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Illustration Activity Series B #11; Tag Team Rework - Plus #10's Winner
Topic Started: Jan 15 2006, 01:53 PM (6,457 Views)
Master Rade
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kib after reading your notes and work I have just shat in my pants. That is some great teaching there Kib, You would make a good teacher.
Blasted exams has slow my work progress but ill have min up soon a nuff. Much more work is still at hand for me.

Good luck kib and good teaching!
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Thats what ive done so far i jsut kinda redid it coz i realised my other one was shit but i might still add the coat i had on the guy in the last one.
I added guys that he killed theres gonna be one more, the guy flying in the air shows how swift and powerful the hitman is. coz he slashed him and his still in the air. and thats is sposed to be an organ flying out of him, not sure which organ tho. ill research which organs are around where he slashed, maybe his stomach is good enough.
oh yeh and im gonna make it so that the hitman looks like he is turning more from a jump i got an idea.
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bracks
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can i enter to this competition?? how can i post my image??
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Vector
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No need to post the same question in more than one place, mate.

You can enter any competition in here, just check all of the rules and details at the first post of the thread so you know what you're doing and when it's due by ;)

You can upload images onto the internet by either getting an account at Photobucket, or alternatively using Imageshack. Once you upload your image it will provide you with a link that you can use to post the image. :)
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bracks
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:lol: thanks vec

http://photobucket.com/albums/e276/bracksf...urrent=comp.jpg

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Thats my entry i will wait for someone to remake it
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smoscar_01
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Thats my entry i will wait for someone to remake it


Ok Ill remake yours bracks ;)
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bracks
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I want to see that ;) (for smoscar_01)

Please avoid double-posting. Instead, use the edit button above your post when availabe. --Global Moderator

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wow smoscar Ive already seen your work at the earth saving animation project I hope that you put the same enthusiasm to my rework
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dont u wanna remake sumones too?? bracks

EDIT: THAT EARTH SAVING THINGS GOING AHEAD??!?!? DAMN YOU PEOPLE!!! WHAT WAS WRONG WITH THE BRACKENWOOD COLLAB?!?!? :yfok: :wbitey: :wbitey:
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EDIT: THAT EARTH SAVING THINGS GOING AHEAD??!?!? DAMN YOU PEOPLE!!! WHAT WAS WRONG WITH THE BRACKENWOOD COLLAB?!?!?   


yeah it is here link
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ok bracks heres what I got:

First of see at the image 1 you will see that some parts of your character are not coloured (denoted by circles) and some annotations I made for you:

Simpsons ear: A human ear is formed by two circles and you just made it with one

Shirts neck problem: look how the neck of the shirt gets bigger at the back of the head

Continuity line problem: theres no line drawn by his pants

Missing Bone: theres one circled phalange missing at the bottom of the hand

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Then I wanted to show you your character's shapes (almost like bones there)

Look how the right arm of the shirts its kind of like flying and its not getting towards the arm of the character

You add another bone to the left arm of your character, look how it strangely leans to the center of the chest

I didnt really get the position you were trying for the head look how the separation of the eyes its bigger on the right side than on the left side

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Other than that great draws brack :lol:

heres what I made of your draw adding some details to the shirt, some lights and some shadows

Note: Im guessing, cos of the eyes, that you were trying to draw a manga character so thats what I tried to follow.

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kib
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Nice one, Smoscar!
:D
kib
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Master Rade
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.....I have such a far way to go :blink:
Nice one smoscar.
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bracks
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WOW smoscar_01 thats really nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!

I didnt thought you were going that far with my draw, thanks for your advices i will consider em all!!!!

you are becoming one of my favorite site illustrators ;)

and yeah I was trying a manga style character (I know how to edit :) )
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smoscar_01
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thank you guys Ill add a background and post it soon

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you are becoming one of my favorite site illustrators


:huh: thank you but there are a lot of better illustrators in this forum than me
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I'm snatching this one, lots of room for expansion...
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smoscar_01
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ok this is what Ive got of yours brack

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ooo I was so rushed by remaking it that I almost forgot to post something to rework:

Note: Its part of a skate animation I did like 3 years ago, anyone can take any scene and rework it

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(It doesent have a preloader, and you have to rewind it manually at the end of the 'andrew roinas' scene)
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ill remake this one



here you have to remake :


http://URL.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mok...ebrakenwood.jpg

http://URL.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/someone1.jpg

http://URL.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/b7b.jpg

http://URL.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/background2.jpg

http://URL.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/painter.bmp


they suck?
well thats right
ehheh
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WOOOOOW SMOSCAR_01 THAT LOOKS LIKE A MOVIE SCENE SNAPSHOT

and I also liked your skate scenes ( :blink: 3 years ago woow)
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FIRST STEP: CRITIQUE AND SKETCHING

I will put the link to the pic and then the image for those with slow bandwith.


first of all id like to tell you the points and things i didnt like from elephant's pic


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/ennu.jpg
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1-Sun don't have a black line surrounding it. By the way, I will make it in the horizon, so that it is twilight, and the sky will have many colors (YELLOW>RED>BLUE>DARKBLUE), I, personally, don't like skys with LIGHTBLUE>BLUE they are quite boring, so i will make a sunfalling one. I shall change the colours later maybe, maybe...i dont know :)
2-I think he tried to make a CUT there, like we can see the bottom of the lake , but i dont like that idea,it dosnt fit well the drawing. Because if he were to do that, he would have to cut other things too, not only the lake. Thats why I will make my modification with an "upper" view, so that the "beggining" of the lake isnt is seen. By the way, where does the water come from? Underground?Mountain?River? it would be very good to add a river to show where it comes from.
3-There is no shore between the water and land. If there is none(that can exist) we shall add some rocks going like "sinking" in the water. Or we can make a little sandy shore. Lakes has sand shores too :P.
4-Trees need more details. And that mount behind the lake shall be covered with trees too. Now that I think i can make the trees going sinking in the water. or that the water arrives up to where the trees begin.
5-I dont know why I put the 5 there. j/k lol. The house needs more defined lines. It shall be more bigger, and more not-centered, because it is the MAIN "character" of the picture. The things that you want to be the most important are always drawn by one side. In this pic it isnt sooooo centered, but it is quite a bit, and that disturbs me.
If you look at the things that sustain the house, you will see there are only two, and in the front look. It dosnt make sense, we will need to add two more behind those two. They will be very important because they will show:
a) the deep of the mountain and the house
B) balance of the house, those things are sutaining the house, so it will show the person who is looking at the picture that it there is some realism in that house.
c) oh i dont know. xD
6-That canyon or whathever it is. Well the mountain goes down, and there is a rock in there, down the rock is a straight line, it shouldnt be that way, because mountains go down deep, and that rock will not make the mountain to end :P. By the way, I will not include this part in my edition. Because i simply dont like the idea of a lakeMOUNTAINcanyon, its way too weird.
7-The clouds shall be more transparent and glowing, dark parts shall be a bit darker. If you look careful on it you will see that the gray areas(meaning dark zones) are in the places where the sun is hitting directly, so there shall be light instead of shadow. The shadow will be placed in other parts of the clouds. By the way I will not make the sun there, soooooo, the dark areas he'd done are quite right for my redesign, though they need a bit of treatment.
8-Black lines are all over the pic. Black is sometimes helpful but sometimes dosn't. It needs self-object-colour lines.

I forgot to speak about the very sharp point of the mountain where the house is in. I liked that idea, because it shows fantasy, but I will add a bit more of mass to that point.
I didn't mention too, that the shadows of the mountain and mounts is quite very goood! :D because if you look:
a) there is shadow where the clouds are
B) it is logical that beind the mountain, where the sun cant hit well, is darker.
But I will need another system of shadows, because my sun will be more down.

I noticed too that the green colour of the "light" areas are all the same. They shall change to show deepness.


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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/ENNU2.jpg
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now you can see that ive drawn different views, like maps of the place I'm going to draw. I thought it was a great idea to have some 3d guide.


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The red part marks the place I'm going to draw, you see the canyon isn't painted? that means I will not include that in the new pic
The woods at distance will not be seen beacuse they will be covered by the mounts.
The mounts will have trees so it will look fine.
There is a part of the lake that will not be seen to generate doubt on where does the water come from.

EAST & WEST
1-This is the point of a steep it will have trees. But i yet dont know if It will be seen in the perspective I took the redesign.
2-The woods here will be very important. We must deside if we want to make a rocky, sandy, or treeish shore. Id chosen to make a treeish shore so i can make it more interesting. When someone says "shore!" the first thing we think is of a sandy beach. But there are many kinds of shores, like the ones I've mentioned.
3-Here you can fully see the FOUR legs of the house. Two in each side. The deepest ones will be the darker. And I shall add some shadow behind the house.


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finally here is the sketch

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v737/Mokle/ennusketch1.jpg
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ive drawn the colours of the sky.
and showed everything I explained

for trying to make the chimney of the house look more real, and perspectivectly(w00t new word! xD) ive made the roof in a 3d way, with green ive drawn the things that are inside the roof. In this case a chimney and i make it go up and go out of the roof in that weird way :) I added smoke to the chimney too.

I think there is nothing more to explain. So I will start to draw the pic and see how it goes.

"Its easier said than done." :P It's good to be quoted in this stage.


I hoped I helped, and If I were wrong in something please tell me, I'm not an art student, I just know some things from school and others were thought by myself.
If I didnt explain well something ask me.
And if you read things that are really bad written "gramatically" remember my first language is not english and that I'm studying to be better :P

Thanks

Xav
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awsome work Kib, when i grow up. i want to be just like you! 


ahahha yeah me too

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Note: Its part of a skate animation I did like 3 years ago, anyone can take any scene and rework it

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hahahahahaha "Chad Moskar" ahahahaha chillin? :D

I'll try that one
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Neyals
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smoscar how do you do folds like that that is amazing give me some tips pleaseeeee
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smoscar how do you do folds like that that is amazing give me some tips pleaseeeee


hahaha thanks neyals

well I always draw a character or a background by pencil before I start it in computer thats because I dont own a wacom tablet, but I have came to realize that not having it was better for me cos I 'rework' my work at least three times one at paper, the second one on flash (with the brush tool), and depending on the style that I want to get (even if its going to be an outlined, or if its all going to be painted) draw a third one....

Note: If you want something more specific pm me and Ill prepare some kind of a tutorial for you ;)

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hahahahahaha "Chad Moskar" ahahahaha chillin?


:D yeah!!, and 'andrew roinas' its the nickname of andrew reynolds :lol:
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yeah!!, and 'andrew roinas' its the nickname of andrew reynolds


hahaha funny :lol:

but I have came to realize that Im not that good to be remaking your skate animation smoscar I could try to give you some tips but if this was made 3 years ago surely you already know all of them :(

can I rework something else???
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It doesent matter that I might know my mistakes at that or even that Im no longer working at that project, what really matters is getting feedback for everybody...

maybe Ill post something else if you want me to :P

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smoscar how do you do folds like that that is amazing give me some tips pleaseeeee

here are some tips buddy ;)
Cloths and folds
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yes please but not something that advanced please :P
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