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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 10 2006, 06:00 PM (271 Views) | |
| NimNim | Jul 10 2006, 06:00 PM Post #1 |
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the rake has been slain
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I heard this story from one of my friends who expierienced this with his dad. red orbs(some names have been changed because I wanted to change them )on a dark winter afternoon jim and his father were hiking in the jurupa mountains when they saw something unusual. 4 big red orbs who were flying around. they watched the orbs for a few minutes,then the orbs zoomed into the sky. how did you like it?
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| Muhyah | Jul 11 2006, 04:17 PM Post #2 |
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Spirit of the Phoenix
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Umm...it's a little short That would have been a strange experiance, but you need to go into more depth/description... |
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| psychomunkey3 | Jul 12 2006, 04:43 AM Post #3 |
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The Forum Medic
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Uh, agreed. Go into deeper explanation. Talk about the surroundings, deeper explanation of orbs, etc. |
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| NimNim | Jul 12 2006, 11:56 AM Post #4 |
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the rake has been slain
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They told me that they saw the orbs but did not see them appear,and the orbs were solid. |
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| psychomunkey3 | Jul 12 2006, 01:26 PM Post #5 |
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Ok. Well what i meant was something like this. EX: "The trees around them drew dark shapes across the path in the moonlight. The orbs hovered about, glowing in a vriety of colors. As they whirled around through the air, they began to dissipate...." etc. etc. Just add more too it. Make it more interesting. Even though your friend told you the story, get more info and add more to it. I'm done.
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| NimNim | Jul 13 2006, 04:27 PM Post #6 |
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the rake has been slain
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actually in the hills by my house there are no trees,just grass ,boulders ,and creatures. |
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| dutchess | Aug 8 2006, 08:21 PM Post #7 |
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Brackenwood Lightweight
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yeh, kinda a weird experience, although like teh psycho munkey sed, more description! lol x
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| Peter | Aug 8 2006, 11:21 PM Post #8 |
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The discription was not a joke...?
I thought he was just kidding with the short discript, because of all the white space...
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