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Topic Started: Apr 21 2013, 11:07 PM (178 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Well, that was relatively painless.

Another light card for in-show promos, but between Nir, Adam, and some jury-rigging we managed to fill it out. Thanks to all who RPed, LOTS of great stuff this week. Spade and Roxie had me rolling, but every last promo was a good read. Sorry I didn't RP. Having trouble getting back into such a happy character when my mood's been mediocre at best.

I'll delay the card until I wake up tomorrow, so if there's anything I NEED to book or any requests you'd like to make, hit me up with a PM or let me know here in feedback and I'll do my best to make it happen.

Thots?
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Mjölnir
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We Live. We Die. We Live Again.
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Welp, wrote most of the show. So, there's that. Surprised by some of the people that won. But not in an "How did they win?" sort of way.

Aizawa's DOB was me fucking up on his bio, as he was always intended to be a Hiroshima victim. Believe I even had him mention it the first time he popped up in NGIW. Fixed now though to be the proper date. So, thanks for the reminder of American history, Triad. Even if it makes Bloodbath look silly. :P

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Lita Maivia
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Both my characters won so yay!

I knew Lucas was most likely winning due to discussion with Wight beforehand though I really dropped the ball on that. I had intended to do another RP after Lucas was selected as the opponent and then a promo to go before the match. I suck. Sorries.

I'm a little shocked Los Hermanos won but not at the same time. I struggled with Tremendous all week but actually liked the idea I came up with on the last day and hide is always incomprehensiblly awesome so I'm glad to see Los Hermanos victorious.
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Sqweaktoy
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I loved all the matches on this card, both of my matches were awesome, I love how Diamond came across as not quite as good as Joe, as should be the case, but willing to mix it up out of his league to go to bat for a friend. Also side note, as some may or may not be aware I'm not a fan of Joe Stanton, at all (nothing against Nir's writing, actually Nir being such a good writer may be part of the cause). That said, I really liked the Joe Stanton Stuff this week, it felt so... genuine, felt Like Jo was telling the whole truth and not trying to hide who he was, I like that, a lot. He may have been bulllshitting, but if so, his bullshitting is getting better.

Also that Kill Bill shout out/quote, pure gold.

The Spade Roxie RP was a boatload of fun, I was sad that I had to rush the ending, stupid deadline. Looking forward to more interaction down the line, Spade and team Roxie work surprisingly well together.

The match was awesome. ACE INTO THE NET!!! That's the kind of insane shit Spade does, that was grand, I like that Roxie looked so good in there, she gets a bad deal sometimes as a competitor in violent matches. Holland Looked BEAST, I could practically see him laying waste to the countryside like the burninator, it was wonderous.

Before I move on to the other stuff, can I get some feedback on 'The passage of Time', If it feels too off topic you can PM it to me, Wight gave me his thoughts, but I wanted to hear what everyone else thought, I was writing it and I was like 'this is either really good or fucking terrible'.

Now on to the other stuff, the other Grail match was badass. I am a huge Bloodbath Fan, (do those have a nickname?) and I love Shitto, I really want him and Spade to rip each other apart in the ME of the tournament. I would go into more detail but I have RPs to make :P

The Hermanos/Slaughterhouse match was sweet, I liked the interplay in between the characters and the buried treasure line was great. I of course an a giant mark for hide and Pirate!hide Tremendous is really winning me over too. Slaughterhouse is an awesome stable, but...

The Blade runners Spectre Girls match was obviously a foregone conclusion, but hey, that's what happens when Mace forgets to RP :). Well written for what it was.

The priest Zero1 match was interesting, well written, and a fun read.

Sad Wight couldn't find anything for Vi to say, but Lucas looked vicious in the match, also Nir, That Kursur line was brilliant.
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Daisuke
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I can confirm that hide's heart is indeed at least part mechanical, but it will stop if someone manages to [for example] spike it hard enough. A full upgrade of his whole body ran into a wall when he couldn't find options to replace oxygen & sugar as the main reaction to release energy. Sometimes, there's a lot to be said for evolution.

But yeah, show was a fun read. Some pretty gory stuff going on in that tournament. Fun times.
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Jo-Jo
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I am incredibly surprised by the result of the ME. I thought Will would've walked away with that one. It was a good read. I don't know if Roxie is hard to write in that sort of environment or not. To me, she's like the person brought up on stage during performances. Just kinda stands there and goes with the flow.

Really enjoyed the work with Boy this week and it has me looking forward to Spade's involvement with Eve and Lilith down the road. Kinda thought Roxie came across quite her usual idiotic self this week and was almost tempted to write up that bachelor party, but figured that would've just ruined the week. But yeah, thanks to the Boy and fun stuff.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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triadred
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Meh. My heart wasn't into RPing last week. I'm leaving next week for a month long course and my time was better spent putting all my ducks in a row. Still, it was a great show. All the matches went as I figured they would, and were pretty damn gritty! Good stuff all around.

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Aizawa's DOB was me fucking up on his bio, as he was always intended to be a Hiroshima victim. Believe I even had him mention it the first time he popped up in NGIW. Fixed now though to be the proper date. So, thanks for the reminder of American history, Triad. Even if it makes Bloodbath look silly. :P

A mistake is a mistake, but realize that people use bios for info. If you make corrections that's fine because it's your character, but I think it lacks a certain amount of class to then go and RP about it for sake of making some one else look a fool. That puts a big ol' frown on the handsomest boys face.
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Mjölnir
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triadred,Apr 22 2013
11:38 AM
Meh. My heart wasn't into RPing last week. I'm leaving next week for a month long course and my time was better spent putting all my ducks in a row. Still, it was a great show. All the matches went as I figured they would, and were pretty damn gritty! Good stuff all around.

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Aizawa's DOB was me fucking up on his bio, as he was always intended to be a Hiroshima victim. Believe I even had him mention it the first time he popped up in NGIW. Fixed now though to be the proper date. So, thanks for the reminder of American history, Triad. Even if it makes Bloodbath look silly. :P

A mistake is a mistake, but realize that people use bios for info. If you make corrections that's fine because it's your character, but I think it lacks a certain amount of class to then go and RP about it for sake of making some one else look a fool. That puts a big ol' frown on the handsomest boys face.

Yet equally so, a mistake is a mistake. One shouldn't be trying to actively go punching holes into other peoples' characters. One could've easily chalked up the mistake in the bio to what it was, a mistake. Instead you decided to have Bloodbath try to make Aizawa look like a fool and a liar about something that's a core piece of the character. I find that lacks a certain amount of class to it.

Fair is fair in that regard, if Bloodbath is allowed to do such an action, I see no reason as to why I can't have Aizawa and Zane correct him I.C. It wasn't like I had him openly mock Bloodbath or degrade him for it. In fact, I went out of my way to point out it was a staff mistake and if Bloodbath purely did his homework based on that bio, how was he to know? Unlike Bloodbath, who assumed and tried to make Aizawa purposely look bad.

*shrugs* Just saying.
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Lita Maivia
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Sqweaktoy,Apr 22 2013
01:11 AM
I of course an a giant mark for hide and Pirate!hide Tremendous is really winning me over too.

I just want to say that I take all comparisons to hide as the highest compliment in regards to Tremendous. Despite the fact that Dai created the character *cough* I had no intentions of playing him like hide for the simple fact that I can't even begin to fathom HOW Dai plays hide. He's insanity and that's just not really something I'm comfortable attempting. So, if Tremendous is coming off at all like hide then that's pretty awesome in my book.
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