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NGIW presents : BLACK Feedback; Friday the 13th Edition!
Topic Started: Feb 14 2009, 06:40 AM (181 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Thunder and Laibach vs. 4 Dragon Divas: Nightmare
Catherine Neville vs. Jaime Lee: Lita
Kenny Freemonte Promo: Me.
Main Event Events: Wiggs
Everything Else: Me.

I will clarify that Adam's victory was storyline-based, hence why he won with a late RP. Other than that, a really good show with a lot of interesting developments. Surely better than your average WWE post-PPV show.

Thots, all?
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Wigumoto
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Beltsmith
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Oh here's the feedback thread.

Interesting show. The Chester/Jaime thing had me totally fooled, that was played well. And the whole thing with Kenny and the mysterious disembodied voice has me intrigued. Hope my little aftermath was ok, I wrote it with a vagueish intro so it would work whether Swytch won or lost, had no idea it was gonna result in a no contest.

No Ghost on the card again this week? I'll write up a promo or something.
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Jo-Jo
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Seems like it's Champions month off or something. I guess Spectationill and Ghost are just PPV-solely quality names now. Not that I'm complaining mind you as it's giving me time to focus a little more so on Catherine. And speaking about little Dark Marie...

Match was a fairly good read. Lots of physical action which is always good mixed in with that raw emotion we've all come to know as "hatred". Not surprised I lost so it wouldn't seem right to complain about that. Though the ending has me a little (I'm gonna be a copycat for words here) intrigued. Maybe it involves Catherine or maybe she was the one night victim or something.

Anyway, I'm off to sleeples as I've just gotten off an overnight shift and I'm hella tired.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snackt smores~
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Drake
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I could have sworn that Jo said he was writing my match.
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triadred
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Outstanding show this week! This business with Chester Wynn gets more interesting as the weeks go by. As for my own match... thank the good, sweet lord this match was decided by a storyline... although I have no idea where this storylin is going. Probably for the best. That way my reaction to things is genuine as opposed to scripted... I hate RPing scripted work!
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Nightmare
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I thought the rest of the show was awesome :) Interested to see what'll happen with LLF and Ghost, seemingly having evened the sides as it were. 'Mo always causes wild shit to happen anyway no matter what he does.
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Lita Maivia
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I had a lot of fun writing Jaime and Catherine's match once I got into it. It always seems I've got all these ideas when I take a match but when it comes time to write it, I just can't seem to get into the mood to write. But eventually I got into things and enjoyed what came out. The Chester/Jaime/Catherine thing was actually a re-write of sorts. I started to write it and it was just not getting down the way I saw it in my head. So I deleted it all and put the match away and then wrote what you see two hours later.

Kenny vs. Brodie was exactly what I expected it to be and not in a bad way. Glad to see Chester was checking on Kenny as for some twisted reason, he actually likes that little runt.

That Kenny promo was really intriguing. Wassupwitdat?!

Loved the main-event happenings. That sneaky Lesbiana. I hope Kennedy gets to wrestle her in a match. I would LOVE to write that one. Heel Kennedy is so much fun. Especially when she's taking on people that she sees as beneath her. And Lesbiana definitely falls into that category. LOL
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Jo-Jo
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Big Daddy Pimp Splendiferious,Feb 14 2009
01:03 PM
I could have sworn that Jo said he was writing my match.

What are you smoking?

No, I did take the match but obviously couldn't get 'er done. It was a series of circumstances that kept me from writing it with the big one being work clearly. The next being me waiting for results which I didn't figure out until the last moment that they weren't really necessary unless they were sent. If they were, clearly they didn't go through. So apologies for the lack of match there.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Drake
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Jo-Jo,Feb 14 2009
07:58 PM
Big Daddy Pimp Splendiferious,Feb 14 2009
01:03 PM
I could have sworn that Jo said he was writing my match.

What are you smoking?

No, I did take the match but obviously couldn't get 'er done. It was a series of circumstances that kept me from writing it with the big one being work clearly. The next being me waiting for results which I didn't figure out until the last moment that they weren't really necessary unless they were sent. If they were, clearly they didn't go through. So apologies for the lack of match there.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~

Boo....I would have written it (and still might actually) had I know that.
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Minister Wighty
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No Ghost on the card again this week? I'll write up a promo or something.


I'm having a hard time keeping up with storylines and such and still booking the cool kids, as it were. Spectationill are uh... still relaxing? After a tough Cube. I'd actually love to have a promo between Ghost and Swytch where they sign a contract that will give both a little incentive while disallowing them to interfere in one another's matches. If you and 'Mo wanna work up a promo like that it'd be great. Just do it up and send it to me and I'll work in some extra lines and contract clarifications from Ofdensen before posting it in the show.
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Lita Maivia
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I'll gladly supply some bitchitude from Kennedy in that segment if you both want. *grins*
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Samoan
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I certainly wasn't expecting the match to end that way, but it was way awesome. Honestly, I had gone over several possibilities in my head about how the match would end. I figured hide would get the win and there would be some chaos afterward, but I was pleasantly surprised to see Ghost and LLF there. And two thumbs in the eyes for Wiggs for writing that bit, twas very good.

As for a promo dealy, I'm down for that, and I suppose I can talk Lita into helping out. She's so lazy sometimes, it's really hard to get her to help with those kinds of things. [/sigh] Oh, wait.
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Wigumoto
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Yay! You both liked it! :D I was worried you wouldn't but yay!

I'm down for some contracty goodness. I know I don't MSN it as much as I used to but I'll try and get on at some point during the week to work something out. In the mean time if you guys have any ideas I'll be checking my PMs here as much as possible.
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