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review's for 'Thunderstorm'; please review :)
Topic Started: 24th December 2010 - 02:09 PM (245 Views)
rosefairy0
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Say anything you like, you loved it, you hated it, you thought it was okay, but if you say you hated it please give a reason why, so that I can make my next story lovable. But at least just say 'something'. Okay, you can review now, hurry up!

alright, alright, take your time.

Vegeta: I do not approve of this story, it make me look weak.

Rose: you know your hard on the outside but a cuddly little bunny on this inside! :lol: *Hug's a stuffed bunny*

Vegeta: <_< I really hate you. I hope you know that.

Rose: *Throws bunny* okay.

Vegeta: Everyone say that this story sucks!!

Goku: Awwww, I thought it was cute.

Vegeta: You would. <_<
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Anti
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I got nuffin'.
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'Something'.
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Kakarot Son
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Haha, Rose, Thunderstorm was good, as I've already told you, your writing style has advanced a lot thanks to ASPIK.
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Well, it is a cute story, and it is rather nice, but I think Vegeta was just a bit too OOC. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I just couldn't see him acting that way to his daughter. Still it is a nice short little fic.
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DARN! I knew I did Vegeta wrong!! At least I didn't make him all lovey dovey gushyness love like some people do. I think I did okay with Vegeta, thanks for pointing that out Ruby ^_^ I'll be sure to do Vegeta's personality right next time! :D
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