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Devil's Night Feedback; And a temp card.
Topic Started: Sep 7 2010, 12:03 AM (126 Views)
Minister Wighty
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GRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAGH.

I have never had so many problems uploading a show.

*sighs*

People won for obvious reasons people lost for obvious reasons. The only one that might seem odd is the Evil Girls and I will go ahead and outline it out of video kayfabe to make sure Joe is clear on why he lost this week.

Despite the proliferation of RPs, I find the character of Miko boring as hell. Extraordinarily well written, even beyond anything you usually do, but I just can't get into the character. I even love Elaine, surprise surprise, and I've always been a fan of their manager, but Miko is the focus of the RPs. Dai didn't have as many RPs, but his entertained me leaps and bounds over yours. I actually laughed out loud a few times at Kanae's actions, and Koji's as well.

Does this mean you'll never beat Dai or that you should change Miko? Obviously not. You're the guy who does whatever the hell he likes, but my opinion typically matters to you so I figured I'd clue you in.

Great job to all. Below is a rudimentary card that will get turned into a proper card when I feel like fucking with it.

Magical Girl Kanae and KO~JI vs. Tantric Starbase
Bloobath McGrath and Cousin Abel vs. xXx
Lucas Torres and ???? vs. The Blade Runners
The Evil Girls vs. [R] (Mr. Giggles and Spade)

Thots?
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Lita Maivia
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Already watched the show. It showed up on YouTube for me a few hours ago. The first part wouldn't load, so I watched 2 - 4 and then Part 1 started working. Anyway, pretty good show. It was obvious that Wight wasn't into recording the review, though. I don't really have a whole lot to add to things.

Curious what I'm gonna do with Kim. Hoping I can find someone interested in working with her soon, as she is a manager and really needs a client before I can do anything with her.

I'm excited about what's going to happen to Lucas now. He's quickly turned into one of my favorite characters of all time to RP. Unlike all my previous characters, he seems to have a knack for meshing well with the least likely characters, such as hide. That thread this week was so much fun, by the way. Thanks to Dai for bringing hide into that.
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Daisuke
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Where *is* Bloodbath?

Was thinking about Billy trying to set up Yasutora with Kim. Sorta makes sense, he's vain, she's vain. Perfect. They could be all self absorbed and shit together. Maybe it could still work. In the end went with hide hi-jacking the Lucas promo for this week, which turned out to be so much fun; an idea which I gave zero thought to before I did it. Heard someone chewing gum and saying "Probably." in my head, and rolled with it from there.

Finally: Flaming Motherfucking Shoryuken. That has to be the last word on this post, so I'll say it again. Flaming Motherfucking Shoryuken.
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Jo-Jo
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First off, I demand a blooper reel! I'm not sure exactly how that would come about...but I figure I'm due a nonsensical request.

As with the show it was high in energy at the beginning and maybe it was just me losing focus (I was doing other stuff whilst watching) but yeah it did seem to slow down. But you guys pointed that out so I can't have fun throwing out the insults.

Sorta surprised by the result of the tag, as others I had a feeling about. Sorry, Jugs, and Wight...right here, buddy. Yes, I'm giving you the middle finger. lol.

Okay, so now we get to the part where I dissect my own creations so if anyone has read thus far...I figured I'd let you know ahead of time. But since it's right after a PPV I like to generally look back and see just where I went wrong.

Evil Girls: First time is always the roughest with me, as clearly (and constantly...thank you. lol) pointed out during the show. Truth be told I had the idea of using Elaine as an Evil Girl before Miller, Star, and Ino. Actually Elaine was supposed to team with someone from Lana's past, maybe scarecrow, but went with Miko because I trashed the idea of making her a Bad Girl in Catherine's place. I do have big ideas where their past stories go, so hopefully they'll be as impactful as they are to me when I ponder over them. Just a few short notices otherwise from what I've heard.
-Will Betsy return? it's obviously in the cards as to how, at least in my noggin', but the why has yet to be determined.
-This is still Season 1 of Evil Girls, it only went through a cast change. I'm sort of announcing right now that the season finale will take place on September 24th and I'm also planning a few "ohhhhhhh WHAMMY!!!" moments to happen there as well.
-Himeko is pronounced "He-May-Ko". Everyone else, as far as I know, is pronounced as they look. I can't even pronounce half the names I use...I just use 'em because they sound cool.
-Right here is blatant advertising because I figure I'll blurt it out in some medium...future Elaine stuff may start sounding like a certain someone. Not a rip off...okay, maybe a little. But more so a homage.
-Hibiki...refer to Crackerjack.

Crackerjack: Like it was planned. Um...I'm actually kinda glad he isn't booked this week because honestly I'm at a loss of just where to take the guy. Not in ring storyline wise, just...I mean, okay, he's got Nell and all them to go for, but the board is smashed (thankfully to me, because while I believe it was a nice concept it wasn't one I wanted to keep going to) so really, and this isn't a threat or anything, if I can't figure something out for the big guy soon I might just have him rescue Nell somehow (unless she's already dead) and just go about his business elsewhere. Crackerjack, I believe, deserves to go out on a big note rather his multiple and degrading with each time notes in FIW. If this is the case I might see if I can't bring in Hibiki as a "special" soloist.

Roxie: Roxie is...hell, I can't even describe what I did with her to be honest. And that's not even me trying to sell the character and go "Hey, everybody pay attention to Roxie...'cause she's cool." No, I honestly do not know a storyline for her. This isn't her sudden resignation, because I enjoy writing her and I'd like to see how far I go before even Wight says "Okay, tone down". I mean I've got ideas so...I'll see where they go.

You know, this is seeming more so like an advertisement for my characters...what was my earlier mentioned intention of all this? lol Sorry about the sudden change, if there was one.

Okay, I guess that's it. Keep watching the skies and all that.

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Just saw XXX profile...I was gonna guess Vin Diesel and Ice Cube, to be honest, with Samuel L. Action-Jackson as their manager.

Also, how does this tag reality thingie work? For example, in the event that Evil Girls beats the unholy hell out of [R] (spend five minutes bad mouthing my team...lol) what happens? Like...is [R] eliminated completely or what? That's where I'm lost. Or maybe, yeah, it's just I was getting dressed to leave that harnessed my attention span. Also, I'm surprised you didn't mention the obvious...a reality series within a reality series, you've managed to sink the reality series bar to a new low. lol.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Minister Wighty
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Wight...right here, buddy. Yes, I'm giving you the middle finger. lol.


What was that for?

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"He-May-Ko". Everyone else, as far as I know, is pronounced as they look. I can't even pronounce half the names I use...I just use 'em because they sound cool.


Thanks for the tip.

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Roxie is...


Doing just fine. I've been enjoying her lately. Legitimately. Is that because there's not 400 other people around her? Mmmmaybe. Maybe not. The RPs have been fun, though.

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Also, how does this tag reality thingie work?


Single elimination tourney. ... maybe double elimination if I feel it's not going on long enough, but more than likely single.
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T.C.
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really good show. I am really enjoying myself with this character and am looking forward to getting more deeper with him
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Minister Wighty
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The deeper you can go, the better.

Aaaaaaand now you have every right to slap a restraining order on me.
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Jo-Jo
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Minister Wighty,Sep 7 2010
06:45 PM
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Wight...right here, buddy. Yes, I'm giving you the middle finger. lol.


What was that for?

... ... ... ... I forget. But I'm sure it had it's important meaning at the time.

So really...the only thing then that separates this tournament from any other tournament is...nothing? The whole reality angle was just an angle in itself to cause confusion and chaos along with anarchy and good times?

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Lita Maivia
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I'm pretty sure the reality bit is for something entirely different than the tag title tourney. The reality thingie is to name a new NGIW Championship contender, I think.
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Craig
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Hmm thought I'd asked for an extra week off. Ah well. I'll try catching the show when I can, probably this weekend. I don't really have an hour at a comp with sound at the mo.
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Jo-Jo,Sep 7 2010
06:13 PM
Just saw XXX profile...I was gonna guess Vin Diesel and Ice Cube, to be honest, with Samuel L. Action-Jackson as their manager.

I thought Tony Silver. I'm guessing everyone has no clue who that is, which doesn't surprise me.
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Minister Wighty
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Hmm thought I'd asked for an extra week off. Ah well. I'll try catching the show when I can, probably this weekend. I don't really have an hour at a comp with sound at the mo.


You might have. The whole Douglas Greater being back, not back, back, not back debacle sorta fried my mind. As much as I'd like to take you off the card you're kinda cemented in your spot due to the tag title tourney. If you don't get a chance to RP I won't hold it against you. I mean, obviously you'll lose the match, but I won't decrease your standing in NGIW for it.
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triadred
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Watching Wight on camera reminds me of the Blue Meanie and his interview after Hardcore Homecoming where he tells all about that big ol' bully, JBL. I don't know if that's suppose to be a compliment or an insult. I'm calling it an observation. Also, I for one like the tangent banter. it makes the show feel more opinion driven as opposed to two guys who are trying to make an e-fed sound real. Nit-picking the flaws like a couple of fan boys is a hop, skip, and jump away from all those other goofy administrators who try oh so hard to make their feds sound like the absolute shit when it comes to production value.
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