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| neonakis | Jul 15 2006, 10:44 AM Post #1876 |
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your torso is still too long and stretched looking with no real indication of underlying definition or musculature, so she kinda looks like she's made out of stretched putty one of your arms is also longer than the other check out the proportions loomis uses:  now here's a comparison of yours and his:  note how much longer your torso is than the one loomis drew your crotch hangs far too low, throwing everything else off. (hahahah that last sentance was great) |
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| SneakyRobot | Jul 15 2006, 12:05 PM Post #1877 |
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ha ha ha this is awesome! :lol: the guy doesnt want critques to improve his skill at all he just wants to know how to accesorize some chick! how about you give her a flamethrower or an assult rifle. after all, many drawings of midevil-type fantasy sorcerors get to weild swords 'n stuff. replace a magic wand with a magical item that has a normal practical use as well. but most importantly.... give her the accesory of a proper set of proportions! |
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| neonakis | Jul 15 2006, 02:04 PM Post #1878 |
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well sorry for giving him tips to improve geez, i must have been wrong about this place, see i thought it was a board intended on giving people tips to improve their work sure he wants to know about accessorizing, but I personally don't feel he's quite ready to be worried about finer details yet. he still needs to iron out his basics. |
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| HadOne2Many | Jul 15 2006, 02:13 PM Post #1879 |
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Ok I think I fixed the main problem with this latest sketch.  Is it lookin better now? |
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| SneakyRobot | Jul 15 2006, 02:19 PM Post #1880 |
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no neo i wasnt ridiculing you about it i just thought it was funny that he was asking about something as trivial as accesorizing & that his actual request was going completely ignored |
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| HadOne2Many | Jul 17 2006, 02:35 PM Post #1881 |
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I agree with you, and if I came off otherwise it was accidental. I do value your input and although I was originally seeking advice other than what you offered I have taken your advice and completely reworked the entire character. Please disregard any detructive remarks posted by others and continue to concentrate on constructive critism. |
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| Espen | Jul 17 2006, 05:31 PM Post #1882 |
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Started the C.H.O.W crits on back would be nice. 
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| Cel | Jul 17 2006, 05:52 PM Post #1883 |
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Well, the background needs alot of work. The guys robe doesnt look very 3D-ish like cloak thingy on his shoulders. I think there should be some folds or something on it. |
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| Espen | Jul 17 2006, 06:07 PM Post #1884 |
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 better? :lol: yeah ofc. I know the background needs alot of work, what i really wanted as a crit, was what do add there, what would have been cool. what color'n'stuff. |
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| Best Alero of Brackenwood | Jul 17 2006, 06:37 PM Post #1885 |
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needs a godly aroara thingy
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| Calco | Jul 17 2006, 10:56 PM Post #1886 |
"Get Funked"
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 Heres a picfor a character im working on for a flash im hoping to do with Eviljo called Goatboy. |
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| Bussman | Jul 18 2006, 12:34 AM Post #1887 |
FLASH GENIUS (I wish...)
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...and henceforth the human form of Bitey emerged... |
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| zigityzigitywokk | Jul 18 2006, 03:31 AM Post #1888 |
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hahaha, well the only thing I noticed that stood out on your goat-boy is that his elbows are um... ginormous. Maybe scaling them down a bit would make him look a little less strange... (other than the fact that he's a goat-boy  )
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| boundless | Jul 18 2006, 05:30 AM Post #1889 |
stuck in the third dimension
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its some sick combination of adam and bitey  
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| Pillow | Jul 18 2006, 07:30 AM Post #1890 |
SEX RED!!!
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This is what I'm currently working on. The other arm still needs to be added but I'm stuck on the face. Once I'm done I need to clean up the lines too. Could really do with some advice though
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| Calco | Jul 18 2006, 10:06 AM Post #1891 |
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 , well hes a skinny guy, so they are supposed to look a lil bigger, but not that big, but it was the first time i drew him on flash, with the right smoothing
..thank..you? It was inspired by Bitey and a book i was reading called Seeker. Looks goodpillow, but the left foot is a lil strange 
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| Pillow | Jul 18 2006, 11:12 AM Post #1892 |
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SEX RED!!!
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ooo your right as well thanks! To the drawing board! but first I need sleep |
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| Best Alero of Brackenwood | Jul 18 2006, 12:11 PM Post #1893 |
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maybe something like this
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| Andros | Jul 18 2006, 12:20 PM Post #1894 |
Check my location.
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Thingie Not really that great yet, but definitely the most atmospheric thing I've done yet. Crits on the character, feel, programming, etc. etc. Anything goes. I want it to be something new (so of course the beginning will be a lot longer, more animated, and less cliched). The character himself was just an experiment with a new type of lighting I was trying, which I think worked rather well. Then again, I know absolutely nothing about animation or art that I didn't figure out myself, so I could be horribly wrong about everything. |
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| w00t | Jul 24 2006, 12:12 PM Post #1895 |
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[size=7]G'day Y'all![/size] I'm currently working on a series of animations, this is the only one that i have made a connected scene. Introducing... Buzz & Franky It features Buzz running down a peer. I drew every step he takes, no copy and pasting frames or resizing fur. It took me one whole sleepless night to create this, and it was a skool night.. I am truly buggered. Crits and Compliments Please. :lol: Thanks a Bunch! byby Edit: No Preload, or colour. |
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| Thanatos | Jul 25 2006, 04:22 PM Post #1896 |
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... Tim ...♂
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 I'm redoing my site in a more personal style, this is one of the images I made for it. |
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| Psybola | Jul 26 2006, 11:29 AM Post #1897 |
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Gone and never to return
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 Character I'm working on in Flash.  I like the overall style and look of that image Tim! 
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| Espen | Jul 26 2006, 11:32 AM Post #1898 |
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 i love it, the shine is so animationtastic as it gets! good work joel
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| Psybola | Jul 26 2006, 11:36 AM Post #1899 |
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Gone and never to return
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Shiny!!
:lol: Thanks Espen! |
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| Sharlston | Jul 26 2006, 09:50 PM Post #1900 |
Arse.
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I just licked the screen
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