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Daily Sketch Thread; wanna become the great artist?
Topic Started: Dec 18 2004, 07:59 PM (213,970 Views)
Bucks
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i decided i need to draw and sketch more

so heres a little one

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Divine_Walrus
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Looks great, the left-corner of the eye is a bit large though.
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Bucks
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yeah i think ur right there walrus

but heres another one
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its a dragon i did in paint (Click it to make it biger :) )

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y is this pic (and all the rest) so small




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ori@r.a.m
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a new character i'm working on from my animation story, imagine a person stand near to it and he's the height of his ankle :bfoot:
he's walking through the forests way above the trees top, but, he's careful not to destroy any trees because they aren't his enemies :bitey: not more information for now :)
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Ignia
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I'm not real happy with it, but I'm running out of time! You may never see me on this thread again! Er... unless I (by some miracle) get a digital camra....

I'm going into AP art. It'll be down with sketches and all with HUGE works that would never fit in a scanner in a thousand years :(

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Hey! Doesn't look half bad on the computer!
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Not bad but i have a few critiques.

Hair is good, eyes are good.

overall its good, but u need to fix:

jaw line, mouth nose and cheeks.

the jaw line runs straight from the ear to the chin in one straight line which looks a bit off.

the nose is too small, and looks flat or punched in

The mouth looks like he has something in it, and his cheeks are very swollen looking like he is a hamster or someone has given him a severe booting to the face. chin is a tad big too.

but overall its a good characiture of one of the Back street boys. j/k

hope i didnt come off to harsh . just pointing out some fings i noticed.

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boundless
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If that doesn't show up, here's the link to it on DeviantArt. LINK

It's a bunch of random sketches.... :D
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ori@r.a.m
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just made up a face painting of a character i'm working on (one page backward)
also i'm trying some different colors swatch so tell me what do u think about the color..
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boundless
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Strange. His head looks like a snow capped mountain.
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yo mamma's daddy!!
ori@r.a.m
Aug 11 2005, 11:04 PM
just made up a face painting of a character i'm working on (one page backward)
also i'm trying some different colors swatch so tell me what do u think about the color..
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I like the shadeing! good stuff man.
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Boundless: Man I love your stlye. I'm not sure if it's the bold outlines or the way you do your eyes, but something about it makes me want to stick my head out the window and yell "I love boundless' sketches!" :P The one where he is looking upwards is great, I love the way the eyes are done, they are definately the focus of the image.

Ori: I love the prominent brow and massive nose, the cheek-to-chin line on the left isn't quite as smooth as it is on the right though. Can't wait to see the whole thing in all his hump-backed glory ;)
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tnx all :) yeah is brow really looks like a mountain hahaha.. mmm it is a speed sketch painting so you right it's a little out of proportions, but soon i'll make a big painting of him in a middle of the wood or something..
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Thanks walrus :D
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juggleballz
Aug 12 2005, 03:57 AM
Not bad but i have a few critiques.

Hair is good, eyes are good.

overall its good, but u need to fix:

jaw line, mouth nose and cheeks.

the jaw line runs straight from the ear to the chin in one straight line which looks a bit off.

the nose is too small, and looks flat or punched in

The mouth looks like he has something in it, and his cheeks are very swollen looking like he is a hamster or someone has given him a severe booting to the face. chin is a tad big too.

but overall its a good characiture of one of the Back street boys. j/k

hope i didnt come off to harsh . just pointing out some fings i noticed.

No, not harsh at all :rolleyes:

(The backstreet boys comment was a little unnecessary though <_< )

yeah, you didn't tell me anything I really didn't already know (denial is a beautiful thing!) I'm so FRUSTRATED with pen! I ruined the last one only the night before trying to fix that flat nose so I stoped the shading prematurely.

WHY CAN'T I JUST USE GRAPHITE?!?

it would make life so much easier (d*mn scanners) <_<

:o Oh but thank you for the critiquing! :D

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Woot! I love it when I'm wrong! Just one more for the rebellious noob before I become a dog of Jenks Art!

:D I win.

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ARS GRATIA ARTIS!!! ART FOR THE SAKE OF ART!!!

(I still think ink is the devil, but I'm kickin' that devil's blotty little butt!)
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great one Ignia! the shading is awesome! but i can't understand what's going with her right hand :huh:

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sorry for double posting :worry:

Then don't please. Used the edit button. ;) -Mod

just finished my speed Gur painting, hey that thing can be a great avtar! :D
edit: yeah it's nice :bing:
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by the way, all this white is snow ,becuase he is so high :bfoot:
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Another demon drawing. This is the demon of blood.
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Hah, Freaky quicky...

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Now just finnish that Maya VTM and I'm off to bed, g'night.
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Uhm...
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bored... drew a little somethin'
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Ignia
Aug 13 2005, 02:12 AM

No, not harsh at all :rolleyes:

(The backstreet boys comment was a little unnecessary though <_< )

yeah, you didn't tell me anything I really didn't already know (denial is a beautiful thing!) I'm so FRUSTRATED with pen! I ruined the last one only the night before trying to fix that flat nose so I stoped the shading prematurely.

WHY CAN'T I JUST USE GRAPHITE?!?

it would make life so much easier (d*mn scanners) <_<

:o Oh but thank you for the critiquing! :D

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Woot! I love it when I'm wrong! Just one more for the rebellious noob before I become a dog of Jenks Art!

:D I win.

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ARS GRATIA ARTIS!!! ART FOR THE SAKE OF ART!!!

(I still think ink is the devil, but I'm kickin' that devil's blotty little butt!)

that one is looking waaay better. good stuff ignia. the hair is pretty cool and so is the eye. ears are weird, but i obviously on purpose. right shoulder looks kinda weird.

the jaw line looks much better too, shading is great. good stuff.

sorry about the Back street boys comment. lol, was kidding.
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Haha! No worries, it takes more than that to vitally wound the wolfess! :lol:

Anyway since two have asked about the arm, she's leaning on her right elbow. I do that a lot with Draca. It suits her. And yes the ear is purposeful (check out Pike, Ave, and my personal photo: ears all pointed), though I find it strange that you comment on pointed ears, which to me seems fairly common in fictional art/writings, yet no mention of the snake tongue!

Draco- Latin meaning snake (also used modernly as dragon). I just replaced the o with an a and made it into a name.

Avis- Latin meaning bird. Make it ablative (Ave) and it means birdlike (it's a stretch but I really don't care.)

Ignis- Latin meaning fire. Again, made it feminine to become a name. See, as well as being a wolf-apparition, I have the elemental aura of fire. (confused? check out Critics Wanted in Anything Stories)

And thanks juggleballz for all the compliments! *glows* (NO pun intended)

I feel all special now! ^_^
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quite good psybola, only the reflection on the water is a bit weird, but then again, water reflection are among the harder things to draw, so just practice a lot I guess...B)



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so the charcter is more or less done, now I only need a background

first time I coloured st in photoshop, went quite well I found... :blink:

now you guys start telling me what I need to improve!
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wow. That one's great Nodron.
I dont think theres much you can improve!
maby just add more sharper "glossiness" highlight spots on the creatures skinn.
like the legg forexsample. Make the skinn more wrinkly. I dont now...
It looks good allready

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