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These Words
Topic Started: Jun 13 2007, 05:08 AM (275 Views)
Wil
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hey, i'm trying to come up with a song here. it's supposed to sound somewhat like a fall out boy song, except it starts out with the guitarist doing a lot of palm mutes and the drums and bass play softly so it's like a vocal solo and then it gets faster and awesome. starts out kinda slow then after the first single line saying it gets a lot faster. here goes:

These words that cross my lips
They’ll never be a lie
From the very dawn of day
Until the hour I die

I love you with all my heart
We’ll never be apart
I never want this part of me to die

This is how it goes

You said you’d love me
Forever and always
No one has ever felt like
this
I sealed the deal with a
kiss

Let’s get this party started right

Two weeks after your surgery
You can’t speak so I’ll say your words for
You
And we will always be together
No matter what the weather

So I’ll seal this deal and make us feel like royalty

Let’s go sing this song and dance along
In Central Park

Why can’t we forget about fighting?
We should just throw it away.
Away…
Away…!
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Sloane
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Very nice...if you don't mind my asking, what inspired you to write that?
i used to write songs. they never seemed to come out right.
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Wil
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I don't know why i decided to write it. it might've been...no, i really have no clue what inspiration i had. I just heard the music and wrote the lyrics.
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Sloane
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lol, cool. i really like it
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Harou
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its good...i think
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Sloane
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You think? I like it, I wish I could you play it, Wil
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Harou
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i think its good...Sloan and Wil together again! :rolleyes: Thats payback!!! for what you said on DA!! :angry: <_<
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