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| Minister Wighty | Sep 20 2011, 09:09 PM Post #1 |
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All righty, sorry about the little hiccup there. Just a reminder to everyone (though the card will have the correct date) Hellraise is taking place on SUNDAY October 2nd, making the deadline FRIDAY September 30th. I don't have much to say this week. I really enjoyed Craig, Will, Dai, and 'Mo's stuff this week. Really like where Adam is going with Brian as well. Everone put in a great effort that put in an effort. If I had to say anything I'd suggest that Mjolnir cut down a bit on the narrative. It's nice to read and it usually conveys a lot, but there's so damn much of it that I frequently find myself slogging through it looking for a point. Then again, adding color to the dialogue helped my tired old eyes a lot when reading, so good job on that. Thots? |
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| Mjölnir | Sep 20 2011, 09:42 PM Post #2 |
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We Live. We Die. We Live Again.
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Well then...Lol. The results didn't really go any differently than I was expecting to go, to God Hand. So there is that. I was surprised by the finish but eh, I'll gladly take it. Not everyday a legend has to put down a newbie by making his heart stop after repeated punches. :P I'll also happily take Joe's final standings, even if he won't. Lol. Overall it was okay, I guess I was expecting more...chaos I think is the word I'm looking for. Also was expecting more Kim...though that might be a good thing. For Joe at least. :P Liked the show, more so considering how drained it seems like you are right now. As far as my RPs go... /Shrugs/ Sorry, I'll try to work on it. I already spoke to Lita about it and it's just kinda my style, I like to write out my character's thought process. Guess it's one of those things where it is far more interesting to me than it is anyone else. Lol. On a side note, thank our resident Crow for the suggestion of color. ;) |
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| Minister Wighty | Sep 20 2011, 10:49 PM Post #3 |
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Don't apologize. Your style is your style. If you're not afraid of potentially harming your win/loss record or e-fed standing on those days where I don't feel like reading walls of text, sally forth. If you do, or an important match comes up and you're dying to win, you know what to do. Besides, when I'm not in a tired-of-reading mood I rather like what you write. |
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| Lita Maivia | Sep 21 2011, 12:43 AM Post #4 |
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Pretty good stuff. Sad that Kim didn't get to do a certain something, but that's how the cookie crumbles sometimes. Really, really happy that Chester got to hug it out with Club. That really cheered him up that Club likes him. Chester is such a sensitive guy, it's not even funny. Except when he's hugging sexy guys like Club, I guess. I thought it was funny at least. |
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| Nightmare | Sep 21 2011, 11:15 AM Post #5 |
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What can I say? Sometimes I'm in the mood for a straight up fist fight. RPing against Dai is always fun, and even though I lost it's not too big of a deal--Priest is really just there for me to have something to do while Owen's away at the DLI. Still, I have a huge opportunity at Hellraise and perhaps the old man got woken up a bit. Good show all 'round. |
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| triadred | Sep 21 2011, 11:43 AM Post #6 |
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Another freaktastic week for RP reading! The Kim/Joe exchanges were entertaining to say the very least... but I'll also echo Wight's comments and say that it is quite a task to wade through the narritive in a Joe RP and come out the other side with the overall story intact. Sometimes I find it a bit distracting, but hey who am I to talk? My RP's are usually flat and confusing... unless they're Brian Mauler RP's, which I'm not too proud to say are becoming a few of my favorite things. I honestly like the "shoot" type promos. It's no secret that I'm a huge fan of the Cactus Jack anti-hardcore promos from ECW... as I liberally ripped them off! So writing the Brian hates politics stuff is quite a bit of fun. A note to include... I'm not attempting to take shots a Wight with last weeks efforts. It's all for fun, and hopefully... and from what I saw in the results... Wight's on board as well. Hope you guys are enjoying it too! |
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