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| bardaux | May 15 2006, 06:40 AM Post #676 |
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You should consider changing your name, cantdraw05.... It's hard to crit the nice loose style you have, but I will say one thing. You can still work on shading the cloth. What I see, you used single brush strokes to define wrinkles, but remember that the whole back bart of the cloth is gonna be in shadows because, well, light isn't hitting it! And doing slick clean lines is tricky, especially with brush tools. You can try using the pen tool to make lines, then do Stroke Path to actually make the lines. Or try making the lines in Illustrator. Looks good still, like the style! |
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| boundless | May 16 2006, 01:26 PM Post #677 |
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I was messing around in Painter and ended up with something I liked a lot. I really like that program. Anyway, heres what I drew: Click Here For Full Image (DeviantArt) |
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| Festival Bobcats | May 16 2006, 01:26 PM Post #678 |
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is that done with a blue pencil? |
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| boundless | May 16 2006, 01:31 PM Post #679 |
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yeah but not a real blue pencil.. I used the pencil tool in Painter to draw it |
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| Pillow | May 17 2006, 07:06 AM Post #680 |
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actaully those breast are pretty much in the right place women with a smaller chest womens chest tend to defy gravity. Also she's leaning forward slightly so it's unlikely they hang down... anyways off this sunject :lol: boundless that drawing is just wow 
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| Deleted User | May 18 2006, 09:57 PM Post #681 |
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barduax i like the coloring ALOT! it looks amazing, so it kills me to say this.... lol sorry, but it jsut sturck me straight away, when looking at it.... the proportions on the legs are totally wrong!, i mean imagine her standing up, her legs are looking too small in my opinion..... besides that it looks great! keep up the good work, all you have to do is get the proportions right, then you coloring is amazing, so jsut keep up the saem standards, and u will get better and better! |
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| thegreatlol | May 19 2006, 06:45 AM Post #682 |
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nice drawings here ive made a bg because i got bourd http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c271/the.../background.swf |
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| cantdraw05 | May 19 2006, 09:50 PM Post #683 |
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another two hours work...the weather is hot here in taiwan...thinking of ways to keep cool
 crits please...the only thing i dont really like is the hand on the right..looks kinda long and wierd oh well.. |
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| Deleted User | May 20 2006, 12:26 AM Post #684 |
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lol yeh thats true the hand looks really shit lol!
:lol: but the rest looks really nice! although im not sure what the wierd lines on the hips are supposed to be, and the belly button mark in the dress looks a bit funny too... |
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| Comlock | May 20 2006, 01:22 AM Post #685 |
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That looks realy nice cantdraw05=) You're anatomy is getting quite good. but: I think the bone on her left wrist should have been moved to the other side. (facing outside, not inside) (just look at your own hand) If you'll try to imagine her rightshoulder (since it's hidden behind that "eskimo-fur") it ends up pretty high. So that looks a bit unatureal. her head: the gap between her right eye and right ear seems a bit big. Atleast compared to gap between her left eye, and left ear. But other than that its realy good I think. Those flaws you did wasn't realy that obious either^^ Arvid... That name sounds sooo Norwegian 
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| Rubberhead | May 20 2006, 01:28 AM Post #686 |
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Damn, you're getting better with each post! More! |
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| bardaux | May 20 2006, 10:43 AM Post #687 |
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Cantdraw, something we can both work on is shading and tone. I was talking to this AMAZING concepual artist for video games and he looked at my stuff. One thing he told me was that color is the last thing to worry about, and learning tone and value is essential. That is, practice and look at real life, etc, to see how light affects and object and its shadows. With your ice pic, I thought it was a pregnant woman because there is little shading. It's ok not to have a solid beam light source, but there should be some method to shading. If you don't want to shade something as if it is lit from a direct source, you can still define form and edges by shading more around the edges of things. |
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| Rubberhead | May 20 2006, 10:50 AM Post #688 |
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This is true, infact, if your tones and values are right pretty much any color will work out. That's why some artists (including me) often sketch in black and white and to focus on the values and glaze over the colors. *edit* Oh Bardaux, who was the guy? Does he have a site? |
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| bardaux | May 20 2006, 02:55 PM Post #689 |
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No, no website that I know of. The guy worked at a place in my town called "Nihilistic Software", a gaming company. I was visiting because one of my friends interned there and I wanted to check the place out, possibly to get a part-time summer job. Nihilistic has made "Vampire: the Masquerade", "Marvel Nemesis: Rise of the Imperfects", and worked briefly on "Starcraft: Ghost" before Blizzard switched developers. They are working on a PS3 game now, I can't say anything about it because I signed an agreement, but it is looking damn sweet. |
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| Cel | May 20 2006, 11:51 PM Post #690 |
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Wow! Awesome pic! Here's a little something I did this morning. |
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| cantdraw05 | May 21 2006, 03:17 AM Post #691 |
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coooool cel its reno..like the collar piece and im not norwegian comlock hehe im belizean dunno where my dad got my name from oh well... and yea i have trouble with shading cloth...only something i can improve with lots of practice |
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| Villageidiot | May 21 2006, 08:33 AM Post #692 |
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that looks GREAT cel...except it would look better if the hair didn't look like it had 35 lbs. (or kilos) or gel in it... Make it flow like the collar...and it will look sooooo much better..(though it already looks great!) ~Jordan |
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| KiWi | May 23 2006, 09:58 AM Post #693 |
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I don't watch anime but I think that's how it moves. Cel that animation is great, keep it up. |
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| Ravenseye | May 23 2006, 11:30 AM Post #694 |
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Rawr! Um im not the best with color but heres a guy i did. http://www.uploadfile.info/uploads/a60191f7c0.jpg -The eye of the raven |
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| cantdraw05 | May 25 2006, 10:40 PM Post #695 |
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another 2 hour work...her face kinda reminds me of a hobbit hehe...must be the hair.
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| Anghenfil | May 25 2006, 11:12 PM Post #696 |
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Nice. Love the beefy forearm, but the line going across her arm at the elbow isn't correct. The line that trails off going into her upper arm is. Put a little color or highlight into her eyes, and give her some facial expression. Her face is a little freaky. Your ear placement is better this time around, but it should be higher. You've got a tangent line where her left arm meets her butt. Overlap that slightly or move them apart. Good weightshift on the hips and shoulders; as far as I can tell it's correct. Her left shoulder is low, but just slightly. The top half of her back could stand to be twisted a little more, I think. Pretty close overall. Great colors. I love the style of your work... But your line quality could stand to be cleaned up. Either spend more time going over it with a brush set to 100% opacity (not black), or invest in a vector software like Flash or Illustrator. I think you could do same amazing things with vector. |
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| Bussman | May 27 2006, 12:24 AM Post #697 |
FLASH GENIUS (I wish...)
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Just finished this, took like 23 Minutes, gonna put some words on it and pop it into the Prop-Poster Thread
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| Deleted User | May 27 2006, 09:22 PM Post #698 |
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were u on shrooms? lol i like it but its really messy ..... nice abstracty kinda thing tho.... |
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| cantdraw05 | May 28 2006, 05:19 PM Post #699 |
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finished this one after much time wasting...i'd come back sketch a bit and hate it then go watch tv come back hate it some more so it was slow especially with my internet down i was frustrated. oh well its done now..i put it in deviantart cause dont wanna waste imageshack space hehe browny crits please |
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| Ravenseye | May 29 2006, 01:57 AM Post #700 |
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That looks really nice. It kinda looks like her left brest is pushed completely to the side maybe stretch the shadow underneath it a little more to the right so it doesnt look so flat. Thats what i see but other then that it looks great! You think your going to make posters and stuff of these? If no you wernt i would suggest it for the future... ya know something to do on the side. |
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