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NGIW presents : Requiem Feedback; For feeding the requiem.
Topic Started: Mar 14 2009, 03:44 AM (204 Views)
Minister Wighty
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PPV Poster: Lita
Short Results: Me
Carson Rayne vs. Jaime Lee: Lita, with help from a certain someone.
Jaime/Grant Promo: The above.
RCR Contendership: Dai
Main Event: Me again.

Feedback for specific RPs upon request. Good job, all. Lots to talk about this event.
Card for Wednesday Night Vice will be posted tomorrow. I have most of it, but am too sleepy to figure out ALL of it.

Thots?
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Wigumoto
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Only read my match so far cos I gotta go to work, so this'll be short.

Well that was not the ending I expected. Would'a preffered a clean win (obviously) but it'll be interesting to see where this is going.

I'll take some RP feedback if you're handing it out. I wasn't crazy about my second one, I was waiting for Mo to RP so I could reply but he left it kinda late and I didn't realise how close it was getting so I was a little rushed with it.
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Drake
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I will take a dose of that RP feedback of Carson vs. Jaime.
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Minister Wighty
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It mostly came down to your factual errors and whatnot. You guys both did a pretty equal job in terms of quality and focus, but she "won the argument" so to speak. Good job. I quite honestly really liked what both of you did. Some of the best stuff on the show, and both of you seemed pretty fervent about what you were saying. Cements my notions for that side thing I've got you doing, Big Daddy Pimp Splendiferous.

As for the dodgy ending to the ME, the frustration you're feeling is exactly what I wanted. For once this isn't some tacked-on weak-ass bullshit regarding my inability to pick a victor. I wanted to continue this Ghost/Swytch feud. I don't think it's really been explored enough, I don't think either character has had enough of a chance to really develop a strong hate-on for the other. Plus there's a bit I'm working on with Ken. You'll see what it is when I RP for the next card. Well, part of it anyhow. It's something I've been carefully building toward for a while now, and I think in the end everyone will enjoy it.

If it makes anyone feel any better the next NGIW title match is absolutely positively going to have a proper finish with no sketchy aftermath. I mean that under no odd circumstances.

EDIT: Oh yes, the RP feedback for Wiggs. I REALLY liked your first one. I love the characters and it was a great portrayal of both of them, as well as an interesting use of the interviewers. You have a tendency to bugger off from time to time (in the past) and I think that makes me forget how talented you really are. Second RP was also very good. Tittered off at the end a bit, but otherwise very solid.
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Jo-Jo
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Wow, what a day. First I have to get out of bed sick a little too early because of stupid ugly work (which was stupid for me to be at in the first place), then I had to do shopping for a few hours right afterward, but eventualkly got home dead tired and instead of just feeling sick I had a headache. Then I find the results. My one thin ray of hope that it would be a good day...dashed away like it was nothing.

That is how I would have felt if I wrote this yesterday when all of this happened, but as it's really the start of my day...I'll let you off easy.

And that's how I would have felt were I still a little on the cranky side. However as I'm not, I'll state that it was a pretty good show. Will be a little honest and say I'm upset to see my boys lose, but that's alright. And I suppose I can follow suit with everyone and ask RP feedback, since it's being given and all.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Drake
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*Shrugs* Fair enough. Of course I would have liked to have won, but the loss is hardly anything that bothers me to be truthful. Someone had to lose, Carson couldn't stay undefeated forever, Jaime won in an underdog babyface manner, and all that combined makes me really ready to move on with the next show. Congrats to Lits.
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triadred
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No surprise that I lost since I only managed to waffal my opposition with one glorious(ly lame) RP. It was hard. I'm thinking of rendering Angus my second string character with the focus falling on The Hype since writing his asshole trash-talk comes a little easier than writing Angus' good natured veteran jive. But we'll see how some things play out... if they in fact play out. No need for RP criticism. I know why I didn't win.

Carson should have won in my opinion. Tough break for Spectationill, but now they're both wounded and motivated and are going to go all Rocky III on the Hucha boys. Congrats to hide. Have fun with crazy Spade! (That sounds racist...) Sucks that Oni didn't have time to RP, but them's the breaks... And Kenny kicks ass, even if he is a bald hobbit. Oh, and the ME was grand.
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Lita Maivia
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I had a lot of fun writing everything that I had a hand in for this show. Jaime Lee vs. Carson Rayne was easier to write than the previous matches I've written or attempted to write. I hope Carson looked good with the offense that I gave him and the ending that I chose was specifically chosen because I thought Drake did a very good job this week and I just couldn't bring myself to write Jaime creaming him with her DDT and pinning him cleanly. After I wrote the ending, I was faced with how to get rid of him for the post match that's been planned since I brought Jaime into NGIW. I decided to have Carson stand his ground against Chester and then just walk away from the whole mess, instead of running away since I think that would've made him look bad. Hopefully Drake didn't mind how Carson was written there.

The post match was easily my favorite thing on the entire show. I know few certain FIW-alum here probably aren't excited or even happy about it but honestly I'm not doing this storyline for anyone else's amusement. No offense and I hope that some people do actually enjoy it, but I'm just personally excited to finally do something with them in an actual storyline. I had more fun writing the Grant/Chester brawl than I thought I would, actually. Pissed off Grant is pretty fun to write. The mini-segment later in the show was just to set up something coming soon.

I knew Chester Wynn wasn't going to win the RCR match and despite really wanting to see him get near some championship material, I'm cool with hide taking this victory. Dai is just awesome in pretty much everything he does and should be given the spot ahead of me, especially when Chester clearly has something else lined up. Though, even if Chester didn't have anything else lined up, I still would've preferred the outcome that was rightfully chosen.

I already knew the outcome of the main-event as Wight and I had discussed this storyline for quite some time now. I can vouch that the next championship encounter will be not have any fishy outcome. So everyone involved should really RP their asses off leading up to that. Remember, it doesn't just come down to how you RP for a certain match but your consistency on the path there as well. Nobody wants a champion that just happened to have one fantastic week while somebody else just happened to have one off week due to outside circumstances.
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Nightmare
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I honestly didn't expect to win because I knew as soon as I put that RP up that that wasn't my best work, especially because it took me so damn long to do it. Just...things with my volunteering and a whole bunch of retarded shit going on with me and my girlfriend caused me to be off my game worse than I've been in a long time, and it's honestly causing me to rethink my position here in NGIW and wonder whether or not I should continue on as Nightmare with all this extraneous shit going on. Nice to see The Boy won though, best of luck to him and Dai in the RCR final. Also, Carson vs Jaime was an excellent match, well written by Lita as always.

EDIT: I'm not thinking about quitting. I'm just thinking about not playing Nightmare any more and just coming up with an entirely new character. I may just keep on going the way I am right now, I am really not sure as it stands.
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Minister Wighty
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Nightmare would've been part of the tough decision I had to make if it hadn't been for the fact that your RP against Spade was so... inaccurate. Check your facts, man. I honestly think you've been doing well with Nightmare and suggest you continue. Just a little more effort needs to be put forth.

As for Spectationill... I love them. The RPs were great, and the extra effort you've put out over the month was fabulous... but Dai and Dan were both on their game this week, and when both of those men are on their game it's a kick in the fucking nuts for their opponents. I'm going to be perfectly honest; sometimes I feel bad for booking people against them. There's a 1 in 4 chance of being absolutely raped. Then again, those other three times, they range from OK to half-there so I guess it evens out. I mean, there are hide Kitazawas and then there are certain pirate-themed characters that don't get a single RP in. Just sayin'.
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Wigumoto
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Second RP was also very good. Tittered off at the end a bit, but otherwise very solid.

Yeah I wasn't loving my second one, kinda rushed it out. Good feedback, thanks. And looking forward to see what's coming with Kenny.

Also, I have a shiny to hand out...

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Drake
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Lita Maivia,Mar 14 2009
10:46 AM
I decided to have Carson stand his ground against Chester and then just walk away from the whole mess, instead of running away since I think that would've made him look bad. Hopefully Drake didn't mind how Carson was written there.

Nope. I liked it as Carson wouldn't stick his nose in other's business for any reason, cause well he is a selfish prick like that. So him leaving the unrelated messy situation alone and not involving himself works for me.

And as I said for the loss, someone had to lose, I am perfectly good with it and have no complaints considering everything that has been discussed concerning the matter. Go Jaime?

Grant returns. Took long enough.

Nightmare doesn't suck.

New Tag Champions....makes me think I need to pay attention to said division a little bit more.

The ending to the main event should have involved monster trucks, that is all I am saying.
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Nightmare
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Maybe that's the mistake I made then.

EDIT: I did enjoy the RCR match as bummed as I was about the loss. The only real problem I had was Nightmare seemed too friendly towards Angus, even though he said that as much as he respected Angus he'd fight him every bit as hard as he would fight Spade.
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Minister Wighty
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CORN HUSKS.


... I mean, uh... Nightmare I tried to have him be respectful and whatnot, because ultimately he's a super face.
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Nightmare
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Makes sense.

...what's with CORN HUSKS though?
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Samoan
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Sorry for the late feedback (and late RP as well) I've been kind of busy. My cousin just moved out of my house and into his own and my dad was in the hospital this past week.

The main event was...interesting. I don't exactly get the whole Kenny thing and I was just informed by Lita that it's at least been going on while I've been back in NGIW, so that goes to show how much attention I pay. Although I just guessed what's going on...I'm still confused. I'm just glad Ghost kept the belt, honestly am, though I wish it was under better circumstances.
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Daisuke
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So yeah, just realised I never posted feedback. Thought I did, but clearly, I didn't.

On the match I wrote, I had no idea what the match was until the morning I wrote it, and even then, I think I was making half of it up. Maybe would have gone for a little blood, but with the barbed-wire match just above it on the card, didn't think it was necessary. Tried to keep Chester looking strong during it, and maybe ought to have got him closer to winning the match, but since under the rules I was using, a table had to be broken before anyone could win, and you know table spots should still mean something. Hope people liked it.

Main Event would have been shiny, but it was too slick with blood. Not that I'm complaining, Pro-wrestling is made great by Blood and Hatred. But Kenny! What have have you done? Guess he had to get fed up of the shit some time.

^_^
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