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The Last Two Time Lords Reviws
Topic Started: 27th April 2012 - 09:31 AM (204 Views)
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Jio Uzumaki
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Despite your allergy to correct spelling and grammer, it is a promising start.

But, seriously, spelling and grammer. Fix it.
Edited by Jio Uzumaki, 29th April 2012 - 12:01 PM.
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Can you please point the errors out so I can fix them?

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Sure, Dude.

"and stoped him." Stopped

"Doctor's eyes widened when he saw the mans left arm..." man's

"It was a wire like arm of metal with wires, and he was stunned to find it had covered with skin the next moment."

This one's tricky, but "wire-like" "was covered with" and wire-like with wires sounds kind of redundant.

Sorry if correcting you made you mad, I was just trying to help.
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No I understand you were trying to help :)
I will fix right away
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