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Thoughts...
Topic Started: Aug 12 2013, 11:10 PM (97 Views)
Pain
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Belt Maker
So I think I've gotten enough RP's out there to ask, what do you think? Is there something I should improve on or whatever.. let me know what you think.
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Minister Wighty
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I'd love to see this character a year from now.

I like the gimmick, I like the personality, I could do with a little less Scott Pilgrim but I'm certainly not going to crucify you (or anybody) for it. Obviously you've got an RCR Contendership under your belt, so you're off to a good start. Keep it up, keep refining what you do, and I think you've got a spectacular character on your hands.
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Mjölnir
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Again, I'm pretty much echoing Wighty. I feel Cody's a great character and that you've both got potential to go far in NGIW.

My advice would be to expand a little on your RPs, as sometimes they're a little on the short side, and try to focus more on his matches. While we've gotten a slice of Cody pretty effectively away from the ring, take us more to the other side. How he feels about other wrestlers, why people should cheer/boo him, how he fits in a promotion, what his goals are.

Also, I feel, storylines and feuds will help this. So, try to work with whatever is thrown your way and also maybe chat up a few people & see if you can't get something going yourself too.
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