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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 4 2006, 11:22 AM (321 Views) | |
| doom | Aug 4 2006, 11:22 AM Post #1 |
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The Local Night Roamer
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The Eye By:Some dead guy. You have all probably heard this story in a different version buy i altered the story and gave it a new twist hope ya like it. There once was A mean old hag who used to live next door to a little girl name Lucy.Lucy alway hated that old beatch because she took all the gifts that Lucy gave to her and fed it to her evil dog from hell.Which ttook a shiite in Lucys yard afterwards.Not ufortunelaty the old hag died 3 days ;ater and Lucy was so happy and threw a big party(for herself).the next day her parents made her go to the funeral which just happened to be on halloween eve.After the ceremony lucy jumped down into the old ladys grave and opened the casket abd ripped out the old hags left eye with her bare hands and stuck it in her pocket.Later that night she saw a dark figure of a woman walk towards her house at 12:00 a.m..she then heard a a very hoarce loud "I WANT MY EYE".Then Lucy head footsteps coming from downstairs and the eerie voice again"GIVE ME MY EYE BACK OR ELSE"Lucy was so frightened that she could only let out a small gasp.She the heard footstes coming up the stairs and again she heard that eerie voice"GIVE ME MY EYE OR I WILL TAKE YOUR SOUL".She heard the foot steps come down the hallway to her bedroom door and by that time she was covering herself with her blankets and breathing very deeply.Then lucy heard her door open and come next to her bed and then heard the voice for the last time"GIVE ME MY EYE OR ELSE"then the covers were thrown off the bed and there stood the old ladys corpse and the lady said"GIVE ME MY EYE CHILD OR ELSE"Lucy sat there scared half to death and alls she could say was eye then the old lady ripped out lucys left eye and put it in the empty socket and dissappeared with Lucy sitting upright in her bed bleeding to death. THE END DNE EHT |
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| dutchess | Aug 7 2006, 09:05 PM Post #2 |
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Brackenwood Lightweight
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thats slightly like the megan story i posted . its kewl tho x
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| doom | Sep 3 2006, 10:16 AM Post #3 |
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The Local Night Roamer
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omg some1 delete this story its soooo old and olny 2 posts(including this 1)have been made |
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| Slim_Joules | Sep 9 2006, 09:48 AM Post #4 |
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this story is thousand of yoears old it started with a pharoh in egypt who was murdered and had his hand taken away so he could not go to the after life but the corpse chassed down the murderer and got the hand back and dissapered |
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