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Cyris Iris VS Flammae/ The Sequal to Cyris Iris; Cyris Iris is being published
Topic Started: Dec 30 2005, 11:09 AM (204 Views)
Emerald_Fang
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Well ive finish Cyris Iris and now am as far along as EFP Mexico. We Now are international! Ok for those who didnt know anything of cyris iris before Brackenwood then you wouldnt know of Project Flammae. Project Flammae was the published comic of Flammae and eventaully Cyris Iris comic was published. EFP USA thought that the EFP USA orginials should be warring enemies. NOTE: This is the back story of the movie, expected to come out in 2008, as noted on newgrounds and nex-cube very very long time ago.

Cyris Iris
V.S.
Flammae
Chapter 1m part one, Into the Dragon's Maw
Cyris blasted the large bolted doors, demolishing them and gaining entry into the Dragon's Den. With every step Cyris, Biohazard, and Darkskull all felt the ground pulsate with life. Remebering that the cave they stood in was Aldaron's most inner fortress. the cave had a strange red glow and various cyrstiline objects prtruding from the walls. The floor was smooth, glazed with a sense of danger. After almost an hour of walking they came to a clearing in the castle. There stood Aldaron, poised to strike. His once red, flaming eyes, now a milky white and glowed. His pefect claws now a dull yellow and crack. His horn had a dim inner glow. the dragon had grown weak from creating this den.

Cyris broke the sillence by yelling " Aldaron your terror ends here, killing devin, destroying my family, and killing Dark skull's mother was to much"
Aldaron replied " What of it pathetic wretch?"

Cyris charged with his flaming sword ablaze. Slicing deep into the dragon's thick hide. Aldaron merly laughed and flung Cyris off. the dragon the started to glowed a purple tint until he was completely consumed in light. He emerged with three heads, he was taller, and had had his former power replentished. He shot a fiery blast from every mouth toward Cyris. Cyris dodged and returned to his hit-and-run tatic. He ran as hastily as he could on the walls of the living castle. Close behind lied the blast.

now the famous








































To Be continued
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Ignia
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Very nice Emerald! You have some talent. You didn't specifically ask for cratiques, but that's what I do :lol:

Ait. The living room and dragon had wonderful imagry. However you used some echoes that didn't parallel. You used 'glow' twice, and the "and now milky white," and "now a dull yellow" did not seem paralleled, but read more like an echo which can be distracting.

Your dialogue needs work. It was... cheesy. ixnay on the queso. Try something like "Aldaron, it's time I brought your bloodbath to an end!" or "Aldaron, your nefarious actions have brought about your downfall!" or "Aldaron, your impudence... erm... makes me want to rip your claws off and stab them through your throat!" I dunno! Something like that! Give us some flare!

Flaming sword ablaze: awesomely cool, but redundant.

With the three heads and taller, your imagry was not up to par with the beginning. You've shown us what you can do! Don't back down now! I want to SEE it!

And that's about it. Keep writing and good luck!
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Jdave
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I got a gap between this and Cyris Iris.
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Emerald_Fang
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ignia im just writing a bit and i dont mind critques except that one who gave Cyris Iris The begining a 4 out of 10 :angry: but most of them were high.

Jdave there is a gap buddy, this is the sequal, after Cyris Iris the begining(MAN so many copyrights at the end, im going to kill myself!). This is the second book, which is going to be online ONLY until Emerald_Fang_Prodcutions get the Cyris Iris VS Flammae movie done. This book is meant to bridge the gap from the first Cyris Iris to the Cyris VS Flammae movie. The movie begins(spoilers)with the fight against Aldaron. andi need people to know about Aldaron's death.


Cyris Iris The Begining will hit shelves in 2006 late fall.

Spirit: Fire Of the soul will be realeased Jan. 8th

The New Adventure of Fang hits comic store shelves March 18thish


Cyris Iris, Spirit, Fang, and other related titles are trademarks of Emerald Fang Productions 06. Copyrighted, and protected by law, any recreating these or retelling these imagintory images of Emerald Fang Productions outside of staff and Phinox Blaze, Balck Char, Darkskull, and Snow Studios ( not NG's SS ). All rights Reserved. (this kills any happy moments :worry: ) (i hate typing these it is the killer of comics but it keeps me LEGAL :gasp: )


And 2005 Staff list

Character Design: Diamond Fang B)

Editor: Topaz Fang :P " never wondered why he hated me!"

Writer: Ruby Fang "am i done yet?"

Concept Art Director: Alan Roane(ruby)

Art department: Ryan Jahola(topaz)
Thomas Jones (diamond)
John Ende (me, Emerald)

Co-Head of Productions: Alan Roane

Master Of All Gems, Emerald Fang

Founder and Leader of all Departments, Concept Art and writing, brainstorm, movie actor(voice of cyris), and of all things Emerald........




























[size=14] John"Emerald"Ende[/size]

Happy Newyears brackenwood!
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Jdave
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Im confused man. You really lost me now.
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Emerald_Fang
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Jdave ok read above my 05 staff list and the copyrightings and youll see. Cyris Iris The Begining is being published and it is not all on brackenwood. You gotta read the book to see all of what leads into this book!
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Emerald_Fang
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Modys' sorry!! double posting is evil i hate doing it! but the story must live!

this is where the movie picks up on in the opening!


Chapter 2
The Red terror Dies

Cyris ran fast along the castle walls with the large balst following him. He jumped off at a nearby corner. Cyris used his fireball aura strike, cuasing Aldaron's heads to take major damage, and taking one completly off! Aldaron charged towards Cyris and threw a massive fireball at him. It knocked Cyris down, and K.O.'d him. Darkskull and Bio used their ranged attacks to lure him away from Cyris's body.


Hearing his friend's pain Cyris rose this time with a glow and suddenly he changed into a strange fiqure. Cyris rose into the air glowing a bright green and then started to release a large amount of energy. This all formed into a small ball, in which Cyris threw at Aldaron. This made the beast blow into a large mushroom cloud and destroying Aldaron's lair.


Next Chapter

Flammae, Ooze of the Future

" Suddenly The tallest skyscraper was infested" dont miss Cyris DS and Bio go covert Ops
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Emerald_Fang
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Chapter 3 Flammae, The Infestation~ Soundtack music Points of Authority/Linkin Park

Cyris and the Darkskull both went into town to get treatment for their injuries, Biohazard left to his island, and now a this story hits the twist.


Cyris and DS were in the hospitle, slowly getting treatment. the dark halls, desolate rooms, and lack of staff checking on them worried them. Then Cyris heard a scream of terror in their room, coming from the hall. DS and him both got up and snuck out to see what was going on. DS hastily ran to the room across from theirs. What they saw was horrifing. A living puddle of dark black oily ooze seeped from this somewhat solid creature. it was completely black with almost life like eyes. It looked back to see what was going on and swiftly charged at Cyris. Cyris jumped out into the hallway and DS tossed him a walkie-talkie headset. DS ran in the oppisite direction.

" Cyris, are you clear?!"
" Negative, repeat, Negative."
" Cyris try to reach the lobby, or try any way out of here!"

Then like any horror movie, the whole hospitle was cover with this ooze.
"Cyris you wont believe what ive found!"
" Ds what?!"
" Its ....Its.....a hactery! This thing is creating itself or replicating itself. OOO MY GOD!!!"
" DARKSKULL WHAT!!!!"
" NOOOOOO!!!!" static played over the transmission.

Cyris started to cry but swiftly regain composure and ran faster. He used his fireballs and shot them at his feet. The floor crumbled. He was then in the hacthery that DS found. He walked futher and further in to see that this creature wasnt reproducing, it was killing everyone else and eating them! He found DS's inactive body lodge inside of a cyrstal. Suddenly over the headset something said.


" Cyris Iris Confirmed, Flammae 119 capture."

Cyris looked all around him until suddenly an ooze monster appeared. Cyris knew he couldnt run no more, he had to fight his way out of the building. He formed a fireball and charged. Flammae was directly hit and dissolved into the ground.

" All Flammae Units Report to sector 5, portal room."

Suddenly the compute exploded and an erie voice said.
" Cyris Iris, hero of the past, hmm your not that strong. Well now that wimsical wind up toy for a controller is gone ill destroy everything!!!!"

" You wish!"
"You dare challenge me?! HA i can kill you now!"

Cyris then fell into a pit and landed outside. The Hospitle then had Flammae's tendrils twisting and spinning all around it. They formed into a large monsterious Reptilian head. Flammae, Spire Form!
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Jdave
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Your making me cry in pain, because I really want to know whats going on, because this sounds really good, when is the book coming out?, the movie?, what?
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Emerald_Fang
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movie is planned for 2007-08 the book is planned to be released sometime this and or next year.
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