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Nathaniel Alexander RP's; Feedback, please?
Topic Started: Jun 21 2013, 10:15 PM (133 Views)
Nathan
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So, as I've mentioned a few times in the show feedback threads, I'm having a lot of fun RP'ing this new incarnation of the old Samael character. Having him go back to using his real name and become a new persona altogether is working a lot better for me and it feels like a whole new character, which I am enjoying.

Also as I've mentioned before, I'm kind of going for similarities to Tully Blanchard's style of promo during the time he was with the Four Horsemen and I feel like I'm getting that across but I'd like to know what you guys think about the character overall. Any likes, dislikes, complaints/criticism? Any and all feedback you guys can give would be good and greatly appreciated.
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Minister Wighty
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I don't really have much to say. I guess I'm fairly neutral on the character? I don't dislike him at all, but he hasn't really sucked me in either. You're doing fine. Nothing sensational, but certainly competent.
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BleakInfinity
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I think Wight's analysis of your character is pretty spot on for both of us (at least so far, IMO). I feel like my work hasn't yet reached it's potential and feel that it can improve. I'm having trouble finding the "voice" of the character and everything that I want him to be. I'm not sure how helpful my comments are but I just thought I'd share my feelings as I know we certainly feel similar in terms of our writing.
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Lita Maivia
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Anonymous feedback time! Recently I polled a few members of the board on various characters. Nathaniel Alexander was one of those characters and here's a few reviews snippets on the character...

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"The reborn Samael has been doing really well so far."


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"Okay, I guess."


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"I don't mind the stuff he's done so far. Really to the point. Someone who can take a loss and keep rolling forward with the momentum he's obtained. The kind of personality you could easily see on a wrestling program, or just any wrestling circuit. The kind of character that seems to exhume wrestling in his promos."
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Nathan
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I guess I'm fairly neutral on the character? I don't dislike him at all, but he hasn't really sucked me in either. You're doing fine. Nothing sensational, but certainly competent.


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I feel like my work hasn't yet reached it's potential and feel that it can improve.


Yeah, recently that's exactly how I've been feeling. As you said, Steve, you and I tend to feel the same way about our own writing (aka we hate it all the time :p) and sometimes I feel I could be doing a lot better.

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Anonymous feedback time! Recently I polled a few members of the board on various characters. Nathaniel Alexander was one of those characters and here's a few reviews snippets on the character...

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"The reborn Samael has been doing really well so far."


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"Okay, I guess."


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"I don't mind the stuff he's done so far. Really to the point. Someone who can take a loss and keep rolling forward with the momentum he's obtained. The kind of personality you could easily see on a wrestling program, or just any wrestling circuit. The kind of character that seems to exhume wrestling in his promos."


All of that is actually very encouraging to me. I think as long as people aren't saying "Yeah, you suck, dude" I'm ok with that. LOL!

Thanks to everyone that's given feedback so far.
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