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| Illustration Activity Series B #12; Randomnessness! (Non-Award Activitiy) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 14 2006, 03:59 AM (4,076 Views) | |
| ElectricGnort | Mar 19 2006, 11:39 AM Post #26 |
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Here's a very quick color-in of my sketch of "A tiny witch flees a voodoo wizard in the vestiges of a lost civilization". (the witch is on top of the big statue if you didn't notice) ![]() The main thing that's bugging me is the guy in the bottom -right-; he just doesn't seem to fit into the pic right. Any suggestions on how i can fit him into the composition before continuing?--or any crits for that matter. |
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| Rafael | Mar 20 2006, 08:40 AM Post #27 |
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i might try this... ive started drawing already ill have a shot at three to see A chubby-cheeked sniper uproots a woman in a hat A Naked combatant uproots a man on a skating rink A viking in a frock communicates with a troll beside a tornado and do you mean the guy on the bottom right? i suggest moving him more towards the camera and giving him a lower angle shot but otherwise its very good |
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| ElectricGnort | Mar 20 2006, 09:02 AM Post #28 |
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yea, right. Don't know why i said left.
That's definetly got potential
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| Rafael | Mar 20 2006, 10:20 AM Post #29 |
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yeh i thought so too i might get my brother involved too, hes a better artist than me, more creative u think its good advice? |
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| Bussman | Mar 20 2006, 11:27 AM Post #30 |
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Noooooooo Is the generator down for anyone else?!?!?!? |
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| akpaintslinger | Mar 20 2006, 12:25 PM Post #31 |
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Electricgnort!
That is one excellent start!! There is so much depth already... and the angle is spectacular! What you've done with the trees, birds, and clouds is very aesthetic. It really grabs your attention at first glance. The wizard in the corner does look a little funny that you mention it... I'm not sure qwite what it is. You've chosen an interesting canvas shape to work on, so naturally the composition is going to differ from a horizontally laid one. Right now the wizard sits at the bottom of the canvas, nearly in the corner--- so she slips off your eye's radar, yet the detail demands attention. Move her a little closer to the camera and more towards the center of the frame into the foreground, and she adds depth and commands more attention: (Tried not to butcher it too much. :yfok:) ![]() I do hope you finish this one up! It's going to be a beaut!
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| ElectricGnort | Mar 20 2006, 12:37 PM Post #32 |
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Bussman- Yea it's down for me now too Bumwipe- You mean getting your brother involved, or what you said to me? Slinger- Thanks :D. I'll try moving the wizard closer as you both mentioned. Your image just shows some Photobucket error though |
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| kib | Mar 20 2006, 02:10 PM Post #33 |
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Yeah the original link doesn't seem to work anymore, but if you go up one level in the website you can click on the 3ch_web.php link and get to it. If you can't navigate up one level on the site try this. kib |
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| Rafael | Mar 20 2006, 06:35 PM Post #34 |
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oh i mean what i said to you and also electricgnort the vines on the statues look a little bit too flat |
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| humbleego | Mar 21 2006, 01:22 AM Post #35 |
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They must been getting a lot of hits. I've seen this generater on ConceptArt.org and Polycount. You can always download and use the app here. You've got to dowload the zip file and the contents of "Hollywood action EN/". Then you can put in your own words! ![]() Edit: Here's the thread on Conceptart.org, that's where I found this. Lots of good samples there too! |
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| Freedom88 | Mar 21 2006, 01:57 AM Post #36 |
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wow thanks for the link Humbleego ... some of the artists there are mind blowing
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| ElectricGnort | Mar 22 2006, 10:17 AM Post #37 |
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amazingness...__________________ Ok, Redid the Wizard and vines. Think i'm going to start working on it now unless anyone has any other suggestions.
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| Bussman | Mar 22 2006, 11:59 AM Post #38 |
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Wow Dave Im loving this thread, thanks for this man, its like a never ending inspiration and idea maker, lol |
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| Freedom88 | Mar 26 2006, 10:09 AM Post #39 |
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Here's my first attempt ... sigh... didn't turn out to great and I was caught in two minds, but I did learn a heck of a lot making it ... I think I'm going to try another one of these
but yeah.. "An appalling vampire hammers a corpse in a field of meteorites" ![]() feel free to critize it to death ... tiz the only way i'll learn *prepares for a slaughtering* ..cough... hehe Edit: didn't know that photobucket resizes images... hmm odd.... |
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| ElectricGnort | Mar 27 2006, 05:47 AM Post #40 |
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I'm probably not the best guy to be giving critiqes but i'll give it a shot. First thing i noticed is that their skin is alot brighter than the surrounding lighting. You could darken their skin, but it might blend them into the backround too much. --So you could try using the meteors as a light source and illuminate their bodies with an orange glow. That would probably give it a slightly darker feeling also. The horizon is also something i noticed. Im not sure whether you were going for a fish-eye lense type look or it's just two hills on the sides. If it's a hill, hills rarely have such steep changes of direction so close together. If it's a Fish-eye thing... well, i dont really know how to make those work well either. You might also want to add more land or a tree-line in the distance. The ground now just seems to cut off at a ledge. The meteors look nice though, can't say much about them. ---------------------------------------------------------- Anyway, here's my attempt at coloring my pic. I'm not really too happy with it --Alot of it just seems unclean and i don't really know the technique to fix it, but.... meh.
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| CLiNK | Apr 10 2006, 11:51 PM Post #41 |
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Your pic rocks ElectricGnort, you use a tablet yeah? here's mine: ![]() A buried blind man greets a shaman in fields. |
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| Villageidiot | Apr 16 2006, 02:21 PM Post #42 |
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WOW gnort!!! last time I saw your stuff...well...let's just say You've made a GREAT improvement! I'm lovin' that lady....
~Jordan edit: An angelic barbarian leaps on a gitane in a marsh.
WHAT'S A GITANE!!!??? I looked it up on www.dictionary.com and....it didn't come up... I've got the angelic barbarian drawn....he looks great....the epitome of strength and courage....I can't believe I cranked him out so fast though...but yeah...anyone have ANY idea what a gitane is? I need help....
edit 2!: closest thing I've found is gitano/a which is spanish for gypsy....should I go with that? |
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| ti do re mi do fa | Apr 17 2006, 08:23 AM Post #43 |
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so, i can compete in this, right? |
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| humbleego | Apr 17 2006, 09:00 AM Post #44 |
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Yep! |
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| Neyals | Apr 17 2006, 09:09 AM Post #45 |
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I googled it for you and it seems it is a brand of mountain bike and a type of guitair. I think he would be jumping on a bike not a guitare but there are some really strange things coming from this generator. And humbleego how long is this on for because i am hoping to do alot of tests before i do the real thing |
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| humbleego | Apr 17 2006, 09:59 AM Post #46 |
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| Neyals | Apr 17 2006, 09:10 PM Post #47 |
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Soooooooo is that a yes? [size=7]Yes! - Bleegs[/size] |
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| Unremarkable_moo | May 10 2006, 09:25 AM Post #48 |
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God i really want to try this but i dont know how to finalize a picture after drawing it in alias. I cant use paint in photoshop, and I'm bad with coloring. Does any1 wanna record themeselves painting somthing in ps and send it to me so i can figure this out. I dont understand how some of you make such perfect drawings its confusing. |
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| Festival Bobcats | May 11 2006, 06:29 AM Post #49 |
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| Unremarkable_moo | May 14 2006, 02:16 PM Post #50 |
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:: Post 1 :: yeah those links kinda just open up blank pages :: Post 2 :: o wait it works Thats was friggin amazing btw. It was nice seeing how good you are, but where did u learn to do that? Did u go to classes or just expirement for years? :: Post 3 :: this is mine so far, just a sketch with a little color. Still need to do the shading and such, hope u like it. I dont think its a winner but im still new to this color thing. A shining stellar larva decapitates a witch in a factory.
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