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Blackness Into the Light; Rating: PG-15 to R in some chapter
Topic Started: Jul 14 2009, 11:57 PM (1,881 Views)
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Rated PG-15 for violance, and R in some chapters for... possible other things I haven't decided if I will put in here or not. n_n; :$

This is a Shippuden (Naruto) fan fic. Like it or don't, tell me about it. ^_^ I haven't been one for writing, but I was catching up on my Naruto manga when this one particular panel moved me so much it inspired this whole scenario.

So basically this fan fic is based on the speculation 'What if'?

What if Sasuke had actually died... ? When Deidara blew himself up?

Part 1

Itachi heaved a sigh, his insides shuddering under the invisible weight that rested upon his weary shoulders. His heart quivered painfully as he painstackingly thought of how his beloved little brother died by the hands, or rather the blasts, of Deidara. He turned to his side and sat down, putting his face in his hands, elbows on knees. The inside of his chest burned powerfully with strong emotions of loss and hopelessness.

Twin trails of tears scorched through his hands and scoured paths down his arms. He tried in vain to repress a shudder, but his whole body shook slightly as he exhaled.

Dead...

His throat constricted, tightened.

Sasuke.... is dead....

Itachi's broken heart rose in his throat.

He was supposed to kill me... All in vain.... It was all in vain.

The last Uchiha's hands dropped from his face and his head hung low. His hair hung limply in front of his face. Memories of his little brother flashed through his mind from when they were younger.

"Look, Itachi!" Sasuke held up a small leaf between two fingers, his face beeming. The top part was burnt away. The young Uchiha boy's face simply beamed with pride.

"See? Can you see what I did?"

Itachi bent over to get a better look, his eyes glowing warmly. The corners of his mouth turned up ever so slightly in a smile.

"Did you do that, little man?" He asked, reaching for the burnt leaf. Taking it in his fingers, he twirled it slowly.

"Uh-huh!" His grin was so huge Itachi thought his face would split.

A low chuckle escaped Itachi's throat, and he placed a hand on Sasuke's hand and ruffled his hair.

"That is quite an acheivment, Sasuke. You will be a grand shinobi one day; I know it."

Sasuke giggled happily and took the leaf back from Itachi.

"Itachi, will you teach me to be as good as you one day?" Sasuke asked earnestly, his face suddenly serious.

"Huh?" Itachi blinked a few times, his mouth hanging open slightly. After a few heartbeats, he smiled and chuckled again.

"I would love to, Sasuke."


The powerful shinobi resisted the urge to hug himself. He didn't know what to do with his arms. Itachi felt like his heart had fallen out of his chest and shattered upon the cold floor. It was his first real time alone from other Akatsuki members since he heard that Sasuke died. He couldn't think clearly, but he felt that he had kept his true emotions hidden long enough. What could it hurt, to briefly express what was in his heart?

A candle briefly flickered in the corner of the room, casting a dancing shadow on the stool it rested on. A centipede crawled up the wall in front of Itachi, but he didn't notice it. It was too dark, and his eyes too close to blindness.

"Pointless to have a candle... It doesn't give off enough light to fill the room. And I'm nearly blind." He half smiled, as two more tears eased over his eyelids and slid hotly down his cheeks, blazing a salty trail. He chuckled again, a little more loudly this time. Another slipped from his throat. Before it completely escaped his mouth, an intense wave of sadness crashed over him, flooding his senses, and without even realizing it his chuckle turned into a sob.

His sobs grew louder, echoing around the empty room, completely giving into his grief. He closed his eyes and relaxed all his muscles completely. With that, he fell to the floor with a heavy thud, his head bouncing on the hard floor. The wave of grief pounded his insides, tearing at his internal organs, wreaking havoc on his mind.

"S-sasuke!' He softly moaned his deceased brothers name, clenching his eyes shut as tight as he could. Slowly at first, then with quickening speed, Itachi's conscienceness slipped away from him...

In the mists of his unconsciencesness, images began to flit across Itachi Uchiha's mind. At first, just flickering images. Then they began to grow, and became steady images in his mind. It was a scene from his childhood that he hadn't thought about in a long time.

"Would you like to hold him, Itachi-kun?" A woman in a bed holding an infant asked a young Itachi.

"Huh?" Itachi spluttered, looking up at the woman round-eyed as a puppy. "You mean I could... in my arms?" Asked the little boy.

"Uh-huh." She smiled at him sofly, offering the babe to Itachi. "He is your brother, after all. So you can hold him as much as you like, son."

"Um, o-h, okay, mom." Itachi reached up and held out his arms as his mother gently placed the infant in Itachi's outstretched arms.

The young boy looked into the face of his baby brother unsmiling. Itachi clutched him to his chest and started to gently rock his brother back and forth.

"Whats his name, mother?" He asked, stopping briefly to look up at his mom, his face openly curious.

"Sasuke. His name is Uchiha Sasuke." She replied.

"Sasuke." Itachi said, his gaze turned back to the new born. An unknown feeling welled up within Itachi and he knew immediatly that he and Sasuke would become great friends. The older brother realized with surprise that he was already feeling protective of his new little brother.

' Sasuke. Don't worry, Sasuke. I won't let anything happen to you. I will protect you no matter what.' He thought fiercly to himself. Impulsively, he put his cheek next to Sasuke's and nezzled his cheek next to Sasuke's.

"Awwwe, isn't that precious?" Itachi and Sasuke's mother crooned at her two sons.


The image faded and there was nothing but blackness in Itachis world. He knew not how much time had passed when he came to, but he knew what he was going to do.

The youngest Uchiha in Akatsuki realized that he was in a bed, his head bandaged.

"Don't move too much, Itachi, your head isn't healed all the way yet." Konan said to Itachi, placing a hand on his shoulder to gently press him back.

Itachi sighed inwardly. "It's fine, don't worry about it." He said, but didn't have the heart to resist her. A lot had gone out of him when he had discovered the death of his younger brother, Sasuke.

That night when Konan wasn't in the room, he got out of bed and went in search of someone. When he found him, he simply said, "I'm leaving. I won't be coming back."

Konan was in the room, and she looked questiongly at Pein, but Itachi noticed no more as he left the room and made his way out of the Akatsuki hide-out. No one tried to stop him. He dropped the Akatsuki robe at the exit of their hide-out.
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Oh.. This is really good. o-o; Is there more or is that all?
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Oh.. This is really good. o-o; Is there more or is that all?
Yes, there is more to come. ^_^ Thanks for reading. :)
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If Sasuke had actually died...

Part 2

Itachi walked out of the Akatsuki forever and never looked back. He started out heading east, and just kept walking. He wanted to get away from everything that reminded him of Sasuke. For days he walked, only stoping for small drinks of water when it was available, only eating when he found edible plants. He didn't have the heart to try and hunt for something. The former Akatsuki member could feel his will to live drain from his body. The sun beat down mercilessly on him, drenching him in sweat. His hair limp from presperation. Itachi panted heavily during the day and at night let himself fall to the ground if he didn't feel like going on. Most days he walked all the while the sun was in the sky, and kept walking during the night till he passed out from exhaustion.

"Deidara, you fool... Why did you have to kill Sasuke?" He asked out loud, a few weeks after abandoning Akatsuki. "He was meant to kill me. Now who will avenge the Uchiha's?"

The trees became denser, and the thick undergrowth made it difficult to walk in a straight path. The sun beat down on him only sparingly, but it did not stop the heat from penetrating the canopy above. Unfamiliar plants and animals surrounded him, strange birds sounded warnings, alerting the other animals in the area, but Itachi paid them no mind. As the days wore on, and more and more time passed, he became so dehydrated from so little liquids that his tongue became swollen in his mouth, yet he did not notice. The rogue shinobi's misery consumed him...

His anguish seeped into his bones, wrapping itself around his core as he once again thought of Sasuke's demise. The turmoil roiling in his gut burned his aching heart into a throbbing frenzy. Itachi stopped in his tracks. He was standing in a patch of sunlight. The solitary Uchiha turned his sun burned face towards the day ball, his normally expressionless face subtley etched with destitution.

Everything suddenly seem to come into sharp focus. He was totally aware of his surroundings. Up until this point he hadn't noticed how big, exactly, a hole Sasuke's death had put in his chest. The muscles around and in Itachi's heart tightened painfully. He weakly gripped his chest where it hurt as a sob rent from his lungs. Itachi hadn't realized this yet, but his usual calm demeanor and composure had melted away with the death of his brother.

"Sasuke, Sasuke... My... little brother." Dozens of memories from their childhood together flashed through his mind, strengthening the awful aching in his chest.

What am I supposed to live for without him? I... I had always believed he would become strong enough to kill me, and that would be it. I would end.

"And now I'm stuck alive, to live however much longer I have left."

But I don't know if I can make it much longer... Everything depended on him. Itachi thought, as a huge lump rose in his throat, his eyes starting to brim with tears.

The rogue shinobi let his head fall forward till his chin was on his chest. A cry broke from his throat as a fresh wave of sorrow swept over him. Itachi fell to his knees, sobbing softly, and cradled his face in the palms of his hands. A staggered breath caught in his throat and turned his soft sobs into loud ones.

Alone, and beaten, Itachi wept loudly without shame. Through his tears he cried, "It wasn't supposed to end like this! What am I supposed to do now?! EVERYTHING is ru-u-ined!" Itachi's voice broke on the last word, turning it into more sobs.

In the blink of an eye, all of Itachi's woes turned into a passionate, furious anger. Leaping to his feet, his slammed his fists to his forehead, in the same instant snatching them away, holding both fists up to the firmament, and shouted to the heavens, "WHERE IS THE JUSTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE?!"

As that last word exploded from his lungs, Itachi turned on his Mangekyo Sharingan and simultaniously used Amaterasu. The unholy black flames shot forth with amazing speed, burning everything to cinders that Itachi looked upon.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"

As Itachi's wordless howl continued, so he continued to use Amaterasu to burn everything to the ground, till blood poured like a waterfall from his eyes, mixing with real tears.
Edited by Shino-kun, Jul 15 2009, 11:37 PM.
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This is good. Very, very good. More please?
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Thought of a better title for the fanfic because I thought the other one sucked. ^_^ ;

Another thing: Once I finish typing Part 4, I'll post part 3. :P
Edited by Shino-kun, Jul 16 2009, 07:06 PM.
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If Sasuke had actually died....

Part 3

I never got to tell him... how much he.... he really means to me.

A crystaline tear squeezed between his eye lids and slid down his cheek.

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A young girl around the age of 15 was walking along a path through the woods. The girl was a little short for her age, with long soft pink hair with lavender streaks running through it. Her bangs framed her face, while the longer hair in front was swept back in a high pony tail. Some of the hair in the back was braided into two pleats. She wore a delicate form fitting outfit with soft earth tons, and her eyes were like light blue windows: open to everyone. On one arm she held a basket filled with herbs and medicinal plants. Slung around one shoulder was a medium sized canteen of water. She paused for a moment to watch a beautiful butterfly with green and black striped wings, then continued her walk down the path.

She paused. Just up ahead she saw something. It didn't look right. It didn't look like the path she had walked on many times before. Taking a few steps towards it, a pungent, noxious smell hit her nose.

"What in the-- ?!" She mumbled to herself as she clamped a hand over her nose. "It smells absolutely fowl!" She gasped, her brow wrinkling as she boldly walked forward.

She stepped into a clearing filled with nothing but ashes and burnt tree trunks. "Oh, my-- !" She broke off in mid sentence, too horrified to complete the thought.

Even the ground was totally covered in ash.

What could have caused this... such devestation?!

Determined to try and find a clue as to how the forest had burned away so quickly, she strode forward with an even pace. Clouds of ash rose up around her feet as she stepped, then the wind would catch it and carry it away. She coughed every few seconds for the stench was horrendous.

The once beautiful forest, now ashen and burnt to nothingness, stretched as far as the girl could see. Compelled, she continued to walk, not aimlessly, to find the cause of it all. It was like a magnat was pulling her, constantly, to the source of the burnt forest.

After three hours of walking, she was starting to get tired. "Whatever caused this must be gone by now. I should probably turn back or else father will begin to worry."

With that, she turned around to head back the way she came, but something to her left caught her eye.

"Huh? I wonder what that could be?" She asked herself aloud, and began to walk cautiously toward the unknown mass.

After about 20 feet, she began to be able to make out a shape. "Clothes? No, wait, I think I see hair...... "

The young lady leapt over a burnt tree trunk, not trusting it to put her weight on.

"Yes, I think I do see hair. Is-- is it dead? It doesn't appear to be burned like everything else.... "

Now only a few feet away she could make out a pale foot wearing a sandal. "A foot?" She said, surprised.

Upon reaching it, she stooped down for a better look.

"It's-- it's a man!" She blinked in surprise and tentaviley reached a hand out towards it. "Is he dead? He doesn't smell dead."

She placed her hand on the shoulder and tried to roll him over, but he was too heavy. "He's still warm... " She breathed, shocked.

The girl got up, and walked around to the other side. The man's arm on his head, so she couldn't see his face. Moving it aside, she suddenly dropped it, gasping. His face was covered in dried blood!

She shrieked and took a step back, turning her face from the scene. Regaining her composure, she turned back around to examine him more. Unlike his surroundings, the man was not even the slightest bit burned. Even his clothes were in tact, all though quite rugged. Stuble covered his chin, almost half an inch in length. It looked quite unkept, so she figured he didn't let it grow out on purpose.

"What happened to you??" She asked puzzled, moving a lock of hair from his face. Compassion gripped her heart, and moved her to action. She bent to her own clothes and ripped a few inches from it. Then, taking her canteen from around her shoulder, popped the cap and then filled the shredded cloth with water. Gently, she began to clean the blood from his face, which she noticed wasn't above his lower eye lids.

Thats odd... She thought as she gently wiped the blood from his bottom eye lids. What caused him to bleed like this? I don't see any open wounds. She wondered.

When his face was as clean of blood as she could get it, she knelt in the ashes and picked up his and cradled it in her lap. She folded the wet cloth to a clean part, then wiped some dirt away she noticed on his forehead, and moved another lock of hair, and examined his face.

He looks so young... Not much older than me, anyways.

As the wind stirred, you blew a piece of ash onto the mans face. Picking it off, she piered closer. It was then that she noticed something about his features.

"You look soo sad. What could cause someone this much pain?" She said to the unconscience man, a frown creasing her forehead. Deeply moved by the strangers sorrow, the young girl bent over to lightly embrace.

"I'm so sorry!" She whispered.

Straightening up, she saw that his lips were dry like paper.

"Oh! I should be more concerned with keeping you alive for the moment, shouldn't I?!"

As she spoke, she took her canteen and removed the lid. Placing her free hand under his head and picking it up slightly, she put the canteen to his mouth, and used the edge of it part his lips, then his teeth. The girl slowly began to poor the water into his open mouth a little at a time. Seeing that it wasn't going down his throat because his tongue was so swollen, she just let a little of the water cool his tongue down. When the strangers tongue had shrunken enough, the girl began to poor more water into his mouth. Though he was out cold, instinct told him to swallow.

After a few moments of drinking, he began to splutter weakly, and his eyes opened to slits. His parched mouth began to move, air rasping from his lungs.

"S-s-sasu-sasuke-kun. No, Sasuke-k-kun." His voice was barely above a whisper.

His eyes fluttered for a brief second, then closed again as his head lolled to the side.

"Sasuke?" The girl repeated the strange word, wondering at it's origins.

Shrugging her shoulders, the young lady became filled with determination to save this young man. Surely he would parish if he did not get help soon. Softly placing his head back on the ash covered ground, she stood, turned around and put one leg over the young man's stomach. She squatted till she could reach his hands, then, as lightly as she could, hefted him onto her own back. She was both shocked and saddened to feel how light he was. It was absurd how easy it was to carry him because of how light he was. It must have been a long time indeed since his last meal. Doggedly, she made her way back to village, arriving well after dark.
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o-o; I like this, a lot. This is awesome.
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o-o; I like this, a lot. This is awesome.
Thanks!!! ^_^

Are you a Naruto fan at all?
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No problem and I use to watch Naruto all the time.
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I will most likely add Part 4 tomorrow! =D ^_^

You should get back into Naruto. :P The second part of the series, still airing in Japan as "Naruto Shippuuden" is pretty awesome. ^_^ And you can watch and download episodes of them at [url=www.tailedfox.com]Tailed Fox[/URL] . :)
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Okay. I've tried to get back into it, but I dunno. I've lost interest in a lot of things. Thanks though. ^^;
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Part 4

Darkness.

Itachi was in complete darkness.

What happened?

Nothingness.

The meaning of time. The meaning of life. The feeling of being alive, the five senses... Nothing.

And then...

Silent voices.

No, not silent. Just quiet. Whispering.

What happened to me?

"Mmmm..." Itachi moaned quietly, his eyes clenching slightly, his head turning a little.

"Sssh, he's waking up!"

"Be quiet!"

"I am, look! He's moving." Her voice quivered with anticipation. Or anxiety.

"Go get my father, quick!"

"Okay!" Foot steps pattered away, fading seconds later.

Soft foot falls approached, light breathing with it. A gentle breeze could be felt. Smelled like... camomyle?

Camomyle... ? Thats odd... Smells good, though.

Warm, soft pressure could be felt on his face. A hand. Slowly, the half awake man moved his arm up to grab at the hand on his face. Half way to the hand, memories of the recent past flooded his mind like a broken dam had been opened. Instantly, his eyes filled with tears, and an involuntary shiver went up his spine. In almost the same instant he cried out his brother’s name, the bitter taste of anguish filling his mouth, his mind, his body. Het let out a wordless scream, keening his grief. When he finally lay silent, he fell into a heavy, troubled sleep where he received little real rest.

The hand jerked back, trembling. Round light blue eyes gazed horror-stricken at the stranger. What could cause him this much agony?

He is truly a tormented soul... She lamented, her own eyes filling with tears.

"What a soft heart you have, my daughter." A soft craggy voice said.

"Father! I didn't hear you come in!" She turned to glance at the hand he had rested on her shoulder, then looked up into his eyes.

"I wouldn't have heard me either with the racket this man was making." He said, smiling not unkindly at her.

"He has suffered a great loss, father, I can feel it. This may just be me, but he practically resonates with… loss, with grief. I wish I could help ease his suffering. I've always hated it when someone suffers. I just can't stand it."

"You have always been too compassionate, Akiko-chan. There is no need to make others problems your own." Replied her father, his face portraying his concern.

Suddenly, the strangers left arm jerked violently, bumping something in his inside pocket. Something cylandrical fell to the floor, then a folded sheet of paper floated down after it.

"What is that, my child?" Akiko's father asked, pointing at the paper and vial.

"Huh? Oh, I don't know. Lets see." She bent over and picked the folded paper and vial. Looking to the note first, she read it aloud.

"Dear Itachi-kun,

The eyes are for you. Tobi retrieved them from Sasuke's body after Deidara blew himself up.
Apparently, Sasuke had put some kind of protection jutsu on his own eyes. Or perhaps Orochimaru did. Who knows?
For what, I don't know, so don't ask me. But I guess Tobi thought you'd want them for some reason. So, here you
go. I hope they bring the light back to your blackness.
Kisame-kun."


Without warning, Itachi's hand shot out, grabbing the girls wrist that held the vial. Shocked, and a little frightened, the girl and her father looked down at the owner of the hand. Itachi glared up at Akiko and her father, his brow furrowed in contained rage. His brow ridges quivered, another testament to his anger.

"That. Is. Mine." Itachi said giving them a piercing gaze, his voice quivering.

Akiko's father was too stunned to speak, and starred open-mouthed at the shinobi.

Akiko slowly shook her head back and forth, shaking visibly. That gaze....

"I-I-I'm-I'm sorry, I didn't realize... " She stuttered, her whole body atremble. "H-h-he-re, take it-- take it!"

She let go of the vial, her hand shaking violently now. Within the same second, Itachi let go of her wrist and caught the vial before it hit the floor. As soon as he let go, Akiko fled from the room stuttering an apology. Her father quickly followed her out, closing the door behind him.

Itachi glared after them and once the door was closed he collapsed, exhausted onto the bed. The rogue was so malnurished that just to exert that much effort had exhausted all his strength. He gasped for breath a few times, holding the vial in front of his face. It was nearly impossible to see, but Itachi knew that his beloved brothers eyes were floating inside the vial. Then he passed out.

Memories from a forgotten age floated through Itachi's mind while he was passed out.

Mentally, Itachi was beginning to prepare himself for the assault on Uchiha. But before he could finish preparations, there was something his heart made him feel compelled to do. Say good-bye.
Sitting on the wall that separated the Uchiha Clan from the rest of Konoha, sixteen year old Itachi paused momentarily to take in the whole village, ANBU mask in place. Not far from his perch was the place he called home. Leaping off the ramparts, he landed lightly on his feet, and silently made his way to his home, for what he knew to be the last time. He removed the mask and placed it in a pack on his back

The ANBU teenager walked into the home of his parents and was suddenly met by his younger brother.

"Welcome home, Itachi-kun!" Sasuke greeted him warmly, wrapping his older brother in a welcoming hug.

Itachi returned the hug, and ruffled his hair, smiling fondly at him.

"How was your day, Sasuke-kun?" He asked, smiling lovingly at the young Uchiha boy.

Sasuke frowned, and looked down, putting a finger in his mouth. He quickly looked back up, a wide grin on his face.

"Much better, now that you're here!" He declared, adoration glowing from him. “But I’m about to go to the Academy!” Sasuke announced, puffing up his chest.

Itachi gave a low chuckle, his heart swelling to fill his chest with the love he had for Sasuke. Abruptly, he remembered his orders for this night, and was almost completely overwhelmed by a massive wave of sadness of what was to come, and by what his future would be like after that moment. It would tear the heart from his chest to do it, but it would be done. For Sasuke.

"Will you show me how you use the windmill shuriken, Itachi-kun?" Sasuke asked, his eyes becoming wide as saucers.

Itachi let out a short burst of laughter, saying "Ooh, can those eyes get ANY bigger?"

Sasuke giggled softly, grinning at his older brother. "Will you?"

A shadow of regret appeared in Itachi’s eyes as he gazed into the hopeful face of his brother.

Taking his first two fingers on one hand, the ANBU jabbed Sasuke lightly in the forehead and said, “I’m afraid not today. I just stopped in real quick to wish you good luck at the Academy today. I’ll see you later though, okay?”

Itachi smiled sadly, thinking to himself ‘I may never get to do that again…’

Sasuke noticed the difference in Itachi immediately, and asked, “Why do you look so sad, Itachi-kun?”

Itachi heaved a sigh, closing his eyes as he resisted the urge to cry. Why was it suddenly so hard to do his duty? The older brother stood up and turned around, knowing that if he did look into that face again he would break. “I’m not sad, Sasuke-kun. Just… tired, I guess. It’s been a long day. I must go now, alright?”

Sasuke frowned deeply, only hugging his older brother tightly one last time before he walked out the door. Then Itachi left…

Outside the house, Itachi went around to a window he knew Sasuke would walk by. As his beloved only brother past, Itachi whispered to him, “This night will hurt you like never before, Sasuke-kun… I love you.”

With that, Itachi glanced around quickly, then vanished.


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OMG, how did you guys like it??? xD I worked super hard on that last memory, so I hope it turned out okay. :D
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