| The Last Two Time Lords Reviws | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: 27th April 2012 - 09:31 AM (204 Views) | |
| please ignore this profile | 27th April 2012 - 09:31 AM Post #1 |
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LET THE INFEARRIOR REVIWS BEGIN |
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| Jio Uzumaki | 28th April 2012 - 06:27 AM Post #2 |
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Damn me. Damn you all
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Despite your allergy to correct spelling and grammer, it is a promising start. But, seriously, spelling and grammer. Fix it. Edited by Jio Uzumaki, 29th April 2012 - 12:01 PM.
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| please ignore this profile | 28th April 2012 - 01:39 PM Post #3 |
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Can you please point the errors out so I can fix them? |
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| Jio Uzumaki | 29th April 2012 - 12:06 PM Post #4 |
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Sure, Dude. "and stoped him." Stopped "Doctor's eyes widened when he saw the mans left arm..." man's "It was a wire like arm of metal with wires, and he was stunned to find it had covered with skin the next moment." This one's tricky, but "wire-like" "was covered with" and wire-like with wires sounds kind of redundant. Sorry if correcting you made you mad, I was just trying to help. |
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| please ignore this profile | 29th April 2012 - 02:00 PM Post #5 |
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No I understand you were trying to help ![]() I will fix right away |
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