![]() I liked the interaction between Vegeta and Gohan after the nightmare. Nobody really saw much of how Vegeta slowly changed after the Cell Games and become more calm and settled down, and I think this fic shows how that began for him. I like that. It helps fill in the missing details and it's written well too.You did a good job of showing Gohan's torment in the nightmare, and the part where Trunks was eating his pillow was funny and cute.
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| rosefairy0 | 4th December 2010 - 09:24 AM Post #3 |
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I know, that Trunks part was cute! :3 That's exactly what I wanted to catch in this fic, Vegeta and Gohan's development after the cell games when everything chances for them. They both can relate to each other, that's why I had Gohan talk to Vegeta. They both have pretty similar pasts, Gohan was kidnapped a few times, Vegeta was basically kidnapped from Freeza, but never got rescued. Gohan's dad died, Vegeta's whole planet died. I mean if you think about it there's lives are really connected they both were forced to fight to. I really wanted to show that similarity in this fic. Where you able to see it? |
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