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Topic Started: Jul 4 2005, 04:00 PM (92,729 Views)
Divine_Walrus
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His chest/torso area seems off to me, but I'm not quite sure what it is. I think it's the fact that his body is angled to the right, and the enormous chest muscle on the right isn't consistant with that. Also the curved line on top of his lower left arm (the one on our right) which goes into his upper arm seems to go too far in...if you know what I mean. It shouldn't go that far past the right edge of his upper arm. If you're confused by my explanation, I'll circle it for you. I don't think I explained it very well... :P
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Calco
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@ Woot- oops, lol :P

@ Edible- thats just a reminder for me as to where the nose shading has to be, its not his nose :P

@ Dave - Could you possibly be more confusing :P Can you show me what you mean?

Anyone guessed who it is yet?



EDIT: More line work

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w00t
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lol.. im bad at this..
the flash?
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Calco
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A NEW kid flash, but, HIGH FIVE!!!
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Calco
Aug 29 2006, 09:19 PM
Dave - Could you possibly be more confusing :P Can you show me what you mean?

Anyone guessed who it is yet?



EDIT: More line work

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:lol: Yeah, here's a pic:

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Basically that line shouldn't be as long as it is right now, just erase a bit off the end and you should be sweet.

Btw, I'm guessing... Kid Flash?
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w00t g0 me
*high fives calco*
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D'oh, didn't notice that it had already been guessed. Btw Cal, Flash's belt is looking a little high there. I know he's older than Kid Flash, but he's not that old :P

:rolleyes:
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Calco
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LOl, MAYBE HE HAS PROLEMS YOU KNOW!!! you didnt tell me whif it was good though
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Calco.. personally i like the kiddo better than the ol' pappy.. but i like papa flash too :D
paps is lookin a bit skinny though (wrists, waist, thighs).. u been feeding him enough?
:P
Keep up the good work!


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Aug 29 2006, 04:14 PM
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If you want to build some depth with your image, you could try using those flowers dotting the ground all the way back to the buildings like you've started with the grass. The blades of grass tend to pop a bit, I would use a lighter shade of green & it may blend a little better.
The man seems somewhat stiff, especially against the curling buildings in the background. I almost want to see him distorted too, but that's just a pesonal choice.

I used to really like that song, haven't heard it in ages, though. All I Want was another one off of Ixnay that was good too.

A while back, I used the "Intermission" song for backing music in a
fake commercial of mine.

Be interested to see how yours comes out!
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Haha, that commercial rocked, KF; hell, i'd pay to see that on tv. ;)
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lol that looks so friggin professional, i love it!
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http://www.deviantart.com/download/35619200/

currently 70% done with the bulk of the animation, i gotta go back and add some extra detail, improve graphics and animation etc.

Just wanted to see what you guys think of it so far
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Calco
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I got back last night at 11, havent been able to post alot lately

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paps is lookin a bit skinny though (wrists, waist, thighs).. u been feeding him enough?


Its sorta my style.. :blink:
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Comlock
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These are my leafs:
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Some random scribbles. I was trying to do some cartoony gestures without refs aswell =/
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I hate you! ;)
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Calco
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Comlock "Yeah, I just had 5 spare minutes, so I decided to whip a little something up, just a sketch."

;) :P
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Here's the next update of this painting! The shading is becoming a struggle-- but I'll tackle it in due time:

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- Solidified colours
- Added more shade
- Added highlights
- Erased sketch lines
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http://media.putfile.com/A-tribute-to-James--he-will-be-miss
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long time lurker figured it's about time I added in here.

Working on a cartoon blog. This is my friend Lisa and I.

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Calco
Sep 3 2006, 07:57 PM
Comlock "Yeah, I just had 5 spare minutes, so I decided to whip a little something up, just a sketch."

;) :P

More like "Eh.. I was bored... so I made this epic masterpiece."
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[size=7]G'day Y'all![/size]

I'm taking up yet another project, this one is of an interactive horror animation.
Just some sketches of the freaky things.
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crits please, i need also some suggestions on the kind of creatures one would see when going insane due to an internal evil voice.
Thanks a Bunch!
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dude u need a better camera or jsut take the picutres right, also rotate them so they are on the proper angle. i cant see a friggin thing u have drawn....
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G'day Tommo!

yeah sorry bout the lack of definity in the pictures.. i cant use my scanner at the moment.. due to technical difficulties.. ur gunna have to cope with the cruddy quality of my webcam.
byby


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something im working on .. i call it "hardwork and harmony"


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