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| SneakyRobot | Nov 27 2006, 06:05 AM Post #626 |
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that little alien really needs to get out of the way, he could get brain damage getting pelted with those things |
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| Boggle | Nov 27 2006, 06:58 AM Post #627 |
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The timing is a bit off. I think the little dude should hold that pose for a few more seconds because the reaction (the thing hitting him) came too fast. Other than that it looks gewd. |
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| FLUDD | Nov 27 2006, 07:01 AM Post #628 |
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Nice job. That alien REALLY needs to move out of the way. Oh, well, i cant control everything. But, one thing that should be corrected. There should be a pause inbetween the frame when the rock is coming and the previous from it. Just so the alien isn't making the face at the guy when the guy throws the rock at him. Plus, the timing is weird. Anyways, nice job. 
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| championchap | Nov 27 2006, 07:01 AM Post #629 |
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hehe, thanks guys! glad you liked it ahh and i did notice the timing thing myself.. but i thought maybe i was being a bit overcritical, i guess not huh? to be honest, i needed a little encoragment.. or ill probably just do no more for another year and a half. doing this practically killed my hand! i had to go get this cooling stuff the doctor gave me after i spent 8 hours solid in painter! |
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| zorg | Nov 27 2006, 12:58 PM Post #630 |
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nice championchap, thought it was pretty neat anyways I attempted to do an explosion today because I had never done one before. It's not great but what the hell. explode! |
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| championchap | Nov 27 2006, 01:13 PM Post #631 |
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Hey thanks! and i actually thought this was a pretty good stary.. quite dan paladin.. but everyone says that about most explosions now huh? anyway, i think all you have to rememer is that explosions have depth.. and so need shading just like anything else! add a lowlight and a highlight.. especially to that main section and it will hopefully make it look a lot less papery |
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| C0mBineD | Nov 27 2006, 06:47 PM Post #632 |
my name is written with a zero not an o
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maybe he sees it coming and takes cover? |
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| Wiz | Nov 28 2006, 05:54 AM Post #633 |
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I think the explosion looks good! I just cant tell what makes a little not believable...  Anyways, nice animation chapionchap 
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| championchap | Nov 28 2006, 07:05 AM Post #634 |
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Hey, i thought id give a bit of an example of what i meant before so i took the liberty of tracing your explosion and then just adding shaddow and highlights etc anyway.. Here's what I made it into. |
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| zorg | Nov 28 2006, 07:09 AM Post #635 |
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Looks better like that, i'll try to day that next time and I think I should make the smoke go upward aswell. I'll get it next time, or just may make it a bit better we'll see. |
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| big jay | Nov 28 2006, 09:42 AM Post #636 |
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Was explaining telegraphing and did this in flash.
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| milkman73 | Nov 28 2006, 10:05 AM Post #637 |
Watch Out, These Leaves Bite.
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Thats pretty good, I like the stretch effects on it
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| Brakken | Nov 28 2006, 06:07 PM Post #638 |
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It's awesome, champion chap! (the little fella that gets hit by the rock, that is) Here's something that took me about 45 minutes to draw. Its not animated yet, though. Black Padfoot Hope you like it! |
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| Tinsterr | Nov 29 2006, 01:11 AM Post #639 |
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I would put that in the daily sketch thread... Looks good though
Good work
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| Wiz | Nov 29 2006, 04:21 AM Post #640 |
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That's preetey good Brakken, keep it up!
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| Brakken | Nov 30 2006, 02:29 PM Post #641 |
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Ehehehe! :lol: Whoops! well, I'm GOING to animate it....heh....hehheh?.......[size=1]heh?[/size] [size=7]PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!!!!![/size] |
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| zorg | Dec 2 2006, 12:43 PM Post #642 |
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aww and I already had my pitchfork and hand grenades ready...
 lolanyways heres an animation I did, just to keep me from boredom and to test my animation skillz. http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a281/Sca...wf?t=1165027224 |
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| CLiNK | Dec 2 2006, 01:22 PM Post #643 |
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Cool Zorg, is that a toaster?
-------------------------- A walkcycle I'm working on. My arm movement sucks at the moment but nothing I can't fix. More crits appreciated Cheers. |
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| Tinsterr | Dec 2 2006, 09:36 PM Post #644 |
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Nice CLiNK
I think he goes a little jaggie. But I was listening to music just as I watched it so it looked like he was going to the music.
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| themammoth | Dec 3 2006, 03:28 AM Post #645 |
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A bounce test
:lol: : http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bouncetest1wu0.swf |
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| Zwickel | Dec 3 2006, 07:21 AM Post #646 |
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Nice stuff clink! I think that the arm goes kinda like "behind" when you are walking like that. It looks like a jog, not much of a walk. |
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| Wiz | Dec 3 2006, 10:56 AM Post #647 |
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The Mammoth...awesome...
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| championchap | Dec 3 2006, 11:20 AM Post #648 |
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Looks to be all in the arms to me.. they are going a bit far back, and a little more bent than they should good advice is always taking a look at somebody.. very carefully to see what it is you are doing differently maybe ask your parents, siblings, friends etc to help out? / adive ripped almost entirely from the animators survival kit, damn thats a good book! |
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| CLiNK | Dec 3 2006, 12:21 PM Post #649 |
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Thanks guys, I guess it's mostly the arms then. I will patch them up next time I work on it and probably tweak the legs and head a little too. 
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| Dazla | Dec 3 2006, 12:29 PM Post #650 |
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CLiNK: Just one crit mate I think you move the head a little too much, cause I know when I walk I don't constantly look side to side. Make it move because you need that effect but maybe just not as much as you are. |
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