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PVW - Showcase 03.02.12
Topic Started: Mar 2 2012, 02:57 PM (1,440 Views)
Codered
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Heath Dawson...a man so nice he has his promo twice!
And here's where I pretend to be a writer...
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RedRajah,Mar 2 2012
03:10 PM
Heath Dawson...a man so nice he has his promo twice!

HAHA! Shoot I did didn't I.

Well ... It's worth reading TWICE!
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Codered,Mar 2 2012
03:13 PM


Well ... It's worth reading TWICE!

Agreed.


-> HOPE
-> Rob Cole
-> Sinister #1
-> The Biz
-> Sons of Anarchy
-> Adrian Freeman
-> Talion
-> Xenia Sonova and Sterling Von Braun
-> Kevin Quartermann
-> Chris Hartt
-> Heath Dawson
-> Lineage
-> Joe Hardy
-> Cow and Chicken
-> Dragon Kid
-> Sinister #2
-> Max and Sal
-> Heath Dawson
-> Derek Weaver
-> Gold Rush
-> Herscher von Donkerhardt
-> Danny Daniels & Chance Holiday
-> Whisper
-> The Berserkers
-> Supreme Wright
-> Tracy Hudson
-> Christopher Black
-> Tommy Von Braun and Alex Wallace
-> Johnny Detson
-> Marcus Manson
-> The Mercenary
-> Erich Seiger
-> Uncle Frank
-> Perry Fontana & Senor Cloak Dos
-> William Craven
-> Spectre
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It is a pretty awesome hammerlock.
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And Tuna Sandwich.
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-> HOPE - Nice re-focusing rp. A little inconsistent in the editing department. Johnstone curses like a sailor throughout and then Weaver gets a TV edit when he swears. Weird.

-> Lineage - Nice setup, loved the little details like how nicely Lineage was written on the chalk board.

-> Joe Hardy - Hm. Interesting. Makes me think that Lester is soon to be in our midst, if he isn't already. I do not like the term e-wrestling being used in this though, but maybe that's just me.

-> Cow and Chicken - Good stuff all around. Continually entertaining.

-> Gold Rush - I try to keep my RPs with these two entertaining and quick and easy to read. I hope I am succeeding in that regard.

-> The Mercenary - Merc is just getting better and better.

-> Uncle Frank - Uncle Frank will be World Champion some day.
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-> HOPE

Good work, showing all five men having their own agendas and that they aren't on the same page. Hayes turning into a master politician to keep the others in line is smart- but now that they're shown to be on the verge of breaking apart, they either need to do something to become more cohesive- or split apart completely.


-> Rob Cole

Interesting idea... looking for someone on PVW with guts. I'm not sure how well that comes across right after the card with both the Rebirth match and the 7 man "OH MY GOD" ladder match- but Cole basically daring anyone on the roster to actually fight him could lead to some interesting storylines. I'm picturing Spectre offering up a fight with Cole- not against him, but against Senor Dos Cloak.


-> Sinister #1

Nicely selling the Rebirth match.


-> The Biz

The first rule of Dragon Kid is... you don't talk about Dragon Kid.


-> Sons of Anarchy

Good flash, not great. I'd like to see something to differentiate Violence from Beast.


-> Adrian Freeman

Count me among Freeman's growing legion of fans. He comes across as a realistic obnoxious jerk, which makes him stand out among the other heels in PVW (Most of whom should be seeking intense therapy if not electroshock treatments). Excellent promo.


-> Talion

Speaking of therapy... I have no clue who Talion is. My fear is that when he finally reveals himself, half the audience won't know, and will need a primer to understand just why he's trying to seek redemption. The longer the buildup is before he reveals himself, the bigger the name needs to be to justify the buildup. If it goes past Shattered Dreams, Talion may need to be Rick Styles to require this much redemption...


-> Xenia Sonova and Sterling Von Braun

I like the idea of people competing for Legacy's talents... nice way of getting them over. The private jet was overkill, but it's a good storyline and a good way to springboard Legacy.


-> Kevin Quartermann

Good flash. A problem with dealing with Nevermind is that, since he really is that apathetic, it can be hard to get a handle on how to deal with the character. Quartermann's focused on Nevermind being a de-motivator, someone who brings people down to Nevermind's level, and it works by channeling KQ's anger.


-> Chris Hartt

Lot of good flashes this week. Talks up both Black and Gionet, reminding people of their history.


-> Heath Dawson

I liked the two tapings, one of him bragging about the win over Merc, the other showing that the way it happened really is getting to him. I still think Dawson, more than any other character, needs a manager. He's being portrayed as talented but... not naive, but unworldy?


-> Lineage

Nice to finally get that "Lineage"/"Legacy" issue settled :). Randall and Kruger are making a great tag team.


-> Joe Hardy

I... have no idea where this is going. It's so different that it will either be magnificent- or awful.


-> Cow and Chicken

Memo to Jerod: Stop being funny. Funny tag teams is our schtick. :)


-> Dragon Kid

The second rule of Dragon Kid is... you don't talk about Dragon Kid.


-> Sinister #2

It's a good flash. Sin's flashes tend to feel long, and when there are so many flashes per show, it makes the long ones seem longer. Sin did put over Spectre, the Rebirth match, and SCD.


-> Max and Sal

Always hard to critique your own work. I think it turned out well.


-> Heath Dawson

I sense deja vu...


-> Derek Weaver

Good flash. Unlike Frank (who is delusional) or Gibson Hayes (who knows he's a lying SOB), Weaver has managed to justify all of his heelish actions to himself.


-> Gold Rush

Really liking the interaction between Beau and Regnigh. Excellent work.


-> Herscher von Donkerhardt

Yep- I can certainly see Detson as a William Craven proxy. I get the two confused all. the. time.

Hate to keep saying, "Good flash" because it's repetitive, but there's a lot of quality work on this show.


-> Danny Daniels & Chance Holiday

Again, hard to critique your own work.


-> Whisper

Fourth-wall breaking flash! Kinda... I don't know if Whisper is, like Talion, someone we should know who is hiding under a mask. If hasn't been so prevalent until this flash. Looking to see where this goes.


-> The Berserkers

Enjoyed this flash. I'm hoping this rivalry with Max and Sal is helping both teams but having them focus on each other.


-> Supreme Wright

Love the Wright/Freeman feud. Wouldn't be surprised if they're still feuding a year from now- only for the American title or even World title.


-> Tracy Hudson

Hudson's mood changes in the flash give me whiplash :). He goes from serious to silly to serious in the space of a few sentences. It's a good flash, but I'm still getting a handle on the character.


-> Christopher Black

A flash of few words and a lot of background tone. Sells the match and the result.


-> Tommy Von Braun and Alex Wallace

The counter to Sterling/Xenia. This may not end well for the Von Brauns.


-> Johnny Detson

The thing with Detson is- I don't know if he's really having these self-doubts... or if this is some grand false lead plan where he tricks Gibson Hayes into overconfidence. The fact that either could work is a testament to how well Errol is going with Detson.


-> Marcus Manson

Short, to the point, does a good job showing where the Misery Machine is at.


-> The Mercenary

Getting tired thanks to Theraflu so I'll keep the rest of the comments short. A little longwinded but keeps the "Merc doesn't like the newcomers". I would like to know if Epstein is sticking around or not.


-> Erich Seiger

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MP: Where are you currently?


ES: Calgary...Alberta, Canada.


WIN!!!


-> Uncle Frank

Poor poor Adrian Freeman...


-> Perry Fontana & Senor Cloak Dos

It's always tough to pull off a flash when your character can't speak. Really good job for Flouze to pull that out.


-> William Craven

Long flash- and, with so many flashes on the show, long flashes tend to fade out. I liked the concept of Victor Schwartz explaining Craven's history, but I think it would have been better either shorter or split into two parts.


-> Spectre

I liked his praise of Sin. Would have liked to see him put over his own wounds from the Rebirth match- sell it that even the winners don't escape unscathed. And threatening Gibson Hayes is always a good thing.
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Yeah, I forgot to TV EDIT with TJ. He's fun to write because while he's interested in success for his charges he wants them to do it his way.
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Pickyatwork,Mar 3 2012
12:45 AM
Yeah, I forgot to TV EDIT with TJ. He's fun to write because while he's interested in success for his charges he wants them to do it his way.

I don't mind him not being edited, it just threw me off when there was an edit later. :P
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crimsonjoe,Mar 3 2012
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-> William Craven

Long flash- and, with so many flashes on the show, long flashes tend to fade out. I liked the concept of Victor Schwartz explaining Craven's history, but I think it would have been better either shorter or split into two parts.

... That WAS part 2 of two parts!



Anyway, it was a good show, folks.
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-> Rob Cole

Interesting idea... looking for someone on PVW with guts. I'm not sure how well that comes across right after the card with both the Rebirth match and the 7 man "OH MY GOD" ladder match- but Cole basically daring anyone on the roster to actually fight him could lead to some interesting storylines.


Seiger might also be a good choice for that as well as the seven foot rookie still trying to prove himself takes on the former world champion.
And here's where I pretend to be a writer...
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There were a lot of really darn good RPS in this packet. Some hidden gems that I can't wait to see unfold and how you guys react.

Exciting times in PVW!
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Wow... when I wrote my RP, I didn't even think about the different directions the "lack of guts" thing could go in. Thanks! Honestly, I kind of threw it in there as mostly a throw-away series of lines to build up the "Shattered Dreams" Rumble.
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Now let us retreat wench, for tonight, we feast on snobbery...
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I was hoping for a Shattered Dreams roomba.
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