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PVW - Showcase
Topic Started: Sep 12 2012, 10:32 AM (2,099 Views)
Geddings
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...so it's not part of the great Brian Bell conspiracy?
Mr. Second Pick, 12th Round.

Rick Marley - still to be drafted

The One Brian Young - still to be drafted

Chase Williams - still to be drafted. But let's be honest... ;)

THE Outlaw - still to be [bleep] drafted

Rob Magnum - still to be drafted.

Stalker Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Sexy Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Swinger Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Schizo Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.
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Nope. You'll notice there was a complete lack of beckbreakers. Geddings isn't getting jobbed out -- yet.
And here's where I pretend to be a writer...
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Geddings
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Please. Brian invited me to his fantasy football league specifically so the teams could have a bye week.
Mr. Second Pick, 12th Round.

Rick Marley - still to be drafted

The One Brian Young - still to be drafted

Chase Williams - still to be drafted. But let's be honest... ;)

THE Outlaw - still to be [bleep] drafted

Rob Magnum - still to be drafted.

Stalker Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Sexy Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Swinger Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.

Schizo Johnny Styles - still to be drafted.
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Geddings,Sep 13 2012
10:31 AM
...so it's not part of the great Brian Bell conspiracy?

This is a Phil's conspiracy, Will. He is the one who coded the site! :P

However, I am glad it has effected you as usual. :banana:
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Geddings,Sep 13 2012
07:26 AM
Cut me a little slack. Please...please?

You must be new here.
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TheotherJC,Sep 12 2012
02:06 PM

---> Nevermind & Danny Daniels

God Damn, that was entertaining. Great promo guys. And Nevermind might be the best unintentional heel ever. I say unintentional, because as a man whip cares fir nothing, hes def a tweener. Great piece.


I'll give all the credit for this idea to Mike, since it was, in fact, his idea.

Nevermind _is_ a tweener. It even says so on his app and everything!
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Geddings,Sep 13 2012
10:26 AM
Plus, ya know...I haven't done this in a while. Cut me a little slack. Please...please?

I had a GM at Dragon*Con named Will Geddings; I think Bell jobbed him too! :lol:
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JeremySAtWork,Sep 13 2012
02:10 PM
Geddings,Sep 13 2012
10:26 AM
Plus, ya know...I haven't done this in a while. Cut me a little slack. Please...please?

I had a GM at Dragon*Con named Will Geddings; I think Bell jobbed him too! :lol:

Damn right!
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CobiWann,Sep 13 2012
06:38 AM
And, as a nice touch, I LOVED that the promos from the champions closed the packet. It shows that THESE are the top guys, no disrespect to anyone else or the guys who opened the packet, but I'm a fan of "champion comes out last."

(It PISSES me off when CM Punk has a match in the middle of the show and John Cena closes it. You're telling the fans what the pecking order is, and the only way to change the pecking order is to change the pecking order and STICK with it, instead of panicking because a segment is down for a week or two)

Thanks for appreciating it :) I did it for the Shattered Dreams Showcase as well and decided I wanted it to stick around. I agree that the Champions should get top billing in the fed so why shouldn't all their promos come at the end.
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Obviously you discriminated against Gibson this entire time by not doing it that way. CONSPIRACY!
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Here we go... some in depth thoughts. Warning to the people who cuss... I'm not a fan of cussing. Sorry, I'm not in the Navy, nor the Marines, nor do I do MMA for fun... I'm just a stick in the mud puritanical wanderer.

---> Gibson Hayes
Let’s start right at the beginning… I did not LIKE this RP. I know this is probably going to come off a little puritanical of me, and maybe it is because I am. Did it tell the story? Yes. Did it need to use the language it did in order to tell that story? No… no it didn’t. It didn’t come off as funny or clever to me, it was vulgar and disgusting. It’s not my taste but I can’t deny that it did the job it was intending to do… it built up the story with Hayes and the loss of his title. The handler is a great writer, but he and I differ on many aspects of the game… the use of “colorful” language definitely being one of them.

---> Mannifred Lester
I liked the quality of the RP and it gives me an idea on who the character is. But, if I’m going to be honest here, it didn’t tell me much about what he brings to PVW and where his character is going to go. It didn’t tell me anything more than his original long build up to the introduction. All of this stuff was pretty much explored. I want to see something new, that’s all.

---> Rob Cole
I wrote this… I know what’s in my own head regarding this story arc, but the truth is that I just wanted to write a couple of completely insane RP’s that would be fun to both write and read. Mission accomplished with regards to an earlier review, but I’m honestly not focusing on “Face” or “heel” when I write these things at this point. I’m really not clear on what people believe defines those two sides in their own heads, so I’m writing a character that I would personally cheer for as a fan. If you think it’s Shine or Heat, that’s your own decision dear faceless reader… I’m not going to define it for you.

---> Morgan Shaw
I know who wrote the RP, I know what he was trying to accomplish, but it may have missed the mark by reading some of the comments. D’Lish is a mouthpiece, the wrestler is just posing and flexing and then delivers some truly cornball dialogue at the very end… showing why he needs a mouthpiece. =)

---> Marco Clah
I liked the RP… very baby face with enough of a gimmick to pull him into some interesting angles. I’m not so sure I like the last name “Clah” though… sounds too much like CLAW!!!! Or I kind of think of Stallone saying, “I am the LA…!!!” Sorry, stray thought… but Clah lists some pedigree, some knowledge of the characters, and delivers a classic Rookie Baby Face Blue Chipper promo. I guess I could wish for a little more, but I think what we get is a pretty good introduction.

---> The Platinum Club
WOW!! Let me just say… the dichotomy between the two partners is amazing, but this promo put an awful lot into perspective. I’m not seeing a tease of a break up here, I’m seeing the solidifying elements of fantastic character growth between two vastly different men. Vermeer is being given a lot of credit for the cowardly heel act, but I think that Kruger is equally effective as the cold-blooded killer partner. I think this promo added a dimension to Kruger that some folks were missing… he did not HAVE to destroy the trainer, he wasn’t ordered to, he just did it. There was no joy in it… just some sort of vague notion that the trainer should EARN the money he’s paid.

---> Phoenix
I liked this character when he first ran around here… but his disappearance felt ill-timed. He lost the momentum he was gaining and now he needs to work that much harder to earn it back. He has a good “Sting” –like feel to him, but that disappearance seriously hurt his character. He built a little on his match with Freeman… but it felt more generic and impersonal. I just didn’t get anything out of it but it may be an issue of finding his rhythm again.

---> Adrian Freeman
Building… building… … cuss word. What?!?!!! Seriously? Wow… Not feeling the jazz here.

---> Will Geddings
I don’t know… I started to not like this promo with his dismissive hand to Quartermann, but then he reveals this whole “handout” twist on the promo. Interested in seeing where he goes with that twist.

---> Kevin Quartermann
So. Good. Oh, wow… KQ has quickly risen to become one my favorite reads on every show. His promos are always on target and they always build his character and his opponent. Fantastic stuff here.

---> Talion
Hrm. Parts of this I love, parts of this just confuse me, and the whole thing kind of goes on a little too long… I liked the end, I liked some of the build, but there’s something still missing from this character that makes me either hate or love him. I don’t find either emotion when I read the character… I’m more often left with more questions than answers, and I’m not a fan of the “Lost” television series.

---> Herscher von Donkerhardt
I like the arrogance and superiority. I don’t like the dismissal of the opponent, simply because it really sets a bad precedent: If you win, you beat someone who doesn’t matter. If you lose, you lost to someone who was supposed to be beneath you. But that’s just my personal taste… I liked the “shower” analogy. Decent.

---> Jason Cruise
Casual F-bomb… talking about past accomplishments… talking about walking away without a care in the world… another casual F-bomb… Oooh, very pretty, oh PVW is where Choke artists can accomplish something? I know that was Detsons’ story, but is this character starting off by telling us he’s choked when opportunities fell in front of him? Really? The ending is strong… but why the cussing? Why the casual interest from the character? Why the generic “Cool”? Not saying this was a bad promo, just very dry for my own taste. And I’m not a fan of casual cussing.

---> Gold Rush
Eh. I guess it’s okay for what it is. Doesn’t set me on fire one way or the other.

---> Legacy
Heh… dug this. I think the Von Brauns are definitely a blue chip tag team.

---> The Berserkers
Win or lose, Legacy vs. the Berserkers might be the match to watch. Great classic promo here, good stuff building up a good match between two of the top teams in PVW. Kind of sad the Berserkers don’t have the gold, but whatever. =)

---> Senor Cloak Dos
Not something I’m used to seeing from SCD… not bad, just different. Kind of interesting to see him talking to family, exposing a bit of his life outside the ring and behind the mask. Kind of hoping he drops the mask at some point now.

---> Mike Gionet
It started off strong… but then sort of veered into something it probably didn’t need to be. Not bad, but talking too much about the Father may have done some damage to this characters build-up.

---> Sinister
So much build up here… I think a few minutes less from the Rumble would have served on conserving time, but the impact is obvious. Sinister is on the precipice. Will be interesting to see which way he goes.

---> Chris Hartt
Good stuff… an interesting addition to the character and a way to build up the story on Hartt coping with a bully. Seeing himself as a failure through his nephews eyes may be a good smack in the face for the Paladin… Black and Hartt is my favorite feud, btw. =)

---> Nevermind & Danny Daniels
Nice work. I like this. I like this a lot. Both guys should be proud of producing such an entertaining bit.

---> Derek Weaver
I want to chant “sell out”… and that’s the job that was supposed to be done. This is great heel work… the acknowledgement that he sold out his values, that he’s greedy for recognition, that he’s willing to go back on everything he used to stand for… nothing makes a fan hate a heel more than selling out. Perfect.

---> Uncle Frank
HAHAHAHAH!!! Okay, this was fun. Just a good fun promo.

---> Heath Dawson
Drop the cussin’ bits and this could have been really awesome… but the cussing just doesn’t fly with me, I’m sorry. Lot of what was said did not need the little expletives thrown about, it was just cussing to be cussing. Not a fan of it… never will be. Otherwise, I liked much of everything else.

---> Erich Seiger
I liked this RP… but felt there was one thing missing. Some sort of exclamation point to reaffirm that this guy was going to be on a tear as soon as he hit that ring again. Not sure what that could have been, but it just felt like that one little bit was missing. Otherwise, great RP.

---> Max Weinrib & Sal Mubarak - PVW Tag Team Champions
Heh… funny. I kind of dug it.

---> Supreme Wright - PVW Television Champion
And this had a great exclamation point… I dug it. It was what it needed to be, and that’s a good thing.

---> Christopher Black - PVW American Champion
Brilliant. Honestly, I am in awe of Black and how the handler keeps adding layers. And I think the feud could go either way at this point, without hurting either character… Hartt could definitely move up the card even if he loses, and Black could definitely move up the card. I like how their match somewhat juxtaposed their positions… Black was the bully with nothing to prove, and now Black has something to prove while Hartt kind of has up his aggression.

---> Johnny Detson - PVW World Heavyweight Champion
Nice. Nothing said, everything described, and it was well done.
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Yeah. I'm bitter and angry at the world. It's as if writing is an outlet or something. Oh well. Fuck. Sister Angeline will not be pleased. I hope she took her Meds.
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ProfessorDoran,Sep 14 2012
07:50 AM
Yeah. I'm bitter and angry at the world. It's as if writing is an outlet or something. Oh well. Fuck. Sister Angeline will not be pleased. I hope she took her Meds.

She's looking for the ruler so she can smack you all across the knuckles with it.
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When peoples dreams get shattered it brings out colorful language!
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Uh, that was the whole point of the cursing, Rob. It isn't meant to be funny or clever but hateful and vulgar.
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