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| Riot Break Feedback; So... Feedbreak? Riot Back? Either works | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 28 2013, 12:56 AM (153 Views) | |
| Minister Wighty | Jan 28 2013, 12:56 AM Post #1 |
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Congratulations to all the winners, condolences to the losers. Excellent write-up by Nir from what I've seen. Boy's doing quality control for me, but the complaints have been few and technical on the tremendous amount of work Nir did to put over our wrestlers this PPV. There are some interesting promos and announcements in this show, as well as some incredible pieces of action. I'll provide feedback on all of that at a later time. For now I will say that I am quite ill and it has given me a rather foggy head not very good for thinking. Hence the mediocre roleplaying this past week. I'll try to get a card up tonight, but it might not make it up before I go to bed. I'll do it first thing tomorrow in that case. Thanks to Nir, Lita, and Joe. Congratulations, NGIW Award winners. Welcome, newcomers. EDIT: Actually, if you have any ideas for matches or any requests, please send them to me. I'll post the card tomorrow morning to give everyone a good ten hours or so to get them in. Thots? |
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| Sqweaktoy | Jan 28 2013, 01:06 AM Post #2 |
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I really liked the Riot match and love the ME. I'm not much for specific feedback, but I did want to put that out there |
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| Lita Maivia | Jan 28 2013, 07:24 AM Post #3 |
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I just spent my first hour at work reading the show... yeah, I'm a horrible employee. I will leave feedback tonight but I am stunned and amazed by so many things on the show. |
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| Jo-Jo | Jan 28 2013, 08:33 AM Post #4 |
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Damn, should've put a little more effort into my "promo". Oh well, basics are there. Planning on doing my own elimination style show to select my second character for here. Just like all the others, each week one gets voted off and all that. We've been through these enough times I figure too much detail isn't required. Honestly not a fan of how Roxie came off this past week. That first RP took almost four days to write and the outcome doesn't even show it. I blame both having writer's block and a cold (not fun writing when you're sneezing four times every ten seconds) so yeah. That, and as Jimmy's RP mentioned, she came off as a bit of a whiny bitch. *sigh* Hopefully what I have planned for her this week (yes, this week, Wight) will shake things back up for her. Foreshadowing it up here, boss. Little treat for those who actually read my rambles. :P Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Minister Wighty | Jan 28 2013, 10:36 AM Post #5 |
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On the contrary, I really liked Roxie's RP this week. You've been pretty consistent about her shit not being TOO weird since she's come back, and I thought Roxie came off as respectful and irreverent, but still a little insulted and her usual odd self. Again, without being TOO odd. So you have MY kudos, in any case. EDIT: Card is up, and subject to change. Certain things I'm not sure if they were supposed to be on this show or not and I'd rather not do it immediately than do it immediately and fuck it up. Low-risk show, but as I mentioned I'm rather ill and it's doing my head in so I could use the breather before we ramp the excitement back up to 11. EDIT 2: Read the show. Great stuff. Quality all around. Some small running commentary...
Without "government" this just doesn't sound right. I mean, who just beats up a mule? ![]() Oh. right. Carry on. Wow. Hell is Repetition. When's the last time anyone saw THAT move? Loved the addition of Calvin and Lioncock. Really made it feel like a Riot match! "Calvin used punch! It was not very effective..." <3 HOW YOU GONNA PICK GIGGLES UP BY HIS LIP RANG!?!? AUGGUGHGHGRORGGGLAGGHL. THUMBTACKTHULHU!!!!!
Class. Great job selling PiG and Nicolette's in-ring gimmicks. Also...
You are so in touch with my priorities.
Another epic line. Really, the whole show had great action and great commentary. Thanks a lot for the tremendous effort, Nir. |
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| Lita Maivia | Jan 28 2013, 01:29 PM Post #6 |
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Really bummed that Kennedy and El Valiente lost their match. I'm not really sure what happened there, to be honest. I had a good time with everything I wrote for Kennedy and thought Will's debut of Valiente was great. I'm not knocking the one (unless I missed more) RP that Adam did with Wilson and Mauler, but I'm just... bummed with two losses in a row and no clue what went wrong. I'm going to start off by apologizing for not fully reading the Riot Match. I read up until the Pirates were eliminated and then I skimmed through to the next match. As it says in my earlier post, I spent my first hour at work reading the show so I had to save time where I could. I was thrilled with the way that the Red Pirates were written and beyond pleased to see that they weren't treated like a complete joke. They are comical in a sense, but I'm glad they were actually written as competent wrestlers because they can wrestle. Hehe. I'm glad Nir wrote their debut as I figure he knows more than anyone (except maybe Dai) what I'm going for with them. Lol. I had so much fun writing their backstage segment too. The Pirates are a fun group of characters to write and I hope the fun is coming across in what I write for them. I thought the ad for the elimination show was Wight greating up for another Fresh Blood. I'm surprised to see the Midway survive, though I'm glad it's that belt over the Flycore. I love Sakura but I prefer the Midway Championship to the Flycore Championship. Can I ask why there are NO characters on the roster when we have tons of belts and as soon as we axe one, everyone brings in tons of characters? I don't know how I feel about the RCR match. It was well written and I enjoyed what was there, but the ending... I'm just not sure where this is going with PiG losing his past two defenses by attacking the referee. It just leaves me with a... feeling. I can't really describe it. Like I'm dying to see a clean win with the RCR no matter how it falls. I had so much fun writing the Kennedy/Joe segment and am looking forward to see where things go from here with what we've got planned with them. The Loser Leaves NGIW Match went exactly as I expected... as I'm sure everyone expected. Still, it was a good match and a great ending to that long rivalry that had been going on. I love that Shoryuken and when it is written so awesome. I am extremely pleased with how the awards have gone. Surprised (yet thrilled) to see Chester win so many awards and Lucas! Yay! So glad that he won Most Talented Athlete for a third year in a row. And Kursur keeps winning attire. Love that! But my all time favorite is the Couple award. It's what it always should be (same with employee). The NGIW Championship match was incredible. I'm not gonna lie, I had a sick feeling in my stomach when I started to read it, fearing which way it was going to go. It was written so great. All this time waiting and hoping for a hide/Lucas match and it did not disappoint. I loved clever Lucas was written, like he was fighting for his life against a giant... though hide is far from a giant. Lol. It's the presence of hide that towers over Lucas. Thrilled beyond belief that he managed to win and keep the NGIW Championship. Sad that hide lost, though. I do feel bad because I like Dai and hide so much. ...oh! And Horus "The Freakin' Owl" Osbourne as the new GM? I told you that would be a perfect role for him! Thank God I was right. Yay! |
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| Minister Wighty | Jan 28 2013, 05:14 PM Post #7 |
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Wight has enough blood. Too much blood, really. Looking to lose a little in the next few months, but I'll keep the pacing slow. |
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| Nightmare | Jan 28 2013, 10:51 PM Post #8 |
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HOLY SHIT THAT RIOT MATCH. Need to read everything later. I am in blinding pain. But THAT FUCKING RIOT MATCH. |
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