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Need A Title
Topic Started: Sep 9 2006, 12:11 PM (191 Views)
Slim_Joules
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Ok i have been writing a story im about half way through i think but i havent got a title so im going to post the first paragraph and just read and see if you can think of a title then i will chose from the best. the story is about a 18 yr old lad who stumbles on to a secret in his town that will change his life.

We stand here Dark Lord with this offering to please you" says a woman in a hood. "I offer my soul and the souls of my brethren" says a second male voice "We offer the life and essence of the one we shall kill" adds the third and the forth hooded people taking up a dagger with a snake and an eagle on the blade and just as the dagger hit the young girls chest Will is shaken awake by his mother “Come on get up you've got to go to college”. Will was 18 with a big build and is about 6’ 3”; he has dark brown hair and eyes. Will got up in a daze still think about the dream it had seemed so real but his mined quickly turned back to going to college as he looked at his clock 8:20 “oh crap” he thought he only had 40 minutes to get to college otherwise he would be in trouble again. As he wandered down stairs his mother was sitting at the table with a cup of coffee and a lit cigarette in her hand as she browsed the newspaper. His mother Paula was a tall woman about 6’ 1” with dark hair and eyes like Wills. “Morning” he muttered to her as he went to make himself a drink, his mind still wandering back to the dream he couldn’t help feeling worried about the young girl but he kept telling himself it was just a dream. He vaguely remembers picking up his bag and walking out the door but as he walked up the street he could help notice how cold it was for September. He got on the number 5 bus as usual it was quite full mostly filled with people going to work.
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Tinsterr
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Try keep the title as simple as possible, and not too disclosure. Make it a little mysterious. I can't think of a title 'cause I don't have much of the story.
The only title I can think of is Will and the secret, and that get's some Harry Potterish thingy.
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Slim_Joules
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yeah its a bit darker then harry pothead
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doom
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attemt to make up ur own title dude dont make other people do it.
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