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NGIW : BLACK Feedback!; Hooray!
Topic Started: May 4 2009, 01:57 AM (146 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Sorry 'bout another rough weekend with results. I swear it becomes show work and everybody develops mysterious diseases and shit.

Brandie's fine, thanks to those who were kind enough to offer their support. She's just got a stomach virus that I pray to Cthulhu doesn't infect me.

Lita did up the card pics (as always) and the main event ('cuz she rocks). If I get Joe's match I'll work it in, but if not I understand entirely.

So yeah, full card up tomorrow after I confirm a detail or two.

Thots?
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Samoan
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I'm a little confused at the ending to the tag match where Lesbiana pinned Nicolette, I think it was. When I was reading it, I thought Swytch and Lesbiana were the "legal" participants, then things got all crazy and it ended with Lesbiana getting the pin on Nicolette.

Anyways, it was a decent match, I think everybody stuck their nose in at some point. Big ups to Lita for taking the match, rough deal having to fit 8 people into a match. Another negative mark on Swytch's record since my "big comeback", so I guess I need to try a little harder in the RP department.
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Drake
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I didn't even realize that Brandy was sick. Sorry to hear.

I liked the chaos at the end, it made things interesting. Also I liked the fact that it was Jaime that took out Carson at the end. I like feud build ups.
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Mizery_Made
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Whether it was intentional or not, I actually liked the touch at the end involving the pin. These 'cluster-fuck tags' can be hard to control for a referee, especially when they actually turn into a 'cluster-fuck.' Even the WWE runs spots like this, where things break down and in the end, someone gets pinned that wasn't "in the match." I think it adds a touch of realism, since people can make mistakes, thus it's not completely out of the question for the referee to forget who the legal participants were, and thus ends up counting the first fall and going with those two as the legal participants.

I must say I was a little surprised to see "Ghost & co." come out on top this week, not that I'm complaining or anything. Wigs & Lits really put out some effort for the match though, so it's nice to see their work pay off for them.

The aftermatch? I hated it... stupid Chester. In all actuality, I think the aftermath fit perfectly. Swytch & Ghost were already set, so it made sense for Ken to be put over in the aftermath in an attempt to get added to the card like he mentioned in his RP. I felt the Chester stuff coming too, because where things stood last week, there wasn't much need for a match at the PPV because the "face already got their revenge," so I knew Lits would have something up her sleeve for Chester this week to continue things into the PPV match. Still don't have to like it though... *grumbles*

I don't think I read anything else, since I think they were all shorts, but congrats to the other victors this week. While I didn't say it the other night when it was posted, I was wishing Brandie well in my thoughts, you say she's fine and I hope she stays that way, as well as wish the best to you in keeping the virus away from you.

I might be forgetting to say something... but... I can't think of anything else, so... yeah.
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Drake
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Oh another thing I wanted to mention. Not that I am judging or trying to tell Lits what to do, as her graphic skills far out surpass mine; but while I really like the graphics she made, I think it would have been a little cooler with like an "A" in the top left corner of Carson's or a "Q" in Jaime's. You know like playing cards or such. I dunno, that's what they remind me of when I look at them, I guess it's just in my mind. Still top notch though.
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Minister Wighty
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The main event was difficult to decide. Team Swytch put out a few pretty good RPs, but Team Ghost put out what was probably better. I don't think it's the fault of any individual on either team that their team won or lost, but the combined effort of everyone on the team. So don't any one person go blaming themselves/getting a big head.

Besides that I was a little pressed for time. Tired, stressed, and wanted to get the show up. I'm not apologizing or making excuses, just letting everyone know what's up.
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Wigumoto
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Really enjoyed the ME. I'll be honest I didn't click till I read Mo's post up there that Lesbiana wasn't the legal person, I was just way too psyched to see her pick up the win for her team. She's just so awesome! Her and Ghost's involvement throughout was great, as was the whole match. Chaotic cluster-fuck? Maybe, but that's what makes it fun.

Oh and I love the PPV graphics, they're almost as awesome as Lesbiana, but one question: Did you use Brea Grant for Ghost's rep, cos it didn't look like her. Might just be me.

Also feel better Brandie, didn't know you was sick or I woulda said summat earlier.
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Mizery_Made
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Been since this morning since I read it, but I believe Lesbiana was actually legal, while she pinned a non-legal Nicolette. Also, that looks like Brea to me, Wigs.
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Wigumoto
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Mizery_Made,May 4 2009
02:39 PM
Been since this morning since I read it, but I believe Lesbiana was actually legal, while she pinned a non-legal Nicolette.

Pfft, who cares, she got the pin! :D
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Lita Maivia
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D'oh! I wish I had thought about putting burnt As or Qs into the cards now. That's a brilliant idea, Drake!

The main event was pretty fun to write, actually. I was afraid someone got seriously short-changed and/or someone else got more spotlight than they should've. But I loved what I wrote and I feel that it progressed all the PPV angles as well as set the seeds for some future rivalries. I'm glad to see the Lesbiana victory get used as I think Wiggs really earned it this week and the Lesbiana character can benefit a lot from this victory. As far as Lesbiana pinning the illegal participant, it was the easiest way to end things as Lesbiana got a pretty good beat down (with the whole bullseye her as a result of being Ghost's girlfriend) and I didn't want to it to be like she just popped back up and dominated into victory. Hence she nailed her finisher and basically just fell into a cover. With all the chaos, the referee most likely just wanted to end things before it got too out of hand (at least that's what I would do as a referee, though if I was a referee I'd never work in NGIW as it'd scare the hell outta me, lol.)

As far as the Chester stuff that Kain didn't like... if anyone cares, it'll actually be explained in an RP soon.
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Nightmare
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Wow, I wasn't aware that Brandie was sick, Wight. You say she's OK which is always good, I hope the both of you guys stay healthy. The eight man tag match was awesome, and not to say I didn't like the aftermath with Chester, just that I was confus by it. Ah well, I'll be waiting with bated breath for Lita's explanatory RP.
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