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Hellraise '11 Feedback; Something witty.
Topic Started: Oct 3 2011, 09:31 AM (299 Views)
Minister Wighty
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The actual feedback's in the video. After the credits. In short everyone did a great job, but I always say that so I'm sure that's nothing new to hear.

Thots?
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Mjölnir
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I cheated earlier before class. I saw your post in the favor thread and crept around your guys' Two Nerds account and saw it was already uploaded. So I watched it with minutes to spare to get to class. Lol. :P

Now I'm doing this before I have to go to the hospital, so it may be all over the place.

Onto my first NGIW PPV as a member...

The random Roxie sightings were funny. I'm wondering what it is all about. I think the whole tag team thing.

I was surprised Zero got the duke but it was a pretty even playing field in my opinion. Hopefully after this Edwin can get his groove back and find some momentum. That segment between Drood and the boss might help that, wondering where it's going. Maybe a Round 3 down the line? :P

The releases, Triple X I saw coming, sad to see Tier 3.0 go, I liked the character. Though I do agree it did feel like, especially with Zero around, he had no real place anywhere.

As for the Owl flying the coop...hmmm.../Strokes imaginary beard/

The Giggles/Intensity match was what I figured it would be. You guys did get me for a second, thinking Club was going over. the milk money bit made me laugh. I'm curious to see where both guys go after this, like them both alot. Also wondering if Giggles is going solo or if Spade is going to reappear and they'll make a run at the tag belts again.

Wow, Swytch is such a heel to come out to that song. :P

Match went close to how I figured it was going to go. I did like the great pepper spray/mace debate that ended in a star wipe. Lol. Also liked the bit part Joe got to play in the match. Even if Joe probably wasn't having a good time. Between what Lita's said and this, I'm glad Joe has yet to suffer a Kim Coulter slap. Congrats to Samoan on Swytch getting the Flycore.

The image of Joe, in He-Man attire, carrying Kim in slow motion is too funny.

P.S. I'm sorry your porn knowledge failed you, Wighty. Maybe it's a good thing though in this case.

Liked Joe's match, had all the little notes I sent in so that was good to see. Glad to see it wasn't too annoying for you guys to have to deal with and fit in. :P I had to shake my head at Mauler doing guest announcing for his own match. Simply because I could totally see that happening. Lol. I had two scares too, the first one was when Craig was climbing, thought he might take it. Then when the lights went out and Kursur showed up, I literally said after you guys mentioned it "Oh shit..." Lol. Liked the aftermath too, the match has given me a few ideas going forward.

On a related note, yay! Joe's first title! :D

For a moment there I thought you guys would have to shut off the camera 'cause of Wighty breaking and going into Shatner mode for Lucas/Bloodbath. Luckily it fixed itself. I think one of Wighty's lines summed up this match best. One was fast, the other was hairy. :P Sad to see Lucas lose but I can dig Bloodbath hanging onto the RCR for longer. Guy deserves it with what Triad has been doing with him.

I was glad Wighty and Toy explained the rules before the match as I was a little fuzzy on them. I know I wasn't the only one either. ;) Also curious about the SinTron bit. I had been wondering if that thing at the end of the Evil Girls' promos was something new or something I had missed. Good to see it is the former and not the latter. I think the little well girl would fit in to NGIW too, she'd probably make Flycore at least. Glad to see hide & Sakura retain, like them both alot.

I had to laugh at Wighty when he reminded Toy of the most important promo of the night, just the face you make when you say it.

This was one of the matches I was most looking forward to hearing about. Like with alot of the matches, you guys gave me a pretty good mental image of it. The heart punch exchange sounds crazy, and nasty. The way it was described made me imagine it in black & white with both having overly large moustaches and bowler hats on. Lol. Had to pause shortly after this because I realized I had no idea what the rules were, so got a little lost when Dante just stood around. Neat match concept. The ending is crazy, hope both guys are okay after it. Congrats to Chester, looks like he's beating hide's record.

Ending gave me a "WTF?!" reaction. So mission accomplished. Wondering where that is going too.

So yeah, overall pretty awesome and looking forward to all the stuff that's a result of this PPV and what's to come of it. :)

LOL at Wighty's face about the amount of my RPs. Thanks guys, I feel really good after hearing that. Was a bit surprised but happy to hear such praise from both of you. :) Flattered you guys feel that way about Joe & me coming into NGIW.

Lita is awesome.

Actual P.S. Liked the shirt, Wighty.

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Daisuke
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The Boy. I wouldn't bother correcting his name, 'cept he pronounces KhAiNdAeE~! right. Like perfect.
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I was surprised Zero got the duke but it was a pretty even playing field in my opinion.


Pshaw and fluffernutter. Edwin had that match won if it as purely RP based. It was not. That's all I'll say about it, and I'm surprised I didn't mention it in the PPV feedback, but Craig had that match won.

Glad you liked the show.
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Never heard the term fluffernutter before...

Not sure if I should google that or not...

In any case, ah, makes sense.

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The Boy.


I don't get it.

EDITED NOTE: And now I get it. I wasn't flubbing his name. I was calling him Toy...you know, like his username? I figured either was acceptable. But if not I'll call him Boy/The Boy.
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It's also a fancy portmanteu of "The Boy". Either way, Boy is fine with it.

Fluffernutter is peanut butter and marshmallow creme.
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Daisuke
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I see. Soouuund. Calling him Toy seems a little, I dunno, weird.
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Good to hear. Also didn't think of that but it is.

That sounds strange. Like someone was trying to invent something that would seal a person's mouth for good.

EDITED NOTE due to Dai's ninja skills: I didn't think so. Now if I were calling him Boy Toy...
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Calling him Toy is only strange because off camera, Wight treats him like the gimp from Pulp Fiction. So yeah.

Not sure if the uncomfortableness talking about Swytch, Kim, and rape was genuine or not. If it was genuine, then mission accomplished. If not, then kudos for making it seem that way. Also, I like the silent W in rape. We should make that official for NGIW. Glad to see the storyline was well received, as well as Swytch's part in it. It was most enjoyable RPing him against Kim for the past several shows. That almost comes off like I enjoy rape. I'm going to stop talking about rape now before I'm perceived as a creeper.

Felt good about Dante this week. Clearly that was a mistake. Obviously I'm not happy. Glad Wight liked my Trek line, I figured he'd enjoy it. Don't know what else to say. Good luck to whoever challenges Chester next.

Dumping xXx had nothing to do with their booking. They're boring characters. Didn't like them, too much work to RP them. Had thoughts of trading them in to bring Grim back, but not going to do that now. Doesn't seem like I RP two characters enough, so no point extending myself any further.

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Uhh, yeah, so Feedback on the feedback. I am of the opinion that dusty finishes that keep everyone strong just end up making everyone look a little lame.

That's it. Good show, and such. Having fun with the whole KhAiNdAeE~! thing, but I'm still not sure it's quite what I was going for when I first started. The point is to develop Kanae as a character a but, and that isn't turning out quite like I planned. I still can't do a decent promo with her, consistently. hey ho. There's always hide to go do some weird shit.
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Not sure if the uncomfortableness talking about Swytch, Kim, and rape was genuine or not. If it was genuine, then mission accomplished. If not, then kudos for making it seem that way.


It wasn't. All for show. Honestly as I said in the feedback vid, Swytch has just been right back to Awesome Swytch lately. The details, the actions, the dialogue... it all just screams classic Swytch. Enjoy the Flycore; it is well deserved.

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Felt good about Dante this week. Clearly that was a mistake.


Incorrect. You should feel good about Dante. I would saythe quality of your Dante RPs were on par with the quality of Lita's Chester RPs. It is literally just that there were way more of those equal-quality Chester RPs than there were the equal-quality Dante RPs.

Do. Not. Get. Discouraged.

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I am of the opinion that dusty finishes that keep everyone strong just end up making everyone look a little lame.


They make me feel lame for doing them. It's like... if nobody's going to win, then why am I even making results for this stuff? Yet free-form RP boards (like the X-Men or to a lesser extent Project Purgatory boards) just don't work in the long run. You figure it out, because I can't.
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I will listen to the show as soon as I get a chance, I'm at school right now. Big congrats to Mjolnir, as he absolutely blitzed me with roleplays and I am not talented enough to keep up with him, that much is definitely certain. I hope that Priest did well for what it was, at least.
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My point is: don't get stressed about people losing clean, I guess. Someone does have to win and lose, and if you get too hung up on dusty finishes to protect people, the results mean even less. There are still ways to make people look good in a clean loss.

I dunno, I feel I'm wittering a bit. Maybe I'm gonna nap a bit.
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Incorrect. You should feel good about Dante. I would saythe quality of your Dante RPs were on par with the quality of Lita's Chester RPs. It is literally just that there were way more of those equal-quality Chester RPs than there were the equal-quality Dante RPs.

Doesn't matter how good I feel about Dante. I don't have the time to put up 10 RPs every week like Lita does. Equal quality or not. She'll beat me in sheer numbers every time. I say good luck to whoever challenges next because it makes no sense for Dante to challenge again. Not to mention it's just going to be a losing effort. I don't have the time now to RP as much as her and I'll have even less starting next week or so. I'd rather just focus on the character that has a title, than continue to go after something that's just never going to happen.
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The random Roxie sightings were funny. I'm wondering what it is all about. I think the whole tag team thing.

No, just Roxie being bored. I did have another idea involving her inside Ofdensen's office trying to do something while being scolded for interfering so much...but figured three was enough. Glad she's thus far in the green. I'll try and make her stay this time, what with no Pixie constantly distracting her. That's right, casting the blame elsewhere. Because that's what heroes do.

Little upset Evil Girls didn't win, but oh well. Did feel a little unclean about a "sober" Spice, but didn't want her doing anything too like herself what with trying to play up to her injuries and all. I think using Hex as a rep for Betsy threw me off a bit as she's who I had in mind while writing her. Felt better that way, actually, not so "normal" or level as compared to the rest.

The ladder match only reminds me that I was approximately one RP from winning the title some months ago. Should've just said "screw title hogging, I want it!" Sorry for the late RP and to be honest it was meant to be drunken ramblings until figured the ending. And that brings me to "Jo's Useless Facts! Facts...facts...facts" Most of the time when I write an RP I only have one point in mind, usually something in the middle. I find just having an opening and working from there either produces lousy RPs or really short ones. If I have an ending then it's never as effective as I first tell myself it will be because something changes in the course of getting there. Having a solo point in mind in the middle seems to work as it keeps me focused and then I think on how to close it. I do this a lot over in FIW with Sadovsky, which is why he always tends to just shrug and say a clever remark at the end. The Craig Stevens RP had none of this, it was like the one I wrote for his match with Kursur where things were just going on that didn't add up. I think that's the best way I can write the guy right now. Think not, just do.

As for the rest of the show; is it nice to say I'm glad Kim lost? Or would it be better to say I'm happy Swytch won? Whichever one you choose. Am a little disappointed Dante didn't win as I'd like to see him with the title again. Though...four tries in a row would seem a bit much. I don't know. This is starting to sound like an anti-Lita response, and I like it! lol. No, at least happy that Lucas retained. Nothing against Adam, I just don't like him.

And that's a good closing.

Party on,
Joe.

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No, at least happy that Lucas retained. Nothing against Adam, I just don't like him.


I'm going to assume you're trolling? I don't recall it being unclear... but just in case you're not and to keep anyone else from getting confused Bloodbath won the RCR match and retained his belt... which he won last PPV.
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First, sibling rivalry (as I only think I know what trolling is.). Second, damn. Oh well. Just a moment of stupidity then. So disregard and all that. Sorry.
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I'm going to assume you're trolling? I don't recall it being unclear... but just in case you're not and to keep anyone else from getting confused Bloodbath won the RCR match and retained his belt... which he won last PPV.

Yeah!

Hellraise. Good shit. I wasn't surprised by any of the victories save Zero versus Drood. But since the oucome is based on story-line I won't lynch Wight just yet. That comes later *wink*.

The Midway. I can say with all honesty that this round of RPing was a lot of fun. By the end of it I didn't care who won because I felt good about what I had put out there. That being said, I wish Brian had a stronger showing when he was actually in the match. I'll leave it at that.

The RCR. I was convinced that Lita was going to walk away with this one based on Lucas having a stronger bid for the title. But hey, I'll take the win! It certainly soothed my Midway woes.

Dante versus Chester was better than I was expecting both in RP's and results. I would have liked to have seen Dante win though. Mostly because I'm not ready for this fued to be over yet! But having Chester win again really smothers any kind of come-back Dante could hope to make and waters the fued down. Where does Dante go from here? But don't get discouraged, Mo. I'm a Dante mark. If he had a real t-shirt I'd wear it until it rotted off! You'll come up with something... you'd better anyway! *shakes fist*
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I'm of the opinion that non-finishes/dusty finishes/where everyone wins but not really finishes should be used sparingly. Maybe a draw here, a no contest there, double DQ way over there to build up to an eventual blow-off match. But not too often. I echo Dai's sentiments about your worry over having to do them, Wighty.

I feel, not to step in, Samoan and Lita are equal in terms of talent. If I were you, Samoan, I wouldn't let it get to you too much. Because you two are on such even ground there are other factors that are going to play into who wins between you two. One week she may win because she got more RPs out. Another week you could win because she doesn't get as many out or she has an off week, vice versa can apply too.

What do I know though? /Shrugs/
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