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Topic Started: Jul 4 2005, 04:00 PM (92,701 Views)
DeLine
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any fellow newgrounders working on a pico-day flash here?

i just finished writing/storyboarding my idea last night n started animations today. im still pretty weak in the animation field but i have faith in my drawing ability and my story to put up a pretty good fight.

just a few hours of work so far.. and this is it. (only a few seconds) all crits and comments more then welcome :lol:

http://img353.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picodayox9.swf

(you can submit tankmen stuff on pico day :P )
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Cel
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Cheesecake, Wow! That's totally amazing!

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After like a million attempts over the last few days to draw something, anything, I finally managed to come up with some stuff today. One of them being the pic below.
I'm kinda tired of being average+, so I figured it's about time I stop screwing around with Flash/Photoshop and actually learn to draw properly, and I was hoping the experts here could help me out a little. :)

So please, any tips, suggestions, corrections, whatever, are more than welcome! :D

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PlasticCup
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Holding your soft drinks
Cel, I really like your drawing style. However, judging from your animation competition thingy and this, I think it's safe to say that you draw a bit too static. In the animation thingy, this is especially visible in the man, his torso stays the same all through the animation. In this scene, the banker (?) seems to static, I'd try to get more motion into his stance. Also make creases (sp?) visible where he's grabbed in the neck, now it looks like she's just holding her hand there, instead of gripping him firmly.

I hope this makes sense, I'm kinda crippled into not being to draw on a pc atm, so I can't really show what I mean :/
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accordo
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As I havent done any lip syncing before and need to for a project I'm working on at the moment. Here are my attempts, crits would be greatly appreciated.


http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taity1ay9.swf

http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taity2bk3.swf
(this one has serious problems)

http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taity3gy8.swf

http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taity4gh9.swf

thanks heaps everyone =)
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Troll-Sniper
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Hey dude! Im from newgrounds too. I'd love to make a pico day animation but Im not that very good... Im in for the art competition for the T-shirts ( Especially the madness t-shirt - I love it) .
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DeLine
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lol yeah this is my first large scale flash project.. its goin pretty good, alot of progress since that last post. good luck on the art thing too, i wanted to try at that too but this flash is takin up my free time :blink:
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Dash
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[size=1]I have an update with my logos to my three characters. I want gladly to know what to be changed before I ink everything.
Amd I will change the text yes, it was just a example where it should be on. ^^'[/size]

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eriandor
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Yeeey, I felt like doing something! So i gathered all of my actionscript knowledge and made THIS
little interactive thingie
move with the directional buttons.
half an hour work


so?
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Gobi
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short toon for fat-pie.com'..its a 26 year old guy prank calling a restaurant in an old lady voice.

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