| Reviews - My Last Day; Please let us know what you thought... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: 6th June 2011 - 04:09 AM (266 Views) | |
| misundersnape | 6th June 2011 - 04:09 AM Post #1 |
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Please share your thoughts about "My Last Day" here... You're a champ! ![]() misundersnape and kittykat9012 |
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| Jio Uzumaki | 6th June 2011 - 06:25 AM Post #2 |
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Damn me. Damn you all
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That was...dark, but really enjoyable. |
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| Silver Star | 6th June 2011 - 12:55 PM Post #3 |
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All hail Kefka!
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I am impressed. It's clear that your daughter has true talent and skill as a writer. Which is to be expected since she has you teaching her how it's done. I love the amount of detail in this. It paints a very vivid image of what is going on. It is simply marvelous. Any chance that we might see a bit more of this in the future? |
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| misundersnape | 6th June 2011 - 07:44 PM Post #4 |
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Thank you, Jio! I have passed on that you enjoyed it to the co-author. ![]() It is dark, as you felt, and that's because their, my daughter's English class's, assignment was meant to be to write a 'sinister' piece of fiction - so that's good, she succeeded! She's handing it in at school today. Her version is slightly less adult (vocab mainly), I embellished it a bit, hence the reason I said this one is a collaborative effort rather than I just helped edit etc. Thanks also Silver Star! Glad you liked it. Kitty (my nickname for her) is happy that you said she has true talent. She laughed, I think she's given me more credit than she needs to. She came up with the characters, and plot mostly, I just helped put it all together cohesively. (She's only 13, so needed some help) I also asked her if she has any idea for a continuation... she gave me a blank look and a shrug... I guess not then. :lol: Maybe I can adopt it and come up with something one day... Anyway - thanks again both of you... your effort and time was very appreciated! ![]() misundersnape (and kittykat9012) |
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