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| NGIW presents : BLACK Feedback; 03-02-09 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 3 2009, 01:38 AM (131 Views) | |
| Minister Wighty | Mar 3 2009, 01:38 AM Post #1 |
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OK, so I did all the shorties, Joe did his promos, Lita did the written match, and that's how it goes. Expect some polls soon regarding the future direction of the schedule and a few other thingst hat have been bothering me. Gods it feels good to breathe. Thots? |
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| Nightmare | Mar 3 2009, 01:55 AM Post #2 |
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Enjoyed the cage match. Nice to see that my effort is worth strong showings from Nightmare even when he loses. The Main event was awesome too. |
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| Drake | Mar 3 2009, 04:37 AM Post #3 |
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So I did like that Carson stays somewhat true to character, as much as he could in said match at least. However on reading the rest of the show, I found it highly odd that Lita's character....abducted Lita's character. I dunno, seemed rather strange and almost as if Lita was creating a storyline feud between her two characters. |
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| Minister Wighty | Mar 3 2009, 05:30 AM Post #4 |
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Odd indeed, but I suppose if she wanted to feud with herself she'd be more than welcome. At least she'd be sure she'd win. *shrugs* Glad you both noticed I tried to sell Nightmare and Carson's characters. I work pretty hard to get those points across in short results like that, so I'm glad they don't go unnoticed. |
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| Wigumoto | Mar 3 2009, 07:56 AM Post #5 |
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Aw first loss, had to happen at somepoint and I was pretty sure it would be this week. I had fully intended for my second RP to be a response to Mo and Lita's, actually focusing on the match, but I started that 'once upon a time' thing and kinda started enjoying it and before I knew it I was making that the RP. It was silly and I enjoyed writing it so I'm not bothered if it cost me. Only thing I will say is Lesbiana got really pwned, which I get, but still, little harsh I thought. |
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| Samoan | Mar 3 2009, 09:00 AM Post #6 |
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I was thinking the same thing when I read the match. Yeah Swytch is crazy and would rather rip her ovaries out and eat them over ogling her boobies, but still. She's something of an accomplished talent. Either way, glad about the win. And for Wiggum, I liked the second RP, I thought it was great. I love Ghost and Lesbiana, they're awesome. |
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| triadred | Mar 3 2009, 11:14 AM Post #7 |
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I got beat by a girl... Anyway, the match read well. I enjoyed it for the most part, although I would have enjoyed just as much focus on Adams talents as there was on Jaime, just because I feel like my work sort of garnered that much fir his sake, but then again that could be my ego talking. I figured if I was going to lose, why not throw me a bone? Jaime abducted by Chester... I knew it! Or, is this some fucked up scheme of Jaime and Chesters that'll suck yet another NGI-dub talent into the mix? Only time will tell... The rest of the show was pretty sweet. I dig Carson just because he says stuff that leaves me bobbing my head like an attitudinal black woman while musing, "Oh no he di'n't!" And because I'm a fan of John Morrison... and Jim Morrison too. Angus beating Rose clean was a bummer. I wanted Rose to RP against me. Dunno what's up with that guy of late. The main event was a little unsettling. Swytch beating Lesbiana in such a way sorta disqualifies everything Lesbiana did in FIW and NGIW of old. |
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| Lita Maivia | Mar 3 2009, 02:11 PM Post #8 |
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I found Adam Wilson vs. Jaime Lee extremely difficult to write for a number of reasons. Firstly, the vibe I got from Adam through MSN was that Adam wouldn't actually want to fight Jaime despite saying so, yet he wouldn't just lay down for her. So I was walking a bizarre line trying to stay true to the character without undermining what Adam seemed to hint at for him. Add that to being frustrated with not getting a result from Wight (which I now know why and completely understand) so I was not in a mindset to write this period. I actually intended to write a full match but after all that went down, I said screw it threw together a shorter results format which ended up not showcasing Adam the way it should've and I apologize. I actually wrote two versions of the match and the aftermath, one involving Adam winning and one with him losing. I actually preferred the version where Adam won and thought that's what was going to go through, though I am ecstatic to see that one of my character was finally able to beat the Great White Hype. The main-event was a nice read. I don't really have a whole lot to add to it, other than if it had fallen on a week where I didn't need to write Jaime's match for storyline reasons, I would've loved to have written that one. Happy Kennedy got her first victory here in NGIW, glad to be working against Wiggs and two of his awesomest characters ever. |
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| Minister Wighty | Mar 3 2009, 02:19 PM Post #9 |
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Lesbiana "didn't get more offense" purely because I was effing tired when I wrote that bit. It was, after all, the last match on the card. I was bound to forget something. Theoretically, had the match been full results you would've seen her doing things. Good things. Lesbiana-y things. But when Swytch found the advantage it was just too brutal and took her to her limits. So yeah. |
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| Jo-Jo | Mar 3 2009, 02:32 PM Post #10 |
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Hey I won and...I sorta won. I was part of the winning equation on the second one there, though Catherine didn't look like a winner after ward. Yeah, though for sure I had that one lost for Team Discovery Channel, but I was at least able to distribute some promos, which brought in a "storyline reason". Truthishly, hectic work schedule had me completely forget about Catherine until it was too late. Also why Spectationill's post was done in parts. Though I still thought it was a nice idea. Maybe a little heavy on the Power Ranger jokes, but seriously they've revamped themselves through conversations I've had during my night shifts. Hey, what else are we supposed to talk about? Work? Pfft, we save that for our breaks my friend. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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