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| akpaintslinger | Aug 17 2006, 06:24 PM Post #1951 |
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You're joking, of course!?  I suppose that's a way of getting crisp clean lines! And you can say you built them all by hand. :bing:... pixel by pixel...  ------------------------------------- Here is a piece I've started to colour from a sketch:  - Much cleanup will be needed for this one, I'm afraid... You can see where I got impatient and skiggled strokes a bit. - The forearms are really bugging me... I can't seem to shade them properly according to the light-source from above.
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| HadOne2Many | Aug 18 2006, 03:28 AM Post #1952 |
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A slight exaggeration on my part  . I use the size 19 brush for most of it, them zoomed in on the edges, and then did it pixel by pixel.Your picture is looking good, I feel that he is angry and frustrated at the same time, like he just got knocked down and got up again. It made me think about his situation. |
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| yellowknots | Aug 18 2006, 04:01 AM Post #1953 |
jag dricker läsk
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Yeah he looks angry, kinda reminds me of the guy from manhunt or hitman. Nice job. |
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| Salter1701 | Aug 18 2006, 12:05 PM Post #1954 |
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I suppose I could pass this off as a finished piece, but I wanna add more to it. Some Crits would be nice
 
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| medved | Aug 18 2006, 12:20 PM Post #1955 |
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It looks good but mabye add other tombstones in the backround, mabye crows flying in the sky, or different shaped clouds other than the sky being hazy and foggy. Just think of stuff to add and it would most likely look better. Just don't add too much or viewers might be overwhelmed, or the pic might look too clutered. Very nice job.
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| Anghenfil | Aug 18 2006, 12:30 PM Post #1956 |
PELICAAAAAN
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The grass looks very flat. Extend the blades over the hill lines and in front of the tomestone. Colors are pretty good though. 
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| Salter1701 | Aug 18 2006, 12:39 PM Post #1957 |
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Thankyou medved & Anghenfil. I'll keep your tips in mind when I finish it off.
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| Deleted User | Aug 18 2006, 07:00 PM Post #1958 |
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yeh i rekon a crow should be on top of that tombstone, maybe an open grave? how did u do ur grass btw it looks really good in my oppinion. |
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| juggleballz | Aug 18 2006, 07:14 PM Post #1959 |
I'm loose, full of juice and ready for use!
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Ya could maybe desaturate the background just a little by adding some subtle mist clouds building up. I would also embed the tomestone more into the ground, cuz it looks like it is just sitting on top of a hill. The text doesnt look like it has been etched into the stone either. Looks printed. Using simple bevels in Photoshop effectively could do the fob quite easily. other than that and what Ang and Med said, I think its looking pretty good. I do like the colour scheme |
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| Pillow | Aug 18 2006, 07:45 PM Post #1960 |
SEX RED!!!
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a little soil where the tomb enters the gound? How old is the grave? would moss have started growing on it? Do people visit the guy and leave flowers? Maybe they did once but not in ages so there're dead flowers infront of the grave? It's all up to you the peice looks great. I want it!
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| HadOne2Many | Aug 19 2006, 10:07 AM Post #1961 |
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Looking good Salter1701, can't wait to see it finished. Here's something I might finish within the next year :rolleyes:  The Zombies are just for placement and pose ideas, so yeah...Crits? |
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| Anghenfil | Aug 20 2006, 09:36 PM Post #1962 |
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It have come to my attention recently that my lighting is ass, not fit to shade a donkey's butt cheeks. So here's lighting exercise number one million or whatever so I can be as good as the Norwegian crazy folk some day. Have at it, you wolves. |
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| Comlock | Aug 20 2006, 11:45 PM Post #1963 |
These are my leafs:
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Sigh, the worst thing is that I cant see any progression from you. Your lighthing is not realy god and...no, kidding. What are you talking about?! That looks awesome! Its a great mix of both saturated and desaturated colours! That lighting made it realy come to life. If I had to come with a crit it would be that the fins on the head still doesent look quite transparent yet. But I dont know how to fix it and make it more realistic. Infact, I cant realy see anything that has to be fixed with the colours at the moment. I think It looks great! 
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| Ravenseye | Aug 21 2006, 01:33 AM Post #1964 |
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That looks awsome ang! I love the character and hope to see more here in the future! |
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| medved | Aug 21 2006, 02:49 AM Post #1965 |
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I don't no anything about lighting so im just going to say it looks great... It looks great! keep up the awesome work!!
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| Deleted User | Aug 21 2006, 09:26 PM Post #1966 |
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nah i agree with the first thing commie said, ur lighting leaves a lot to be desired u suck balls.....
Infact, i was just working on a masterpiece myself, and if you take a little time to learn from my genius maybe you will get sumwhere..... (coodnt be fucked with floor)  *extreme sarcasm* to everything above |
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| Pillow | Aug 21 2006, 09:59 PM Post #1967 |
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that's some kick ass shading!  my only crit is the left leg, either the foots not in the right place of it's at the wrong angle...i could be just seeing things though edit: Oh wait im seeing things, the foot is facing forward...maybe it's the hips that are slightly off...ignore the crazy fool :lol: |
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| Salter1701 | Aug 22 2006, 01:55 AM Post #1968 |
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Hi all. Thanks for all of your feedback on my grave pic. It was really helpful
Here's the finished piece. tommo
I just used the Grass brush tool Nice work on your creature there Anghenfil, the lighting looks spot on.
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| Zwickel | Aug 22 2006, 08:34 AM Post #1969 |
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Great work as always guys! Nce coloring Riannon, and man...I love that pic akpaint. |
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| Pillow | Aug 22 2006, 08:46 AM Post #1970 |
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SEX RED!!!
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I like how you put the silhoutte of death in the background! |
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| CLiNK | Aug 22 2006, 09:36 AM Post #1971 |
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Yeah, excellent work Salter, I also see death
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| Salter1701 | Aug 22 2006, 11:14 AM Post #1972 |
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Thanks
Yeh Death was added last minute. I felt there had to be something standing in the fog.
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| Ravenseye | Aug 22 2006, 12:39 PM Post #1973 |
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Heres the latest image i have been working on. Im unsure if i want to go on to do the back ground at this point in time but i think it would be a good choice to do so for expierence. 
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| Deleted User | Aug 22 2006, 05:27 PM Post #1974 |
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salter!!! what about the crow??!?!!????
:angry: lol jk nah it looks really good i love it the colors you used are perfect, it is now my desktop background just for my satisfaction... 
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| Salter1701 | Aug 23 2006, 03:43 AM Post #1975 |
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Hey nice crow :o. it fits in nicely. Looks like you made it a tad darker aswell, makes it look better.
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