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| PVW, Showcase 10.19.11 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 19 2011, 04:53 PM (689 Views) | |
| Codered | Oct 19 2011, 04:53 PM Post #1 |
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The Luther Burger
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http://pvwrestling.org/roleplays/showcase-...-19th-2011.html |
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| Overly_Critical_Jue | Oct 19 2011, 05:52 PM Post #2 |
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Amigo, I ain't anybody but Juan Vasquez!
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Apparently Landii are now immortal due to genetic mutation. Thanks a lot, Fontana. |
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| RedRajah | Oct 19 2011, 06:02 PM Post #3 |
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Shocked Woona is Shocked
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Well, he's got to one-up the cancer kid somehow... |
| And here's where I pretend to be a writer... | |
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| Flouzemaker | Oct 19 2011, 06:43 PM Post #4 |
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The Luther Burger
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Just assume one of the nurses was Juan Vasquez in disguise, and everything will be fine.
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| Overly_Critical_Jue | Oct 19 2011, 07:23 PM Post #5 |
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Amigo, I ain't anybody but Juan Vasquez!
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Impossible. There were two female Landii in the vicinity and neither one was punched out. |
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| Mozeart | Oct 19 2011, 07:39 PM Post #6 |
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Sheik-ee, Sheik-ee, give me your answer do...
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So ... I guess the L&G flash was a little long. I was warned it would be split in advance but still, it didn't feel long when I was writing it. |
| And it was at this moment that the entire world realized, in unison, that tandem bicycles were AWESOME~! | |
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| RedRajah | Oct 19 2011, 07:41 PM Post #7 |
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Shocked Woona is Shocked
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I hope I got Tyler's tone OK. Had to change my promo up when I saw his description. |
| And here's where I pretend to be a writer... | |
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| Codered | Oct 20 2011, 08:02 AM Post #8 |
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The Luther Burger
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It was a little long ... but I also thought it would come across in sections through out the show. Did it not work for you? |
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| TheotherJC | Oct 20 2011, 08:36 AM Post #9 |
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Reducto
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Fontana's RP nearly crushed my soul before revitalizing it. Seriously, having had my son in the hospital for ten days with wires in him and tubes down his nose... it was the worst experience of my life. And Flouze captured it fucking perfectly... and I kind of hate him for THAT. But the end was so worth it... congrats on one of my now ALL TIME favorite RPs. L&G, while I initially thought would drag, made me smile through the whole thing. The fact that they're actually trying to train Gutch is a major hat-tip to Max and Sal, as they're taking the threat seriously. Rob Cole's was back to being deep, emotionally tearing. Phoenix's was good, especially calling out Gionet the way he did. Hartt/Nevermind may be the sleeper feud of the year. Both chars are really getting traction and I appreciate the work they're doing, even if they're not getting the kudos they deserve. Biz w/o JDM and w/o Devin was good, especially calling out the other Houlihan. And finally, Gibson Hayes continues to write circles around me. Dammit! |
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| orklad | Oct 20 2011, 09:18 AM Post #10 |
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The Luther Burger
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Okay, I normally don't chime in on stuff because...well...I'm judgemental...but I wanted to share my thoughts on the Fontanna RP. Flouze did a great job with mood, and it was very well written, and deserves much praise on that front. That being said, I had 2 main issues with it, which caused the RP not to work as well for me as it seems to have for other people: 1. Timing: With SCD just doing the Josie thing, it seems like PVW is turning into 'Dead Kid TV', which makes it lose a lot of the impact. All we need next is Craven sitting down to a bowl full of babies for breakfast and we've hit the illogical conclusion to the trend. 2. Believability (and this from the person that writes for Spectre): My mother worked in a hospital for a very long time...and often was in the Pediatric ICU...when babies come in with the problems that were in evidence, they get shipped off ASAP to a specialist facility if any are available (her hospital medi-vacced to Children's Hospital of Philadelpha if there was space, and St. Christopher's Children's Hospital if there wasn't). Even if the kid was in too rough shape to move, the tubes, the monitors, etc make me have difficulty swallowing that the doctors and nurses didn't realize that he wasn't dead. Maybe it's my own experience, which is clearly going to differ from other readers...but the RP lost a lot of it's impact because I simply couldn't get around the 'facts' and I know them. Just my two cents (for what they're worth) |
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Orklad or Don, Lord of Pudding | |
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| Overly_Critical_Jue | Oct 20 2011, 11:18 AM Post #11 |
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Amigo, I ain't anybody but Juan Vasquez!
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I knew something was up when he showed a baby corpse. Even Flouze isn't tasteless enough to have Fontana talking to a baby corpse. That being said, I agree. The impact was lessened by the fact we already killed off another rugrat a few weeks ago. All we need now is for Spectre to reanimate Rob Cole's dead kid as his zombie thrall to bring this to full circle. Actually... ...nah, they're not even feuding. <_< |
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| RedRajah | Oct 20 2011, 11:31 AM Post #12 |
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Shocked Woona is Shocked
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The 180 whiplash left a bad taste in my mouth -- all the angst and sympathy, but none of the consequences of an actual death. Especially on the heels of what happened to Josie already. |
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| Overly_Critical_Jue | Oct 20 2011, 11:53 AM Post #13 |
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Amigo, I ain't anybody but Juan Vasquez!
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I thought had it ended at Fontana walking into the room right after declaring "I HAVE NEVER HELD MY SON" and then fading, it would've had perfect emotional impact and ended on a great cliffhanger...but of course, the dumb Landii had to come back to life. Dumb Landii...always coming back to life. ![]() |
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| RedRajah | Oct 20 2011, 11:55 AM Post #14 |
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Shocked Woona is Shocked
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Well, 2012 is when the Apocalandis will strike... |
| And here's where I pretend to be a writer... | |
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| Overly_Critical_Jue | Oct 20 2011, 12:13 PM Post #15 |
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Amigo, I ain't anybody but Juan Vasquez!
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But what about Marshallgeddon? |
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