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Black Oil
Topic Started: Jun 3 2004, 08:55 PM (562 Views)
chluaid
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I was walking home from work one evening recently, and between two houses in some bushes I saw an old lady. It was dark and very cold, but she only wore a nightdress.

She was sitting cross-legged in a patch of mud and her night dress was brown and wet from the waist down. She was smiling and talking softly to herself. I didn't want to make eye contact because I knew at a glance that she was crazy, but wondered what someone in her condition was doing outside alone at night. I noticed her hands and wrists were all black, as if covered in black oil from a car. I thought I'd better say something, so I walked over towards her careful not to make any loud noise (I didn't want to startle her). As I came nearer I said, '..hello? are you ok?'

Just then she looked up at me from where she sat and shrieked! Her eyes were glazed with horror, but her lips were stretched wide in a horribly contorted smile. And then I saw what she held in her hands.. it was a small wet bundle of either hair or fur.. if it was some kind of animal, it appeared to be dead. I recoiled as the shrieking continued, and as some people emerged from their houses to investigate the sound, I turned to call for help. As I opened my mouth to shout, the screaming stopped and I looked back where the old lady had been sitting. She was gone and there was no indication that she had ever been there. One of the people aroused by the screaming stood in his doorway and yelled, 'shut the fuck up out there!'.

As I lay in bed that night, I was on the very cusp of sleep when I heard the shrieking again, far off in the distance. I wondered whether or not it was real... and as I lay there thinking about her again, I realised that the black stuff on her hands wasn't oil.. it was blood that, in the darkness appeared to be black oil. I didn't sleep well.
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SavannaFC
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short, simple, yet very effective. i like it.
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Sigfried
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Objection!!!
:D
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Colbert
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Very Nice.
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DarKChAoS
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:yfok: :yfok: creepy :worry: what makes it worse is having that music from bitey castle playin in the back round ewww :yfok:
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Sigfried
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your life its a mistery every day isnt?? B)
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It's quite good...creepy as hell...but good.

when I started to read this I was thinking it was a true story...the whole time I thought this I also thought where ever he lives.......I'm stayin the fuck out of that state
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Sigfried
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have you read all the stories of the site in a row on midnight with total silence??
i did :P
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Denizensays
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i have the impression he lives in australia... am i right or am i just thinking of the wrong guy?
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chluaid
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you're thinking of the right guy... but is that cos you've seen my profile? :P
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Denizensays
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no just cuz im a stalker ;) :lol:
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Sigfried
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Objection!!!
:ph43r:
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DarKChAoS
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I Have 2 Brain Cells...And They Fight º×ÐårK¤ÇhÅø§×º
:yfok: i aint going to australia... or if i do not at night :worry:
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Denizensays
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ok you know what i didnt read this last night because i was afraid i would be scared and couldnt go to sleep but now i just read it and my girlfriend dropped a plate just as i got past the most intense part... WTF is up with your stories and haveing shit like that happen?! :yfok:
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Sigfried
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"the mystery surrounds you like a thick myst, clouding your senses as you see it happening, without move, without reason. Then the fog disapear, without your notice, only confusion remains..."

B)
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DragonEmperor
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:huh: You hear about them...but Sigfried your literally the only one I have ever met who literally talks in riddles
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Sigfried
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riddles??, me dont understand :rolleyes:
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DragonEmperor
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:worry: come now "the mystery surrounds you like a thick myst, clouding your senses as you see it happening, without move, without reason. Then the fog disapear, without your notice, only confusion remains..."????

what the hell kind of answer is that?! :)

very poetic though :D
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Sigfried
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just think about it, listen to the teacher:

-mystery: odd things happening on certain circumstances.
-myst_fog: mass of air very dense, can cloud the sight for milles and can give the sensation of confusion on his maximum capacity.
-senses: sight, smell, touch...etc
-reason: the human capacity of thinking about himself and his surroudings with logic.
-move: the capacity translating from one point to another.
-confusion: alterated state of the mind when he cant recognize and reason certain situation.

etc, etc, etc...

geez, use your head :D :rolleyes: B)

...im not a poet!!!!! <_<
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DragonEmperor
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yes yes your worship if you say so :D

last time I take on a poet warlord...they'll drill you into the ground with their sublime use of the english language ;)
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Sigfried
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maybe he can use a shakespearian use of the good old english to enchant the presents with some kind of words which will resonate our ears and chill our spine
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:worry: are you talking 3rd person?
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Sigfried
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am i? :blink:
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chluaid
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mummy I'm scared :worry:
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Sigfried
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hey, are you both talking like im some kind of psicho or something <_<
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