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| Master Rade | Jun 3 2006, 05:41 PM Post #1701 |
The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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Thanks jugs im like really working on it. Well four more pages. There crap but eh...     Last one Im still working with. Could really now need crits and magical advice. Not all at once every body  zzzzzzzzzzzzzz* goes to sleep*
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| fizzeddog | Jun 3 2006, 11:23 PM Post #1702 |
Im afraid to leave mumble
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Rade you should make her barley visible in the last frame, to show that it wasnt a dream, that would be an awesome ending! that might be too suggestive though, and maybe you are drawing off real a life experience? In that case, do it anyway, just for fun :lol: |
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| Anghenfil | Jun 4 2006, 03:21 AM Post #1703 |
PELICAAAAAN
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If you're going to self-insert, at least be realistic about your rampant musculature. |
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| Master Rade | Jun 4 2006, 03:25 AM Post #1704 |
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The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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Well that wasnt really nice. I was kinda hoping a little something else but ok. Ill make it more skinny 
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| Espen | Jun 4 2006, 03:30 AM Post #1705 |
Never Disturb us!
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She's raining on parades again rade
 Dont take it personal |
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| Master Rade | Jun 4 2006, 03:44 AM Post #1706 |
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The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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Na its cool until I prove other wise that im packing muscle. She must not think I have musculature body. Blam the testosterone levels that are in me now these days. I find it joyable going to the gym and if I must i must bear the heart ache of posting pics of me top less......  |
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| fuzzyillogic | Jun 4 2006, 03:31 PM Post #1707 |
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Come on ang! Show us ya abs! (__)(__) (__)(__) (__)(__) :lol: |
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| boundless | Jun 4 2006, 03:42 PM Post #1708 |
stuck in the third dimension
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rade get an anatomy book if you dont have one heres one but its sold out completely now (i got a $10 copy when it was available). You can still get a used copy or even a different book but anywho, anatomy study helps a lot with drawing people. |
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| Master Rade | Jun 5 2006, 05:24 AM Post #1709 |
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The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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;)Boundless as much I would like to shell out money. I ll stick to what ever I can see on the net and end less hours of photography of me and my manlyness.  As soon as I find another summer job ill try working on getting more proper books to study from 
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| C0mBineD | Jun 5 2006, 05:33 AM Post #1710 |
my name is written with a zero not an o
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everybody is always doing the awesome abs belly... but try and draw a normal belly not a fat belly. but a normal one where no abs are shown. just a belly button baby!! |
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| Master Rade | Jun 5 2006, 05:41 AM Post #1711 |
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The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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That idea is so crazy that it might just work
 :lol: Ill go with that C0mBine.  <--- Bitey abs
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| juggleballz | Jun 5 2006, 07:04 AM Post #1712 |
I'm loose, full of juice and ready for use!
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 its not a wonder that this dude still loves her!  Just look at the size of his boner! And no wonder he doesnt get a good night sleep! He wouldnt be able to roll over lol.
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| Bussman | Jun 5 2006, 07:40 AM Post #1713 |
FLASH GENIUS (I wish...)
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[size=7]HAHAHAHHAAAA[/size] man juggz, you always seem to amaze me |
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| Master Rade | Jun 5 2006, 07:57 AM Post #1714 |
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The Sexy Latino Supremeo
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So thats what ang really ment when she said "at least be realistic about your rampant musculature" :lol:
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| thegreatlol | Jun 5 2006, 09:19 AM Post #1715 |
Brackenwood Lightweight
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bordome = this http://img437.imageshack.us/my.php?image=face0ja.swf |
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| Jemooky | Jun 5 2006, 10:03 AM Post #1716 |
Matt
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 Also Rade, nobody can take your comic seriously if your grammar sucks. "Dam it Even in my sleep What is wrong with me Why do I still love her were just friends now." should be closer to: "Damn it. Even in my sleep... What is wrong with me? Why do I still love her? We're just friends now." Keep workin' at it. |
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| Thanatos | Jun 5 2006, 10:07 AM Post #1717 |
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... Tim ...♂
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:lol: Oh god the text sounds dirty there "Damnit.Even in my sleep, what is wrong with me" |
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| Zwickel | Jun 5 2006, 10:38 AM Post #1718 |
Brackenwood Heavyweight
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First the Godzillesque boners, then the wet dreams... what's going on!!!! :lol: |
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| psychomunkey3 | Jun 5 2006, 04:04 PM Post #1719 |
The Forum Medic
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Damn, I'm too late! You stole my idea. I was going to mention that, but I got a btter laugh from you doing it. :lol: Still, good work going Rade. Keep it up. You have really showed improvement.
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| fuzzyillogic | Jun 5 2006, 06:48 PM Post #1720 |
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certifiably psychotic
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juggleballz =
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| Prometheus | Jun 5 2006, 08:33 PM Post #1721 |
Shadow Lurker
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lets all bow before the Master Boner (Hint, frikkin name hint) |
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| Alandir | Jun 6 2006, 04:43 AM Post #1722 |
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Brackenwood Member
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I'm working on a picture of mine in photoshop. But as the newb I am im no good at it
 Tried to do some work on the environment. But i'm not completely satisfied.. there is no real depth in the picture, and the colors are a bit wrong. But thats only me, what do you think? feel free to critisize all you want 
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| ketchupface | Jun 6 2006, 08:45 AM Post #1723 |
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I think there's a few things that may help you can do to achieving more depth & improve the image overall: =First, use this --> http://z7.invisionfree.com/Brackenwood/ind...0&#entry7466433 It's an extremely useful thread cooked up by Kib, which I have actually learned a lot from. Unfortunately, the images seem to be gone. :\ =Overall, try sharpening things up a bit. Compared to the character, everything seems a bit out of focus. =The mountain closest to the foreground should have clearer detail & more of it than that of the mountains behind it. For each one that goes back, try desaturating them a bit & pulling the brightness up in small increments. The mountain in the far back (just to the right of the character's hip) should be just barely visible as the effects of atmosphere almost make it blend into the sky. Also the mountains overall look a bit too saturated when comparing them to how bright that sun/sky is. =The small log(?) object in the bottom left is somewhat unclear about what it is, & it seems to just sort of stop...unless it's supposed to grow from the mountain side. If it is a log, get some references to help you more clearly illustrate what you're going for. =If you keep that log-thing there, make sure the character is casting a shadow onto it, considering the position of the sun. =Compositionally, I'd re-arrange the mountains. It appears intentional that you were trying to lead the eye's attention to your character, but you can disguise this a bit more. Mountains generally aren't formed in this fashion. =The clouds appear to be roughly the same value/saturation. Vary these a bit more & follow the guidelines of brightness/saturation that Kib made in that link I mentioned above. =The ground to the right/behind the character looks a bit sphere-ish in shape. I'm not sure if that's what you're going for, but it looks odd, imo. =I like the light, loose lines you have in the sky near the sun. If it were mine, I'd experiment with them throughout the background. That is, if you aren't going for something extremely realistic. That's just me though. As for colors, it's hard to say (I'm not too great in color theory), so you'll just have to experiment with those. However, I think with some work, you could really pull off something nice. The character's already looking quite nice (I'm particularly fond of the furry part around his waist & his bottom half clothing). Again...read that thread above, that'll probably be most helpful for you. Good luck! -KF |
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| boundless | Jun 6 2006, 10:23 AM Post #1724 |
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This is something I drew in flash and I'm not sure where to go with it :ph43r: 
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| Festival Bobcats | Jun 6 2006, 10:51 AM Post #1725 |
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That's really good Boundless. What tool did you use? I assume it's the pencil but did you used ink or smoothing? |
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