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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 13 2007, 05:08 AM (275 Views) | |
| Wil | Jun 13 2007, 05:08 AM Post #1 |
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Lone Wolf
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hey, i'm trying to come up with a song here. it's supposed to sound somewhat like a fall out boy song, except it starts out with the guitarist doing a lot of palm mutes and the drums and bass play softly so it's like a vocal solo and then it gets faster and awesome. starts out kinda slow then after the first single line saying it gets a lot faster. here goes: These words that cross my lips They’ll never be a lie From the very dawn of day Until the hour I die I love you with all my heart We’ll never be apart I never want this part of me to die This is how it goes You said you’d love me Forever and always No one has ever felt like this I sealed the deal with a kiss Let’s get this party started right Two weeks after your surgery You can’t speak so I’ll say your words for You And we will always be together No matter what the weather So I’ll seal this deal and make us feel like royalty Let’s go sing this song and dance along In Central Park Why can’t we forget about fighting? We should just throw it away. Away… Away…! |
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| Sloane | Jun 13 2007, 02:05 PM Post #2 |
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Blaze's GF
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Very nice...if you don't mind my asking, what inspired you to write that? i used to write songs. they never seemed to come out right. |
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| Wil | Jun 14 2007, 02:27 PM Post #3 |
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Lone Wolf
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I don't know why i decided to write it. it might've been...no, i really have no clue what inspiration i had. I just heard the music and wrote the lyrics. |
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| Sloane | Jun 14 2007, 09:55 PM Post #4 |
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Blaze's GF
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lol, cool. i really like it |
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| Harou | Jul 18 2007, 09:26 PM Post #5 |
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In The Middle
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its good...i think |
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| Sloane | Aug 2 2007, 03:38 AM Post #6 |
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Blaze's GF
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You think? I like it, I wish I could you play it, Wil |
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| Harou | Aug 5 2007, 10:05 PM Post #7 |
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In The Middle
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i think its good...Sloan and Wil together again! :rolleyes: Thats payback!!! for what you said on DA!! :angry: <_< |
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