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The Untold Darkness 1; This is the firs bit of my story
Topic Started: Aug 1 2006, 07:17 AM (250 Views)
Woo
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Queen of all! bow before my might!
(excusse the spelling! I cant help it!)
The streets are red, tainted by blood and fire. the screems eco around me, the screems of people beond my help. beiond my sight. the sky is stained black as night by the smoke constantly pooring from the burning buildings. All around me lay upturned cars, sometimes the wheels still moving. I wanted to run, to screem. But could'nt move, could hardly breathe. And I could now see what it was that I was running from. Twisted, mutilated creatures, staggering toward me.at each step the took one high, desprate screem roes, louder and louder, constantly. Untill, as the creatures were almost on top of me, I could stand it no more. I closed my eyes.
I snapped awake, sat bolt upright and looked around frantically. I'm in my own livingroom, on my own sofa. It was only a dream. It felt so real, but it was just a dream. I should know that by now. It was the same dream I'd had for five nights straight now, and every time it felt so real. But something was different this time. Hadn't the ligts been on? Wasn't I watching T.V when I must have fallen asleep? And why was it so cold?........ :blink:
I climbed to my feet. Good job the clocks glow in the dark, I thought. three O'clock, as usual. but why always three? I stumbled over to the light switch and filked it, twice. Must be a power cut, I only changed that bulb yesterday. I tried to push the dream out of my mind, made a sandwich, and went to bed.

Theres still a lot more left, but any tips and coments are grately appriceanted and I look forword to reading from you! Oh, the main charictor is a woman btw :huh:
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doom
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The beginning with the cars and mutilated things sounds kinda like it came from one of the early resident evil games for playstation. :bitey:
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cool. Spooky. Wish we knew what happened next. haha. Keep it up dude.
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Woo
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Thanks, a lot of it came from Silent Hill to be honest. ^_^ yay! I'm gonna put up some more now. but thanks for replieing, or however its spelled.
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Woo
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part 2 is up now. and that under the bathtub scared the wits ota me. or it would if i had any. Mwahahahaha!
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silent hill resident evil a i dont realy care they are both horror games with mutilated corpses.(add the dog things from silent hill to) :P
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Woo
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Yay! silent hill! they realy messed up the forth 1, too much running back and forth! :yfok: got kinda anoying. i like the 3rd game best, thats were most of my insperation comes from. :D but i only ever get the rubbis sappy endings! :worry:
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woop, and i help with dem spelling of urs lol, i enjoy it in plentiful quantities, hope macbulmer enjoys it! lol, i quote " I HAVE A GIRLFI|RIEND, HONESTLY!" yes sir, a bag of potatoes with a face drawn on it and a wig, he clenches it in a corner of his cupboard, rocking back and forth, lol xxx :lol:
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Damneth thou, dutchess! thats MY ...thingy, with le pomme de tere, nd all, POTATOS! thats it :D dont steal my things! got ya pm, 2, nd my mum is back from amsterdam, the land of cheese nd gay. it is! they have parades! macbaulmer would feel right at home! :lol:
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woooooooo! i could imagine him in a parade in a giant cheese outfit! dancing with le sac a la pomme de terre with giant feather head-dress on lol! hope ur mum had a nice time, did she bring back mouldy chee? :blink:
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na, T-shirts nd chocolet, but NOO, the chocolet is for her work buddys, not her family. why go somewere full of chee nd choc if ya hav a milk alergy? :blink: it is nonsensical! nd she alway gets peters t-shirt to big nd mine to small! i meen, its LONG enough, but not WIDE enough! do the dutch look like pasta or does mum just get crap t-shirts? :worry: ya, but it is the place for mcbaulmer! heh. 'I DO have a girlfriend, honest! and were going to get maried and move to a place were fish and humans can co-inside peacefully!' :lol:
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man alive! im scared. but dont worry! cause god wants to 'touch' you, and 'feel' you lol hes 'watching' you! <_< pervert.
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