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| Pinky | Mar 30 2006, 01:27 PM Post #1301 |
Brackenwood Lightweight
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Nice improvement Pillow, and i think you're right about the face shadow being too dark, because compared to the rest of her body's shading, everything else is lighter. And Comlock, you truly are an inspiration, I'm still in awe looking over your work. And since I'm poor and can't afford whatever software and mumbo jumbo you're useing, let's just say that I am just as good as you but without the proper tools i cannot display and prove ithat i really am. 
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| TheEYE | Mar 30 2006, 02:08 PM Post #1302 |
Lurys Fey Daemyt
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:rolleyes: Well luckily for you Pinky, all the tools that Com uses are available in 30 day free trials. With the exception of the Wacom tablet, which can be picked up fairly cheaply and really is a neccesity for any artist thinking about going digital anyways. So, when the time comes and you are ready, feel free to toss your work against Com's! And I seriously hope that your boasts are in fact reality, cause it would be great to have yet another top notch artist like Com here in the forums! Welcome to Brackenwood by the way. 
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| Fenrir | Mar 31 2006, 02:03 AM Post #1303 |
Brackenwood Newbie
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Thanks for the edits on the sketch. and I bumped up the frames per second. http://media.putfile.com/inworks24fps And started on scene 2, which I'm fleshing out the character face at the moment. I have his facial expressions set as a different movie clip on a layer below his hair, so I can switch them out at will. I want to make it an animated opening to a novel/manga I'm working on. |
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| Pillow | Mar 31 2006, 02:25 AM Post #1304 |
SEX RED!!!
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the gap between the eyes is too big using proportion there should be a gap of the size of one eye between them i think the ears are a bit too big too other than that great! 
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| Fenrir | Mar 31 2006, 04:28 AM Post #1305 |
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That's just my style. Like Manga Carta, and War of Gensis. |
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| Yembles | Mar 31 2006, 08:05 AM Post #1306 |
I kick global arse!
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Decided to give Joan of Arc another shot as I'm so awful at Organics. Largely ignoring the tutorial and just using the reference images provided. Let me know what you think. Progressive renders:    EDIT -- Before anyone screams 'WIREFRAME'. Voila. 
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| Neyals | Mar 31 2006, 08:23 AM Post #1307 |
Brackenwood Deadbeat
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wow that 3d stuff is awesome |
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| Pillow | Mar 31 2006, 08:57 AM Post #1308 |
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SEX RED!!!
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the chest doesnt look right on the wireframe.. too squidged together, round and too high yet it looks fine on the other things |
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| Colesif | Mar 31 2006, 08:57 AM Post #1309 |
Generally Uninterested.
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looks great jem,theres only one thhing that really stand out for me and thats the length of her arms (they are to short, when the arms are spread out they should be as long as the person is tall) |
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| Pinky | Mar 31 2006, 10:18 AM Post #1310 |
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For Yembles: I'm going to have to comment on the torso and arms comparrson to the legs. Usually, a persons wrists are around the bottom of the crotch when let down, and the hands will continue to reach halfway down the thigh to the person's knees. So one or two things need to be changed if you want to acheive this organic look: either change the arms and torso size (if you just increase the size of the arms then I think your person's shouylders would appear too big, or change the size of your person's legs as they appear too long in comparrison to the rest of the body. I think if you do this, your person will become more 'organic' (and by saying organic I think you're refering to realistic?
 ). Awesome work by the way! :lol: , I wouldn't be able to do that, too mathematical and time consuming, so I must complement your work. 
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| Yembles | Mar 31 2006, 11:03 AM Post #1311 |
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Thanks for the feedback guys. You're right about the proportions. I'm actually modelling to a specific (quite stylised) reference which, in itself, doesn't follow regular proportions. In other words, it's not my fault. It's the guy who drew it's fault. Although no-one's really at fault, because it all comes down to style in the end. Pinky: Actually, when I referred to Organics, I mean 'non-metallic' essentially. Anything alive or natural is organic and is therefore difficult to model because of the curves and squishy textures and stuff. Robots and tanks and cars I can do. Squishy curvy humans and the like are my achilles heel.
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| Pillow | Apr 1 2006, 06:44 AM Post #1312 |
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 once again improved... anything else need doing before i move on to the wings? edit: face was too dark and neck was too light... anything else? 
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| Neyals | Apr 1 2006, 07:43 AM Post #1313 |
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is there an outline for it. The edges of the arms look bumpy. |
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| Pillow | Apr 1 2006, 07:49 AM Post #1314 |
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a basic pale sketch outline but no it was mainly freehand thanks for pointing that out i never noticed *runs back to the drawing board again* edit: returns from drawing board...no more wobbly arms i think...  
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| Pinky | Apr 1 2006, 11:11 AM Post #1315 |
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Brackenwood Lightweight
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I just want to say that I personally think her wings are too small. To me, theylook like the cartoon wings you'd see on a fat guy where they serve no purpose (eg. the caterpilar from A Bug's Life) |
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| Pillow | Apr 1 2006, 03:32 PM Post #1316 |
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thanks i was wondering that too but i havnt moved onto those yet still perfecting the person thanks tho definately change those |
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| Comlock | Apr 1 2006, 06:15 PM Post #1317 |
These are my leafs:
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Looks alot better now Pillow. You could paint some strokes over the wings again, becasue they look too pixelated compared to the rest of the image. It looks like it's painted in another app. (what software are you using?) I feel more comfortable painting now after the two speed painting practice, so I desided to continue a bit on "the journey begins" painting, since I realy stuggled to continue this earlier. I roughly added more details on the old man: 
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| Pillow | Apr 1 2006, 07:01 PM Post #1318 |
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SEX RED!!!
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i havnt even started on the wings yet that's just the basics i was trying to get the person right first edit: the old man looks great cant wait for the dtail on the woman too
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| humbleego | Apr 2 2006, 01:52 AM Post #1319 |
Adam's Illegitimate Son
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Are you planning to make his other hand a clearer silhouette? |
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| Comlock | Apr 2 2006, 01:58 AM Post #1320 |
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These are my leafs:
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No, the story is that the old man doesent have any fingers on his left hand and he's showing the frustration becasue he can't have the map...no =P.. I havent finished painting that hand yet. I'll do some quick hand studies before I finish that one. I think I'll buy a small little mirror.. afterall.. its 50 something days left to finish it. I dont wanna finish it that early (unless you can sketch that hand for me? :rolleyes: =P ) EDIT: I found a small portable mirror in the bathroom So here's some quick crappy handstudies: Maby the pose on the purple top left would be good to use 
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| Zwickel | Apr 2 2006, 03:21 AM Post #1321 |
Brackenwood Heavyweight
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It looks as if he has only 4 fingers even if the other one is hidden, perhaps you should try to make it a little bit visible. |
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| Comlock | Apr 2 2006, 03:32 AM Post #1322 |
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These are my leafs:
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Yeah, I only drew 4 fingers. If you look at his right hand, he has four fingers too. I just wanted it to be a bit cartoonier, and not 100% realism. Alot easier to draw too ofcourse ^^ finished the hand, and started a bit on the girl The man's eyeglass seems to be to high up I think, I should move it down. It looks like it's placed to high up right? 
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| Pinky | Apr 2 2006, 03:37 AM Post #1323 |
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If you really eel like you should change it, then change it. The drawing is for you anyways right? |
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| Comlock | Apr 2 2006, 04:07 AM Post #1324 |
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These are my leafs:
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It's for a competition at CGtalk.com 53 days left to finish it. http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/jo...egins/index.php |
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| Zwickel | Apr 2 2006, 04:11 AM Post #1325 |
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Well , if you think it needs change then change it, it looks a bit high, yap. Good luck with CA's competition Com, I hope you win! |
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