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Wednesday Night Vice Feedback; Late, it's great!
Topic Started: Aug 20 2009, 08:55 PM (174 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Short results by me, promos by the obvious, written match by Lita.

Sorry again for everything being so late, but you know what was up. Card to follow soon.

Thots?
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Jo-Jo
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Maybe it's just me, but suck sure seems to follow you around on show posting dates. Not that I'm insinuating anything, other than the fact that it must suck being you around those days. That said, you might want to plan ahead for next Sunday or whenever the show is going to be.

Lita's match to which she written, I'm too lazy to backspace my way out of a sentence fragment, was well written. Kinda hoping Vicky wouldn't get involved, though remained silent about it but got it still which is good. Kinda forgot about Roxie's style until it was brought up during the match, which was another good thing there. Though I am a little surprised to see her lose. And while I'm sure I can guess why, I'd rather hear a reason from the top in any medium and stuff.

So yeah, other than that though I guess I'm done 'til a card comes up and such. Which'll hopefully be up by the time I finish here.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Minister Wighty
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It was a difficult decision. At this point I forget why I erred on that side, but I'm sure it was a good reason.
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Lita Maivia
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When you gave me the match result, you said that Jo had some funny RPs but they were short and really didn't have a lot to do with anything. So that's all the input I have, not sure if there were other reasons that were kept private.

I had a lot of fun writing the Lumberjill Match. Though Jaime and Roxie have had so many encounters, they're still fun to write. Even though this one wasn't specifically about the Jaime/Roxie history, it was nicely convenient after Roxie won contendership.

I'm really enjoying the whole tangled web that is Jaime and Lesbiana's friendship, Lesbiana and Ghost's trouble relationship, Jaime and Ghost's little rivalry and the Ghost/Grant history that's been building recently between the four of them. I can't wait to see where it builds to.

Surprised to see Chester's team win in the main-event. I hope that doesn't mean Chester is heading into a title loss at the PPV. Though, I am concerned with my ability to combat Boy's RP skills with Kursur.

Oh. And Tier is disgusting!
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Jo-Jo
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Kinda thought they were lengthy myself and had a lot to do with stuff. Not that I'm complaining, just saying. Though yeah, just means don't lose it 'til I get my next shot.
Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Minister Wighty
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Thanks to Lita's comments, I now know what I was thinking when I judged that match.

1. Jesus, it's late. I need to get Lita these results so she can write the match.
2. I am so fucking tired of messing with this computer.
3. All these RPs are good, and she needs a winner... who should I pick...
4. FUCKING COMPUTER! FUCK YOUUUUUUU!!!
5. OK, well I liked Lita's all 'round but there weren't as many as Roxie's...
6. Maybe we'll try this? ... no, no dice. This? ... again, no. Fuck. I'm gonna have to recover the system from the ground up, aren't I? Time to back shit up...
7. Roxie's RPs were good and funny, but just weren't as focused as Lita's. Even the things they talked about they weren't very focused on, unlike weeks previous where they have been...
8. FUCK YOU, COMPUTER.

So there you have it. Roxie's obviously not out of the running for titles and that sort of thing, and I still think you're doing amazing things, just not quite enough to unseat Lita this week. If she had been up against a similar amount of RPs that you've done over the weeks then, yes, you likely would've taken home the title. But that's not how things turned out.
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Elrick
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Wehay I won, awesome! Thanks for the first win, felt good to rp so strong, felt really good to be back too, so bring on my next opponent.
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Drake
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I have seen a glimpse into the mind of a Wight and I won't lie, I am frightened.
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Minister Wighty
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Please. That's like the pleasant breeze on the outer edge of a hurricane.
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Wigumoto
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The flycore match was great, really enjoyed it, and I thought Roxie looked really strong throughout it despite not taking home the shiny. I really liked how Ghost and Lesbiana were written. I was kinda wondering how Lita would play them but I think she got them just right, especially the bit where Lesbiana shoved Ghost off of Jaime.

I didn't expect to win the ME this week due to the fact that none of my RPs even mentioned it, which I apologise to The Boy for. I really should have lifted my head out of my own internal storyline for at least one RP, but I've kinda become engrossed in it.

And I second Lita, Tier is gross.
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Sqweaktoy
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Wigumoto,Aug 21 2009
06:18 AM

I didn't expect to win the ME this week due to the fact that none of my RPs even mentioned it, which I apologise to The Boy for. I really should have lifted my head out of my own internal storyline for at least one RP, but I've kinda become engrossed in it.

No problem, once I read Mo's roleplay I wasn't expecting to win anyway, dude really hit his stride this week. Besides your storyline is interesting and I want to see where you go with it.

also, Tier rules
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Elrick
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Ok, so I re-read Vice, mainly the Jaime Lee/Roxie match, which was awesome, it really was, a VERY good read and I must add, Lit’s writing skills, seem to have gotten better since I last read a match, was seriously awesome, specially loved have the Lumberjills seem to have had like a person rivalry going on between themselves, the Lesbiana and Ghost thing is just getting better too, seriously awesome stuff to read from Wiggs.

As for the Tier promo at the end... THAT’S THE TIER I LOVE! Fuckin’ awesome stuff, really was, made you think... that’s gross, but damn that’s going to piss Swytch off to no end you barbaric A-Hole, so really awesome stuff, it’s shows like this that make me glad to be back, awesome stuff, can’t wait to read the PPV now, anyways one rp done, time for another.
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triadred
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I dropped the RP ball this week. I threw up something that clearly ha nothing to do with Caire de Loon... and there's a reason for that. But in all honesty, it was something I made a couple weeks ago that was suppose to be on a show, but never did because I got lazy and forgetful. This week was something different though... I was moving stuff from A to B and with work and all that jazz included, RPing got shuffled to the bottom of the priority deck. Plain and simple.

Sorry El.
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Samoan
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Sqweaktoy,Aug 21 2009
10:00 AM
No problem, once I read Mo's roleplay I wasn't expecting to win anyway, dude really hit his stride this week. Besides your storyline is interesting and I want to see where you go with it.

also, Tier rules

Thanks! I actually liked my RP for once, but I have to borrow from Wiggum here. My RP wasn't exactly about the match, or the opponents this week, while it did have to do with Tier, so I guess in a round about way it sort of was about the match. Er, anyways. Tier is fucking groddy. And I don't know about anybody else, but I'm digging the Lesbiana and Ghost show. Ghost is so awesome right now. Oh and I need a friend like Lesbiana, somebody to rock some Guitar Hero with XD
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Elrick
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triadred,Aug 21 2009
11:59 AM
I dropped the RP ball this week. I threw up something that clearly ha nothing to do with Caire de Loon... and there's a reason for that. But in all honesty, it was something I made a couple weeks ago that was suppose to be on a show, but never did because I got lazy and forgetful. This week was something different though... I was moving stuff from A to B and with work and all that jazz included, RPing got shuffled to the bottom of the priority deck. Plain and simple.

Sorry El.

No worries Adam, Life gets in the way sometimes, we'll go at it more this week I'm sure.
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Daisuke
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Sorry about my RP being stupid offensive shit. Had a festival to go to at the weekend.

And yeah, swanky promo there Wightraven.
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