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Daily Sketch Thread; wanna become the great artist?
Topic Started: Dec 18 2004, 07:59 PM (213,918 Views)
Anghenfil
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Nice pup, jubs. You've still got issues with the humanoid arms and legs; I'd do a more detailed write-up but I haven't slept in two days as it is. So I'll be brief now, but try to follow up this weekend.

For a more "typical" quadraped, address the following:

-Shoulders are better, but still look too rounded. In most quadrapeds, the shoulder blades are on the sides of the ribcage; yours look halfway between human and four-legged. Find a short-haired cat or a short-haired dog (greyhounds are good) and study the shoulder mass. It's a rather flat piece of anatomy.

-General rule for quadrapeds are shorter femur/humerous and longer ankles/wrists. Entend the ankles and get the elbow and knee closer to the body.

-Make the torso longer; right now your legs are longer than the body itself, which is rather rare for quadrapeds. Usually the legs are equal to (deer, horses, canines) or smaller than the body length (cows, cats, bears, weasels). The onyl two groups I can think of where the legs and significantly longer are camels and giraffes. Hares probably count too.

All this is assuming you're going for a more standard quadraped. It's a very cool drawing by itself, so feel free to disregard me. :P
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Prometheus
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I havent been here in a while cause I havent had an access to a scanner ;(.
But ive been working on a ..... thing. well take a look
Posted Image

EDIT:Got it finaly set up. I know its crapy, but i did it with a webcam.
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juggleballz
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in the last [IMG] element, add a / before the img to close it off. it shud work then.

Code:
 
[IMG]picturesource.jpeg[/IMG]
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As for the pic itself its a bit hard to make out. u got a bigger pic dude?

to jub jub: all that needs to be said has been said, so no real crits from me apart from maybe the right hind leg's ankle area seems a little thin (furtherest from the viewer), looks weaker than the lefts. and i wud agree that the legs shufd be bent more and shoulder blades more exaggerated.
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Prometheus
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Posted Image

crapy, but it has to do.
(note to self:Get, a fucking scanner!)
The most importante of the pic
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jubjub
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I am not immature you Stinky PooPoo Head!
Hehe,dang!Back to the drawing board.I'm going to try to find some referance dog pictures online.My dog does NOT sit still at all,that and she's kind fuzzy and all black(difficult to see and muscles)After i get it close i want to try to learn other quadraped poses like running and sitting and stuff llike that.Thanks for the critiques,i'll try to put out a better picture when i get a chance,A more realistic head on em' too next time.I'm still VERY new to learning lighting too so i draw lighting and shadows like a little kid right now.So i'm working on that too.I'll get there eventually,i'm just a little slower than most people :lol: .

EDIT- some quickies:Posted ImagePosted Image
The dog head was somewhat referanced,Sorry they're not more detailed but they're quite small pictures :lol: . (sidenote)Just trying to keep it a DAILY sketch thread :lol: .
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Malakym
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Black guy.
figured i'd draw some weapons.
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Kingdom:
Blue 1. Royal sword
Blue 2. Complex rune
Blue 3. Shield
Blue 4. Machete

Tribes:
Green 1. Leader's sword
Green 2. Simple rune
Green 3. Shield
Green 4. Machete/Sword
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jubjub
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I am not immature you Stinky PooPoo Head!
I like your weapons,they're cool looking MALAKYM.

If you want some kick a@! inspiration for weapon designs i sugget you check out WEN-M.Here's a sample of designs
Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image
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Malakym
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Black guy.
jubjub
Jan 12 2006, 06:20 PM
I like your weapons,they're cool looking MALAKYM.

If you want some kick a@! inspiration for weapon designs i sugget you check out WEN-M.Here's a sample of designs
Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image

those are nice designs, but they dont really look like swords. that's one of the reasons i didnt like playing FFX. it seemed like i was beating monsters with a work of art, not a sword.

if you'll notice, the weapons all look/function differently based on their faction. the tribal weapons simple, but they are made to kill. the tribes have limited resources and cant waste time on beauty. everything they make has only the necessary materials, and is built to serve a purpose that will prove usefull. the kingdom weapons are more artistic because, obviously, the kingdom has smiths and more resources to spare, and the weapons seem more suitable for showing off. for the tribes, it's most likely that the one who uses the weapon was the one who made it, and getting another one would be most difficult, no matter how simple it is.
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jubjub
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I am not immature you Stinky PooPoo Head!
...uh.I was just saying in general inspiration.I wasn't implying that is was for anything in particular.
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Malakym
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Black guy.
oh.
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Zhenmuron
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Hi guys, just got back from holiday a few days ago, had some paper I sketched a bit while I was there and here are some of the results... Beware of random :D :

Tested shadow on different objects: Posted Image

Seen the concept before just drew from what I remembered and added some stuff: Posted Image

Animal: Posted Image

At 1am I just felt like doing this one for some reason: Posted Image

Random: Posted Image

Kinda snuck in there: Posted Image

Drew these with a.. hmm dont what you call this type of pen in english but basically a mechanical lead pen that you load up with lead sticks... feels like my IQ just dropped :P
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Bussman
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Well, those are some really awesome sketches man!!!

I love the shading excercise you put in there!



I drew a copy of a comic by Thomas Nast today, (a cartoonist around Civil War times) I was in AP US just sittin there on the computer, showing my friends how to get around the blocks using a proxy when i showed one my site and he was like damn! I never knew u drew (because most people dont) and he was like draw something right now, so I plopped open my book, and bam this is what came out of it! (better if viewed farther away i think):


Posted Image

Hmm?
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Thanatos
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Bussman
Jan 10 2006, 06:41 PM
yea, im having trouble drawing animalistic, while cartoony legs, such as Gorilla's and dogs, and cats, and mice, and um, birds, like Griffins . . .

Anghen, or Commie, wanna make a nice little Picture reference for us?!?!?!?

HMMM???


*EDIT*

Well now, heres an anatomy practice I did over holiday break with my new books!!! I just finally scanned it, lol

Whatcha think?
Posted Image

Crits and Comments Greatly Appreciated

Those look really cool, love the shading. I dont know allot about that stuff so I cant really give it crits... wheres noob. he can help.


As for the other picture I have no idea what the hells going on. Is it an old guy vomiting a young guy?
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Bussman
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Well your right Tim, sry, i didnt post an explanation

Posted Image

That was the reference pic from my textbook. it basically shows an illustration of a forced alliance between these guys during the electioning of 1872 area, bla bla bla, thats what i looked at when drew


(keep in mind 15 mins, blue ink pen, computer paper, flat computer desk)

See it better now?
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Thanatos
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Ahh, looks cool.


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Jan 12 2006, 05:31 PM
Posted Image

Hmm?

Nice, nice :)
But as longa s you're copying from a book, you may as well try to emulate his shading style as well. The artist uses a lot of crosshatching that gives the subjects depth, which you seem to be lacking to some degree. Remember, make the lines of the cross-hatch closer together where it is darker, and gradually pull them apart.

keep up the good work.
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jubjub
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I am not immature you Stinky PooPoo Head!
Cool picture Bussman,it's kinda.....disturbing ;) .You shoulda crosshatched behind em' like in the picture,but being at school i'm sure there were time restraints.I think it's groovy :lol: Haha,looks like a Tool cd cover or something.
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Bussman
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Thanks Tim and Matt . . . I was trying to apply that cross hatching technique but I guess it didnt turn out too well. Oh well, there is always next time, and I plan on doing some more of his cartoons, they actaully have a nice meaning sometimes.


*Edit, yea I would do that jubjub, but i wouldnt want to mess it up now. Thanks though, its always good to hear praise from people better than you! Oohhh btw, im going to work on that drawing for ya**
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Zhenmuron: We call it a mechanical pencil in english....and the picture of the face right before bitey looks very cubist.....like...good cubism....erm..well as much as I know about cubism...it looks good...if that makes sense...probably doesn't to people who speak english... <_< <_<

:P :P
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I am not immature you Stinky PooPoo Head!
Bussman
Jan 12 2006, 05:48 PM
*Edit, yea I would do that jubjub, but i wouldnt want to mess it up now. Thanks though, its always good to hear praise from people better than you! Oohhh btw, im going to work on that drawing for ya**

*looks around* you talking to me? :blink: hehe.

I wouldn't say i was better at all,i just have a differant style.Of course i have a differant perception than other people of what makes a person ''good'' at art.I can't draw the things that i picture i my head at all so..i think i suck basically at art.
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Ranoka
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I don't really get why you keep putting yourself down Jubjub. Technically you're one of the best drawers on the forum.

Maybe you should just loosen up and do some doodling, throw all the rules you know out and just draw what comes to your mind (no shading, no perspective grids, no guide sketches etc), no matter how stupid it may seem, draw it quickly (less than a minute) and move on to the next thing*, after a few more pages you might begin to like some of the stuff you're drawing.

*(if you don't draw that drawing, it will most likely haunt you for pages to come, just get it on the paper and move on, even if it is a picture of mrs Thatcher on the lavvie).

You could always re-draw some of the doodles you liked best, re-applying the rules and compare them to the original doodle.

Or just ignore me :bing:


BTW Bussman, your drawing skills are improving, looking forward to seeing some originals by you !

PS, I'm going to be submitting some sketches and doodles to this thread in the next day. (yeah, I realise I haven't submitted many recently...)

peas out!
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Bussman
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Just got done doing some more anatomy:

Posted Image


With Reference, Any comments, (yes I just noticed her nipple, im sorry, my mistake, ill fix it later)

(Hmm, should i post a nudity link, i mean were all mature here, its just art :blink: )
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Rufum Ru Sudily!
WOO00 naked!! hee hee w00t!!!11
mature? :P


nah, its anatomy! no problem with anatomy.
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Bussman
Jan 13 2006, 01:28 PM


(Hmm, should i post a nudity link, i mean were all mature here, its just art  :blink: )

yes...there are a few kids under the age of 14....i think....I think the youngest is 12....not sure though...(i'm 16 though....so It's coo for me)

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Munch
Jan 13 2006, 01:40 PM
  WOO00 naked!! hee hee w00t!!!11
mature? tongue.gif


Good example for a need to a link
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Rufum Ru Sudily!
lol, *sarcasm*

but seriously, ITS ANATOMY! not.. porn or anything villageidiot. Anatomy is a fatal part of drawing. If you ask me, there is no need for a link.
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