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Animate That #5; Splash!
Topic Started: Feb 22 2006, 08:34 PM (2,952 Views)
milkman73
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Clayt: The only thing that I suggest changing is maybee change the character to resemble something a little better?..?..?

Because to me it just looks like a white blob/dough boy and if you change it to resemble something/someone then that will make it a whole lot better.

And for Andros: .... what happens?!? Does the fish jump out of the sideways plane of water on to land? and then disappear? (followed by a big wave)... I don't know really what you are going for? Please explain and it will make it easier to understand what you are trying to accomplish.
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clayt
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ok... i have taken your advice on board... and ive worked my ass off to make this look good... even added a little bird too hehe lol... Please give crits and improvements...



If it runs slow then click here
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milkman73
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Clayt: SOOO much beter now that you added a character :D
Thanks for taking my advice, looks great B)

Now for the crits: one: the bird is ginormous, maybee scale it down just a litlle
two: the character sort of just falls into the water and it looks kind of ...off, try
to make him jump and then turn into the dive instead of him just bending
at the knees
three: after the frame where he bends at the knee, he shrinks quite a bit, and
then he gets verry big before he lands in the water :blink:

Also, what happend to the scripted camera?
Overall, looking great
:fpbls:

O yea, you might want to add a few more frames in where he flips to make it a litlle smoother because it is a bit jerky right now. :P
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ok... well.. i took the scripted camera out, but i put it back in when he lands in the water with just a little shake... i only added it because the character was small... i didnt think it would work with the character i added... I will do all those things you told me then post it when i get home...
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smotkid
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Ah, I usually don't do these activities or competitions but I gave this one a shot.

This is what i have so far.

>>> Things I have to do:
o Color the fish
o Clean it up a little
o Finish the entire second scene with the swimming. (I'm actually gonna make it fly away :P)

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clayt
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smotkid
Mar 23 2006, 10:45 AM
Ah, I usually don't do these activities or competitions but I gave this one a shot.

This is what i have so far.

>>> Things I have to do:
o Color the fish
o Clean it up a little
o Finish the entire second scene with the swimming. (I'm actually gonna make it fly away :P)


haha lol... thats a little weird... but funny.... go finish it!
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milkman73
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OoOoO... Clayt. You changed your sig and picture, I like it :D

:fpbls:
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clayt
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haha yeah.... lol thank you! :D
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Ryan :D
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milkman73
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Ryanaz: OoO.. I like. B) But something you could add would be to have the green guy jump up a little higher into the air before he goes crashing down to the water. :rolleyes:
But it looks great now!
:lol:
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I would add some inner frames to it ;)
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Daninator
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I've never animated water before but here's wot I made:
Water splash
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thegreatlol
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first thing i did with a mouse
http://img430.imageshack.us/my.php?image=waterthing4dd.swf
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smoscar_01
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heres a quickie :lol:

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Cel
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Here's my little 1 hour of work.


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amazing as usual cel but for some reason that last slow movement on the water isnt really liking me that much at first sight I would think it is not water but mud :P
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Cel
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Maybe it is? I dont see a sign saying "water" anywhere. :unsure:






:P :D :rolleyes:
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wow i would love doing that, riding off an edge in a cart off into the water, so fun
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Maybe it is? I dont see a sign saying "water" anywhere.  :unsure:


god it was just a fucking comment men forgive me if Im not humbleego or any other mod or even adam himself giving you or anyone a crit wich in my short year as a member of this forum honestly havnt seen just one, oh yeah probably you think you are the only one that can get a "Wow! Not everybody togather..." angry response to those who didnt even write you a word well guess what we all newbies and not so newbies in here have been there before and in case you are about to reply me with some "there are crits available for everyone in here" try looking at almost any of the Animation, Illustration threads

...btw want another crit work on that stupid cart of yours, its amazing how it doesnt even rotate a little bit on x axis or y axis..

see you all <_<
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FLUDD
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Heres my splash, but, its not all the great compared with everybody's splash, I was going a different direction...but, maybe that direction was good, hopefully. :worry:


My splash



EDIT:I forgot that its a person or an animal or somesort going into the water, so, i made a few adjustments. So thats y its different for those who have already seen this b4 the editing.
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It's all in the timing, lil padwan.
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lol, ok :P
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is it just me or does that not loop? you should make it loop
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Jul 1 2006, 04:22 PM
is it just me or does that not loop? you should make it loop

Fixed it. Now it will loop.
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