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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 25 2008, 01:23 AM (162 Views) | |
| omegadra | Mar 25 2008, 01:23 AM Post #1 |
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Name:Eneru Codename: None Age:unknown Around his thirties Side: Villain Appearance: short blound hair wears a sorta of cap around his head has no shirt, wears arabian like pants wears no shoes (maybe sandles, he has has a huge ring sticking out of his back wiith drum on it that he uses in most of his attacks Personality:Is borad easily and likes to play games with his oppounet, has a huge superiority complex (belives he's a god) Power(s): manipulate, absorb, generate and transform into electricity he had another ablity call Mantra which gave him the power to read the will of his oppounet and predict how they will attack this ablity could also sense and hear everything around him however ever sense he arrived on the ground the ablity has sense disapeard but even with out all of his powers Enel is a skilled Warrior and Stratices. Weakness: Can not swim, and is weaken when exsposed to seawater or Seastone (which can only be found in the univere he comes from) Can be phyicaly harm by somthing that does not conduct (or resistant) Electircity like rubber also Enel Loses control of his Mantra when he loes his Focues (not that he can use it now) Main Objective: Wants to take over the world and to be worshipe like a god History: not much is know about enel except that he comes from whats called a sky Island in his univere he destory the skyIsland he was born on and took control of another skyisland which from there he built his fly Ark Maxium is later defeated by the Hero of that world he leaves that world behind and heads to what he belive to be Fairy Vearth a place were gods resides (but it was actally the moon) when he arived there he found in army of robot flightless Birds (not Pengiuns more like ducks or chicks) and after defeating some space pirates he reived all the robots and made the moon his new empire oh and the Maxium was destroyed by the space pirates but as time went by he grew borad of ruling the moon and set his sites on bigger things so he had his army build a new Maxium and headed for earth with ambition to rule it (plese tell me if there Is any thing that needs to be change for this character) |
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| Deleted User | Mar 25 2008, 11:55 AM Post #2 |
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| omegadra | Mar 25 2008, 03:43 PM Post #3 |
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OK I modifyed my post and Disable Eneru Mantra ablity but may I asked what was wrong with it |
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| Deleted User | Mar 25 2008, 03:45 PM Post #4 |
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Because knowing what the opponent is going to do before they do it, and having an ability that allows you to pretty much vanish is a little bit...... Well, it's kind of GMing a little bit. |
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| omegadra | Mar 25 2008, 05:42 PM Post #5 |
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Vanish Whst do you mean I do not reacall saying he had such in ablity if your refering to his ablity to turn into the Lighting I fully willing to obey the Stamina Rule and another thing is it againts the rules For eneru to uses the Maxim to Travel around in "And as for Mantra for the record its not quit as powerful as you think It can read his obounet will but he can't read somthing like say a Ricosha shot off a wall, in other words he can't predict random thing or how a Machine or robot would attack, he can predict the will of living things also I was going to make that in ablity that requires him to use stamina to use And when think about it Eneru no different from Sandman or Aquaman only he's made of Lightning But if you still relutent to use tell How should limit his ablity but still stay same villain that everyone loves (or loaths) |
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| Deleted User | Mar 25 2008, 06:25 PM Post #6 |
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I was referring to the ability to turn into electricity. You see, if he can see what's coming, like precognition, and then just change into an immaterial substance, he can avoid taking damage at any time, regardless of his stamina running out. I can see what you're saying, but electricity is totally immaterial. You can hit it and nothing happens to it. There will at least be some form of impact when hitting sand or water. As for the ricochet comment, chances are that most attacks are going to be head on, so it doesn't matter if he can't read random things, if he can tell that his opponent is going to slash at him before they move, then he has a clearly unfair advantage. Oh, and if the opponent realizes this and is planning to use ricochet attacks, what happens then? He'll know their intent, even though it's to ricochet things against walls and the like to hit him, so his inability to read those is linked to his ability to know what they're going to do. The machine stuff is alright, but the power just isn't realistic in this situation. I'd recommend that the ability is just done away with. Give him enhanced reflexes in place of it, at least then he doesn't know what's going to happen before it does. That seems pretty fair, wouldn't you agree? |
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| omegadra | Mar 25 2008, 07:45 PM Post #7 |
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I did take away his mantra I Rewrite the description so it would say he lost his Mantra when he landed. owe here A video that show enel in action just to give you in Ideal on how his powers work http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJoKNOGihmI |
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| Deleted User | Mar 26 2008, 01:47 PM Post #8 |
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It's approved then. |
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