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Finished Art Thread!; post'em here! ;)
Topic Started: Nov 28 2005, 07:22 AM (58,979 Views)
humbleego
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Gee, thanks for pointing that out... I hadn't noticed... <_< :P
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Neyals
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This is something i did in my art class it looks abit shabby and for that i am sorry.
Please give crit and feedback

You can click on it to see a bigger version and yes i know his ears look like bacon

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<edit> And i apologise if its abit too small i had trouble hosting it (file too big) and i had to lower the quality alot
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Petrish
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humbleego
Feb 1 2006, 07:06 PM
Gee, thanks for pointing that out... I hadn't noticed... <_< :P

hey don't take it badly, it's just we wanna know how dr.scrooge's IBS thing ends... :D
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Zwickel
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Yay.
Well, Im not too good but heres a small thing i made.Posted Image
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akpaintslinger
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Howdy there, Nevals.
Could be ya have a bad scanner-- otherwise your paper is riddled with white dots! :lol:
Lots of deep value in there, it's an interesting pose he's in, too. Seeing it makes me want to see more of his figure. :huh:

Cool piece, Zwickel. I like the bold outlines. :bitey:
He looks a bit stiff, though! You might try drawing out a quick skeleton first, so you can keep trying until it comes out how you like. After that, drawing on clothes is a snap!

Here is a renovated piece of mine from the daily sketch thread: (a big thanks to kib for the critique. :))

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Neyals
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akpaintslinger
Feb 6 2006, 07:32 PM
Howdy there, Nevals.
Could be ya have a bad scanner-- otherwise your paper is riddled with white dots! :lol:
Lots of deep value in there, it's an interesting pose he's in, too.  Seeing it makes me want to see more of his figure. :huh:


It was crosshatched (lines crossing each other to make tones) all done with a black biro which basically means the white dots are inevitable. Lol and my name is Neyals but dont worry bout that lol
Also it is a drawing of a picture of a man heading a football but i messed up so i cropped it.
I like your monster thingy congrats on such a good piece!
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Zwickel
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akpaintslinger
Feb 6 2006, 07:32 PM

Cool piece, Zwickel.  I like the bold outlines. :bitey:
He looks a bit stiff, though! You might try drawing out a quick skeleton first, so you can keep trying until it comes out how you like. After that, drawing on clothes is a snap!

Ya lol, I still have to practice dynamic poses :P


Nice pic man, just try to make the lines around it not too sketchy.
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kojisan
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wow some very good drawing check out mine tell me what you guy think?
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sorry about the size.
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-AnTiSeAl-
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Nice Koji a few things

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This is a quick redline outlining some problems in the anatomy (Dont mind if i made her a bit anorexic :rolleyes: ) most notably the few proportion problems would be her torso, left shoulder, and right hip.


Her torso is a bit too cylindrical for a female. It should curve in a bit more at the middle and push back out to her shoulder near the top.

Her shoulders seemed a bit too wide and flat, just a few fixes in the shoulder positioning can cure this.

Her hip just wasnt as full as it should be, a womans hips are full and round compared to a mans, and in most cases curve out from the bottom of the torso.

I hope that helped, great drawing,
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Nice Koji a few things
This is a quick redline outlining some problems in the anatomy (Dont mind if i made her a bit anorexic  ) most notably the few proportion problems would be her torso, left shoulder, and right hip.
Her torso is a bit too cylindrical for a female. It should curve in a bit more at the middle and push back out to her shoulder near the top.
Her shoulders seemed a bit too wide and flat, just a few fixes in the shoulder positioning can cure this.
Her hip just wasnt as full as it should be, a womans hips are full and round compared to a mans, and in most cases curve out from the bottom of the torso.
I hope that helped, great drawing,


thank you that will really help me out, but as you can see im not really good at drawing hands. what is a good what to start drawing hand and can i see your art works. Thanks
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-AnTiSeAl-
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a good site would be www.polykarbon.com

They have a good section on hands.
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Shenorai
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La ti da...this was a quickie, actually...This was a request from a friend of mine at school;

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C&C's are most welcome.
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Neyals
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Kojisan i think if you add a nose it will look much better :D :D

And shenorai i like the wings but the head looks abit too big for the body Buut well done both of you they look great :) :)
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Psybola
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Black guy.
kojisan
Feb 7 2006, 07:18 PM
wow some very good drawing check out mine tell me what you guy think?
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sorry about the size.

that's some nice work there, kojisan. i like the face and the hair. it looks very realistic. for crits, AntiSeal's got you covered. ;)
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akpaintslinger
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Hey, Psybola--
It's shocking to know that this picture was done from a sketch--- Your anatomy is coming along quite nicely, btw. :)

Great use of soft, colours, shadows and texture. (especially in the hair.) Good detail on the eyes, too.

Here's a quick critique:
-The line on her belly tone should be curved more inward because of the direction she is facing.. (curves = good ;))
-Her mouth is just a little off center to the right.
-Show her far forearm/hand. (so we don't think it's itching her backside :gasp:)

Great work, man. I do hope she shows up in the doodle thread again sometime. :bing:

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This is kinda done and ive been working on this for some time now.
I did my little sketch's and all. Been going nice but crit it.
edit forgot to put the img.

Well the back ground is just random colors of my flag and hers mix all in one.
I just close my eyes and went with wat ever I had going on in my mind.
Trying to bring back the one moment and just showing wat when on.
Nothing to wild.

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Final version of it all

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sorry its so small but Photobucket is just resizing my image's making them really tiny. Plus image shack is saying this is pornographic.
Well any ways you cant see it but it has shading. I cant seem to show the update version with the lettering I did. Well you guys dont need see it.

Just four more days I think. So crit crit crit and maybe ill have it even better before she can witness it.
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Feb 11 2006, 07:43 AM
This is kinda done and ive been working on this for some time now.
I did my little sketch's and all. Been going nice but crit it.

:huh: :huh: :huh: :huh: :huh:


Psybola that's lookin nice...another thing I'd like to add though is that her left leg is a little too fat...for the direction she's facing that is.....and that little curve on her right leg where her hip meets the top of her leg is just a little strange.....
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Master Rade
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Photobucket has made me its B!#$%@

sorry I edit my post, any one knows any better img hosting place. Even if it might cost me $$$
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www.putfile.com ;)
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Master Rade
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Feb 11 2006, 08:22 AM
www.putfile.com ;)

thanks and im just bear with me.
In short. I work on it with little doodle.
Felt it should be better. Redid it. While making it I got F--king virus and everything nearly got destory. All most some of img file from my manga that I rework on which now makes me teary, all that work.

So im glad this was save. Cuz I was just drawing blind. I let my feelings take over and guid me.

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Shenorai
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@ Master Rade; ...how the heck is that considered porn? :huh:

Anywho...
Here's one I finished recently. For a quick description, check my SSS thread;

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C&C's most welcome. Just wish the scanner didn't somehow cut off those ears in the shadow...
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Feb 11 2006, 03:27 PM
@ Master Rade; ...how the heck is that considered porn? :huh:


umm...I think something got lost in translation....damn language barriers.....

but yeah...that looks cool rade....is that your sweeeet heart :P ....i like the background :)

Shen...that looks great....though try making the werewolf fur more random....it looks like it's all been combed downwards....
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Erska
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Hello! :rolleyes:
It's been a while when I last time posted anything here, so here's something new..
Well I did that like 2 weeks ago so its not that new, but I couldn't post this earlier, because I don't have Internet on my new computer :yfok:

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It's not really finished because the one i'm drawing right now has a body and animated eyes.. (eye blink and that pupil thing cats do.. :lol: )
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Psybola
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28955448/
First sketched, then photo'ed, inked in Illustrator, colored in Corel PhotoPaint
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