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| Mathulus | Jul 4 2006, 07:46 AM Post #1801 |
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Well they arent suposed to "be" anything 
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| FLUDD | Jul 4 2006, 07:47 AM Post #1802 |
I am so smrt!
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lol, gotcha 
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| Anghenfil | Jul 4 2006, 08:11 AM Post #1803 |
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More chest hair, bigger junk. Add some love to the trunk. Mathalus, I'm really digging your character design in that flash, and the speech bubbles are very stylish. Make the pauses for dialogue shorter, but that's the only thing that's bugging me. |
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| Espen | Jul 4 2006, 08:14 AM Post #1804 |
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 i can try *sigh* |
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| Best Alero of Brackenwood | Jul 4 2006, 08:22 AM Post #1805 |
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woah i love that, the walking/sneaking is really good and those weapons look like rune scimy and rune dager from a game called runescape |
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| thegreatlol | Jul 4 2006, 03:16 PM Post #1806 |
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still trying to get used to the mouse...... http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=flag5ha.swf |
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| CLiNK | Jul 4 2006, 03:49 PM Post #1807 |
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Nice, come on down to the Daily Animation Thread lots of other stuff like this http://z7.invisionfree.com/Brackenwood/ind...pic=8809&st=105
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| Bucks | Jul 5 2006, 12:12 AM Post #1808 |
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Thanks Espen I fixed the rain, still a bit more work to do and then the end sequence which i havent started yet, but hopefully it should all come together in the end =) I added a few more shots as well enjoy link =) |
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 12:31 AM Post #1809 |
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ah man! that awesome, i so enjoyed the way you animate the blood. and the rain, almost as i didnt want to see it, was so really.  but, at the scene where you see the street ligth, the rain in the back, is moving to slow compared to the front rain. i would have speeden things up, besideds that, its gonna get a rank 5.0 on newgrounds man!  now finish it ! 
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| Bucks | Jul 5 2006, 01:13 AM Post #1810 |
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lol thanks and Espen , yeah i tried to make the blood stringy when it dripped hehe yeah i will speed it up i think or try and make it more mysty at the light hmm. but yeah thanks, still gotta rastize some of the backgrounds to speed things up and yea .... finish it lol i want to try and compose some music on guitar for it but see how i go cheers |
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 5 2006, 02:56 AM Post #1811 |
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Forest..y landscape anyone? I've been thinking about playing around with the colors a little bit. It seems to have a happy mood to me, but using different sky/sun/shadow colors could probably give like... a majestic type feel.  Anywho, check it out and as always, critiques are welcome. <Strong Bad voice> Check'a me out. </strong bad voice> |
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 04:14 AM Post #1812 |
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You have 3 types of symbolical objects in your picture, a little set of shroom, rocks and a single tree. ill call the trees, sun, clouds and mountain in the back a background. the stuff -I- like to see symbolical in a picture, are humans, but since your picture is named landscape, haveing natural plant "beings" starred is probably better. the clouds. they seem so cartoon, i allways splash clouds all over the place.  the our lines is just there for show where the clouds are. haveing that said, the forest seems so made, not natural. It looks more squared, from how dynamic as it should be. Try to fix that by adding more diffrent hights, tree lengths and diffrent leaf settings on some trees.  The shine from the sun that you see in the leaves are things i really like, be sure to add plenty of that, if your makeing the background forest any diffrent <3 glowing and shineing stuff (but you all knew that.) now, lets have a chat about the foreground. The hill, it's so.. alone. try makeing more rocks and more dirt and maybe another hill or another tree.  the mushrooms could maybe have been underneath a tree. If you add more to the foreground.  the picture is good, but some things are wrong. the weigth in the picture, also known as an compesition, are unbalanced. Thats why i really would like to see a another tree or hill at the other side to make it balanced.  if you've had something of what i have given advice about. The picture would probably look like this [Transform sounds lolerzzsz!1!]  -Espen
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 5 2006, 04:34 AM Post #1813 |
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Heh, espen, that critique litterally just made me look like this. yea... I'm gonna go back to that landscape and work on it some more... thanks for the help and... I'll post another WIP later on. |
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 01:38 PM Post #1814 |
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no problem mate, im just glad i can start help people now! |
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| Anghenfil | Jul 5 2006, 01:46 PM Post #1815 |
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Holy crap Espen... I have an art-boner a mile long from that epic verse. I agree with everything you just said, but I think your final composition is a little on the boring side (but not bad  ). Stagger the two trees on either side of the composition more, or get rid of one all together. I like how you curved the "cliff" to flow more through the picture.
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 02:04 PM Post #1816 |
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hahaha. yeah this is just the start, the next one will be longer  -Edit- not the art-boner, but the post that have a critiuqe from me. |
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| Anghenfil | Jul 5 2006, 02:08 PM Post #1817 |
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I love it when you talk dirty to me. Edit: Oh, you got me there. 
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 03:18 PM Post #1818 |
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i did! >:} makeing a fan art. ( where bingbong actually is SAD!, mainly because hes in the puberty, and sad about haveing no friends.) crits please. |
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 5 2006, 03:43 PM Post #1819 |
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espen, i'm digging your purple mountain majesties...
but how would someone know that bingbong is going through puberty? (usually people don't have that many chest hairs when going through puberty... :P) like maybe if you had something in the picture signifying he was going through it, then it'd both improve the picture, and it'd save having to explain it like a million times anyway keep up with that, i think it's gonna turn out pretty awesome |
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 03:54 PM Post #1820 |
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ah thanks man, show puberty, thats tough, the small zits is the only thing i can think of. im think of adding a girl into the picture (maybe they've broken up), but that would be lame, since there probably is no girl. anyways, the mountains are still under progress, they are not going to be like that, ugly color. thanks anyway man!
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 5 2006, 03:56 PM Post #1821 |
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two words. Shaving products.
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 03:58 PM Post #1822 |
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"L3T the DuDe have iTZ hairs, ITs h1s manhood" yeah, ill shave em off
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 5 2006, 04:03 PM Post #1823 |
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or you could have a speechbubble with a cracking effect on it... course then you'd have to ponder what he would be saying
haha I hope some of my ideas manage to help you... |
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| Espen | Jul 5 2006, 04:04 PM Post #1824 |
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yeah, offcours! everyword has thought me! i will do it better, for you! |
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| Cephas Cornwall | Jul 5 2006, 04:40 PM Post #1825 |
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wait............. you speak french???????????? |
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