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Illustration Activity Series B #11; Tag Team Rework - Plus #10's Winner
Topic Started: Jan 15 2006, 01:53 PM (6,459 Views)
humbleego
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ryanaz
Jan 18 2006, 02:15 AM
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I like this concept a lot. Someone should snatch it quickly!
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Bussman
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I like that as well!!!

Ill take it, but someone else can also do it, because it will probably come out better than mine

But yea, i could so see that animted!!! Erggggg Ideas Fllowwwwinnnnggg
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Colesif
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heres what i got so far:

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crits pleasee
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humbleego
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Colesif
Jan 18 2006, 06:56 PM
heres what i got so far:

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crits pleasee

Goo start, here are some quick crits:

  • The design seems a bit too "clean" for a robot zombie. Jub's design had a hint of steampunk to it that helped but I think you could take it further. Right now he's a bit too "Mega Man" for me.
  • Pose is a bit stiff (also in Jub's). If this is a zombie to might hunch him over and give a bit of drag on the limbs. Make feel more spooky.
  • I can't see what's going on in the head region, but I look forward to what you do with it.
  • One thing you might add to Jub's image: A Background! ;)


Overall good work, keep it goin'! :bfoot:
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smoscar_01
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a quicker crit: what happened to our battle?? :(
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Colesif
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smoscar_01
Jan 18 2006, 07:27 PM
a quicker crit: what happened to our battle?? :(

dude im tryin, i got a lot of stuff im workin on at once.

anyways, thanks humble, i see what you mean about the megaman style...i added a dab of color and it definetly was to clean. but as far as steampunk, uhh, like... should i add like pipes and tubes kinda things?
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Malakym
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humbleego
Jan 18 2006, 04:22 PM
I like this concept a lot. Someone should snatch it quickly!

im on it!

also, i love what you're doing akpaintslinger. not only do you change things, but you have a reason for each altaration. Instead of just adding things for the hell of it.
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Jemooky
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I hope I can get on the drawing end of this comp, but at the least I'll prepare some of my illustrations for you guys to fix up.

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CLICK ME TOO!!!
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hoffie_hoff
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Oooo I think I may take a stabz at Ryan's boat, but Buss took it, oh well, I'll try Mooky's Sin City esq hitman
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ryanaz
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more than one person can try my boat...i just cant find anything i want to do...i need more ideas
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humbleego
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Colesif
Jan 18 2006, 07:30 PM
anyways, thanks humble, i see what you mean about the megaman style...i added a dab of color and it definetly was to clean. but as far as steampunk, uhh, like... should i add like pipes and tubes kinda things?

Maybe not that specifically, but just more mismatch technology. Sort of frankenstein-esq, but with metal. Dig?

Think about the different between a muscle car in the 1960's looks and a sleak sports car now. Your current design is like the modern sports car. Rent Mad Max to get an idea of where i'm coming from. But, also, the end decision is yours, just support your choices with sound reasoning and you're good. Remember it's art, not math, there is no "correct" way. ;)
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Woolf-gang
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Made a remake of one of Master Rades pics...

<img src='http://www.woolf-gang.de/bilder/master rade.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'><img src='http://www.woolf-gang.de/bilder/master rade redone.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>


edit: sh**, i just read the rules. Ok, next pic i´ll do regarding them
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Colesif
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*loses competition*

wow, thats amazing, you turned rades pic into somethin really beautiful!

i think i get whathca mean humble, thanks :)
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Master Rade
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:blink: You took my old pic and transform it, beyound my imagenation. <--misspell lol, thats really is good. Way better then my old pic, the ear looks normal and the arm and hand blending with the green flames is so :wub:
Would you want to remake one more thats 3yrs old.


*looks at his work*

I need to work on my skecth more. Thats really sweet Woolf-gang.
Its just like mine but way better, even the symbol I Made on the shirt.
Enter that one for the comp but why stop there.



I know I can do better then this but im just tired from all my regent exams.
I made a different skecth on kibs drive by shooter. Im not happy with this one because I should pay more attention to the person shooting the gun.


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woolf gang how did u not abide by the rules, the pic is fine???
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Mathulus
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I'm struck with indecisiveness. If someone want me to rework theirs, tell me and I will.
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OOH DO MINE! :D lol
Too big to show ehre
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ElectricGnort
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I think im gonna do this one :D
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Cel
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You can try to remake this if you like:



I'l find somethnig to remake :P
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Woolf-gang
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I´d wish to redo yours, cel. But i don´t really know if i have the time....
But i´d give it a try, if i´m allowed.....
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Cel
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Good luck :D
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Mathulus
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Jan 21 2006, 04:05 AM
OOH DO MINE! :D  lol 
Too big to show ehre

Here is my idea in the rough rough:
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I changed the pose to a more dynamical (I might have overdone it). I chose an more interesting angle.
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ElectricGnort
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Mathulus- It just links to the Imageshack main page. :( {edit} - Never mind, it works now- {edit}


Here's my first rough sketch of Bussman's "caveman zombie?".

-Added more muscles
-Gave it a more dynamic pose
-lengthened the legs to a more realistic level ( but still keeping them sorta short)
-It does have armpit hair, just got covered up in the shading

Im not too happy with the claws or feet so feel free to crit.


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Please use the edit function whenever possible (it appears next to the quote button on your own posts) Thanks -- Moderator

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I...think I'd like to do this.

This dragon has ebola. <--- zhat's mine, and now I'm gonna go find one to work over.

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Bussman
Jan 18 2006, 02:55 PM
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*snaps this one up* It's a beaver, eh? ;D

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EG: Here's a (very rough) redline I did of the Caveman's feet. Only real area of interest (IMO) is that you should have the toes spread on the nearer foot, since it's bearing more of his weight--toes tend to do that, though we don't notice it so much when we're wearing shoes...

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And this is another redline of the whole piece. I'd suggest adding more torsion through his torso, since he's twisted about ninety degrees from the position of his feet.

Now...for bed.
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JEsus is the some kind of record? 3 psots in a row lol WELL DONE! :lol:

keep to the rules lol. we've all double posted once, BUT SHEEEESS LOUISSSE NOT TRIPLE!!!! lol jk ;)

um i disagree how u put the wrists up further with that redline majig, it looks like hes right hand has down syndrome..... thats how they hold thier hands..
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