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POEMS!!! =]; its just like the title Poems o-o
Topic Started: Oct 18 2009, 06:51 PM (108 Views)
Kitsune <3
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WELCOME TO THE HAPPIEST PLACE ON THIS FLIPPIN EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As you can see its about Poems. =)
Although its more of a random rant page...just make sure everything you post is in Poem form.
Because I swear if you write it like a story I will delete your post ^__^" Noctis: This rule seems a bit iffy, ignore it please. I understand that most of you know that in a technical sense a poem is a story.
Thats pretty much for the rules..since there is none just dont make it longer than a page >__>
Im pretty good at assessing poems and interpretations so Pm meh if you want help and such.
Apparently im a very good horror writer and im proud >:]



HAVE FUN PEOPLE!!!!!! X3
Edited by Noctis, Nov 6 2009, 08:30 PM.
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Snow
Is there someone out there just for me?

Is it like what everyone says, that everyone in the world has an equal?

I hate when people say that kinda crap....Getting your hopes up for nothing....Hopes that reach so high into the neverending sky that you get so confident..you just make one small wrong move and you get sent falling. No one to save you. No one to cushion your fall or cuddle you when your hurt. Just the cold realization that your alone in the world.....And when you look back into he sky..you realize it was never beautiful as you thought. the pure whiteness turned a bleak gray, snow falling as it touches your skin like ice needles, with nothing to shield you from the frozen wasteland that you have fallen into. The sunshine you felt when your hopes were so high are now hidden behind thick clouds. Looking up you search for anyone, thinking your loved ones will come to save you, think again. No one's coming, you hear their merry voices of cheer faintly as you sleep with the coldness of the ever-falling-snow.



Randomness (Both are from May 20 >_<)
I guess the world has had enough of me.
It seems to hate me for what I am.....and what I have done
Though its not like anyone cares
They may say that they care so much for me..that their life would have been sad if not for me. I know thats not true. No one honestly cares about me.
But I dont care, I rather be by myself and alone. Its safer..better for everyone around me. I just wish that one day there will be one person that can open the door that has been so tightly shut all these years... Oh so many scars...its hard to tell if the door might as well be burned from the years of wreckage.
But then again its only a door, tightly shut with pure will....I just want someone to understand and see if they can open the door that even I cant open to those who believe they "love" me.
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Can this include lyrics, not only limited to poetry?

This isn't mine, I had found this when I was playing a game.
The lines weren't exactly in this order, as you can read them in any of the 20 orders offered but I enjoy this version the most.

Thy way shall be lit by the flames of impure souls.
While the Tree of Aegis lives, mine servants shall never perish.
Only the Eternal Torch shall renew the Flames of the Damned.
While thy name is carved in stone, thou shall be invincible.
Sacrifice upon the altar shall imprison thee.
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As long as its in some form of poetry sure ^__^
Edited by Kitsune <3, Oct 19 2009, 07:42 PM.
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Ah, alrighty.
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yup
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Ah.
Well, I'm not much of a poet so I don't got much.
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lol try your best ^__^
Im usually agood poet if im in the correct mood.
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Ah.
Well, maybe I should give it a shot.
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You should! :O
Im the best when im angry ^__^
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Uh-huh, I'll be sure to remember that.
Hmm...

Nah, I got nothing.
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Nyehh.. think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The clouds roll by as you hear my dreary sigh.
The everlasting taste of me lingers on your lips as you walk away.
Only time can tell when we meet again.
At this forbidden place, our forbidden fruit
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Oh! Oh! I have a poem!
I just need to find it first ^___^; I'm thinking of reading it at a read-aloud, if I get the chance :D
"But with one soft and memorable kiss, their future lay bright ahead of them, knowing that both of them would never feel alone again."
I p r o m i s e. <3
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I had no second thoughts knowing you'd end up here. Poem away with your bad self!
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Somehow, I knew you'd know xD
Anyway, here's my favorite poem of mine :3

What do you do
When you feel you're not good enough
When your flaws weigh you down
But their smile lifts you up
Only perhaps too high to be reached
When your heart comes crashing
Down to the floor
And furthermore
Words unspoken, unsaid
Never meant to be put together
Have been sprawled across your forehead
For the world to see
More importantly them
Every secret, confession
LIE
That you thought might bet by
Is now in their eyes
And their eyes scream back to you
Every plea, every worry
Every concern
And it burns into you
Your memory, your heart, your life
Because you never thought to speak up
You never thought you'd be heard
You never thought they'd listen
And yet there they are
Ears open
Mind opn
Heart open
Arms open
Ready to wrap around you
Protect you, love you
Need you, care for you
Drive away your worst nightmares
And hold your dreams close
And make you feel loved
And breathe in your pain
And secure your love
And live you
Even though you think you're not good enough.
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Deep, nice.
Here's one.

Teleportation

Teleportation!
That flying lemur vanished!
How did he do that!?

And one I did back in 8th grade.

Chain
There once was a boy with a chain
Which he wrapped from his leg to his brain
Said the chain was his luck
Yet to his disgust
He was locked out his house in the rain

I'm sure Noctis remembers that.
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Yeah, I remember.
Goddamn poetry stuff.
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Yay my poetry thread lives! x3
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Indeed, it does.
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My personal reality is what drives my heart, and my pen.
Do you truly believe so?
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