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Reviws: Nightfang; see previous
Topic Started: 6th June 2011 - 12:41 PM (208 Views)
Jio Uzumaki
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Damn me. Damn you all
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just put any reviews, comments or criticisms here.
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misundersnape
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Whoa, you weren't kidding when you said this was dark... ;)

So, you let this 'thing' loose on a Foster family? I certainly hope they can keep their cool at all times. Imagine, yelling at the child for not cleaning their room, and whammo... your head bitten off - literally.

I see the 'beast' has a noble purpose, but can it keep itself in check... I shall be reading to see... and to find out from whence it came...

Good job so far.
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slayer94
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This story is really diabolical,but good
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